!!_Mera HumSaYa_!!

by badnaam_shayar on April 08, 2007, 01:44:57 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #30 on: June 08, 2007, 08:42:21 PM »
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good jon Sangy ji, jaansheen and Yoindia Shayariadabhiki ji!!

Badnaam shayar ji kaya likhu apki shayri ke bare main ... apki her ek line apne app mai ek poori gazal hoti hai... shabdo ko line mai aor line ko rachna mai pirona, app mahir hai!! bahoot hi acha likha hua hai!!

Tum main dekhun khud ko,
khud main tum najar atte ho
kahate nahi hum kuch bhi..
phir bhi sab samjh jaate ho...

Ahsaas ho, khayal ho, khumar ho
ek hi Soch mai, hosh mere liye jaate ho
kahate nahi hum kuch bhi..
phir bhi sab samjh jaate ho..
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«Reply #31 on: June 09, 2007, 11:03:18 PM »
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Waaah Azeem bhai or Yoindia Shayariadabhiki ji aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai....!!!

Rooh se Rooh milne chali dekho.....
Sanam ka Intezaar hai jaise Beech Bazaar me.....

Likhte nahi kabhi hum aam baat unke Khumaar me....

Khayalaat hai yeh Zehem ke mere.....
Ya phir Lafz Jal rahe