~~~~Lafz Ho Rahe Hai Goom~~~~

by Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 14, 2009, 05:20:35 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on August 14, 2009, 11:07:57 AM
Bahut Achhi Tarha Se Aapne
Haal e Dil Ko Bayaan Kiya Hai Pooja Ji
Good Job Keep It Up...

Majid apke comments dekh kar hardik khushi hui hai mujhe.... thanks dear!!
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«Reply #16 on: August 14, 2009, 05:21:46 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 14, 2009, 12:57:05 PM

Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Pooja Ji.. Bahut Bahut Bahut Mohabbat se Bhari Rachna Yahan Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Bilkul Khumaar se Bhari Hui... Qasam se.. Padh kar Maza aa gaya... Bahut Hi Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause Applause


Wo Kahate Hain, Ki Bahut Kuch Mujhse Kahana Chaahte Hain,
Shayad Meri Baahon Me Simat, Toot Ke Bikharna Chaahte Hain....

Izhaar Aankhon Se Karenge Wo, Ya Labon se Iqraar Ka Intzaar,
Bas Yehi Soch-Soch Mere Dil Ke Parinde Chahakna Chaahte Hain...

Sargoshiyaan Karne Lagi Hai Yeh Fiza, Tere Aane Ki Aahat Par,
Ya-Khuda Kaise Kahen, Ki Hum Bhi Tujhpe Mar Mitna Chaahte Hain...!!


**~** Mann **~**






ab apko kaya kahu khumar-e-King!!! bahoot khoob likha hai apne... jawab bhi jalad dene ki koshish hogi.... Khush rahe!!
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«Reply #17 on: August 14, 2009, 07:46:50 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 14, 2009, 05:16:18 PM
Thanks thegrimreaper!! App bhi bahot acha likhte hai.. kuch yaha bhi ho jaata to acha lagta !!!

jaisa aap kahein

usse dekh kar apne aap mein khush
alfaz-e-bayaan dhond raha hoon mian

unke kesh udkar aaye hum par anjaane se
haawaon ko shukriya ke liye dhund raha hoon mein

ye samay aaye na aaye wapas fir kabhi
samay ko bas thaamna chaah raha hoon mien

ek aakhir bhar unke muskurahat ke liye
sajde ki raah chal raha hoon mein..
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«Reply #18 on: August 16, 2009, 06:43:49 PM »
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wah wah kaya baat hai thegrimreaper ji... jaise he waqat mila kuch likhne ki koshish hogi
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«Reply #19 on: August 17, 2009, 11:59:36 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 16, 2009, 06:43:49 PM
wah wah kaya baat hai thegrimreaper ji... jaise he waqat mila kuch likhne ki koshish hogi
shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #20 on: August 17, 2009, 02:13:35 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 08:00:03 PM
Tere sath main,
sanwar rahi hu main
Kahna chahu bahooth kuch
Per jhikjhak rahi hu main

Najare teri utar jaati hai
Dil ke paar kahin
Dekh kar tujhe
Tujh main simat rahi hu main

Sargoshian tere pehlu main
mehka rahi hai mujhe
Dheere dheere teri bahon mai
Pighal rahi hu main

Sansein teri,
mil kar meri sanson main
dehak rahi hu main

Lafaz bhi
Hosh bhi
Ho rahe hai goom…....
Behak rahi hu main…



Lajawab  Applause Applause
Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne di... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: August 17, 2009, 02:14:47 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 14, 2009, 07:03:24 AM
KYA BAAT HAI   POOJA JI......

TERE SAAMNE,
SANWAR RAHI HU MAIN.
TERE DIL MAIN AAG LAGAA NE KO
BAN  RAHI HUN MAIN
PAR MERA MAN TUJHE KAHENE MAIN NA JAANE KYUN DAR TA HAI.

TERI NAZREN MERE ANG ANG MAIN UTER TI JAA RAHI HAI,
DHEERE DHEERE ARMAAN JAGAA RAHI HAI.
YEH TERA MADHOSHI KA AALAM DEKHKAR,
TERI BHAHON MAIN SIMAT TI JAA RAHI HUN MAIN.

TERI BHAHON MAIN KHUD KO PAAKAR
YAHISTA YAHISTA PIGAL RAHI HUN MAIN,
DHEERE DHEERE APNA HAR ANG TUJHPEY
 NISHAVAR KAR RAHI HUN MAIN.

LAFZ BHI HOSH BHI HO RAHE HAI GOOM,
CHAL TA RAHE, BAS YEH HI LAMHA CHAHATI HUN MAIN
 KI IK PAL BHI NA CHODO MUJHKO TUM.

Simply Good cara ji   Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: August 17, 2009, 02:15:52 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 14, 2009, 07:55:27 AM
bahut achche di sach main behkaane wali poem hai

nazre oonse mila kar khud ko bhula beithe
jaane kya kashish thi sudh budh gawaan beithe
kehte thay log ishq ka jaadu ajab hai
aaj aaya samajh main jab dil gawaan beithe
roka oonhe kehne k liye jab dil kii baat humne
toh masoomiyat unki dekh lafzon ko gawaan beithr

aha.... Wah kya khoob likha aapne dear... bahut acche  Winking
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«Reply #23 on: August 17, 2009, 02:18:15 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 14, 2009, 12:57:05 PM

Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Pooja Ji.. Bahut Bahut Bahut Mohabbat se Bhari Rachna Yahan Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Bilkul Khumaar se Bhari Hui... Qasam se.. Padh kar Maza aa gaya... Bahut Hi Lajawab Likha hai.. Applause Applause


Wo Kahate Hain, Ki Bahut Kuch Mujhse Kahana Chaahte Hain,
Shayad Meri Baahon Me Simat, Toot Ke Bikharna Chaahte Hain....

Izhaar Aankhon Se Karenge Wo, Ya Labon se Iqraar Ka Intzaar,
Bas Yehi Soch-Soch Mere Dil Ke Parinde Chahakna Chaahte Hain...

Sargoshiyaan Karne Lagi Hai Yeh Fiza, Tere Aane Ki Aahat Par,
Ya-Khuda Kaise Kahen, Ki Hum Bhi Tujhpe Mar Mitna Chaahte Hain...!!


**~** Mann **~**

It is very very romantic... Ishq pe likhna koyi aapse seekhe.. tongue3
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«Reply #24 on: August 17, 2009, 02:19:17 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 14, 2009, 07:46:50 PM
jaisa aap kahein

usse dekh kar apne aap mein khush
alfaz-e-bayaan dhond raha hoon mian

unke kesh udkar aaye hum par anjaane se
haawaon ko shukriya ke liye dhund raha hoon mein

ye samay aaye na aaye wapas fir kabhi
samay ko bas thaamna chaah raha hoon mien

ek aakhir bhar unke muskurahat ke liye
sajde ki raah chal raha hoon mein..

Very nice creation reaper  Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: August 20, 2009, 07:17:01 AM »
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Nice Pooja Ji
Arj Hai..
aaj phir se yaad unki chuu ke nikal gaye mujhko
sabab ye hai ki mere kaza hone ko hai..
sirf tassuvar ka ye hal hai mujhe saza hone ko hai.
ek wo hai.n ke mud ke bhi nahi dakhtai mujhko..
kudha jane ki aaj phir se kya hone ko hai.
aab ke bar jab bhi use mulakat hogi mere..
mai.n bhi unko dil khol ke dikhlawoo.n ga apana.
ishq kya hai iski had kya hi ye wo bhi daekh chukai hai.n
samjha chuka hu.n kai bar , per kaha.n wo samjhne ko hai.
ek shaam ka bas intejar hai bas ab to yaa mere malik.
bas intejar hi hai kahan wo mera yaar aane ko hai..
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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2009, 07:23:58 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob,beautiful lines,Cara ji,Mann ji,Reaper ji,Diljala ji.
Saahil ji,excellen icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:t
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«Reply #27 on: August 20, 2009, 08:09:51 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 17, 2009, 02:19:17 PM
Very nice creation reaper  Usual Smile

shukriya roja ji hello
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Jiya
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«Reply #28 on: August 20, 2009, 01:27:07 PM »
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wow,, Di bohot achha likha hai aapne,, Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: August 21, 2009, 10:09:53 PM »
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Quote from: diljala on August 20, 2009, 07:17:01 AM
Nice Pooja Ji
Arj Hai..
aaj phir se yaad unki chuu ke nikal gaye mujhko
sabab ye hai ki mere kaza hone ko hai..
sirf tassuvar ka ye hal hai mujhe saza hone ko hai.
ek wo hai.n ke mud ke bhi nahi dakhtai mujhko..
kudha jane ki aaj phir se kya hone ko hai.
aab ke bar jab bhi use mulakat hogi mere..
mai.n bhi unko dil khol ke dikhlawoo.n ga apana.
ishq kya hai iski had kya hi ye wo bhi daekh chukai hai.n
samjha chuka hu.n kai bar , per kaha.n wo samjhne ko hai.
ek shaam ka bas intejar hai bas ab to yaa mere malik.
bas intejar hi hai kahan wo mera yaar aane ko hai..



wah bahoot khoob diljala ji!!
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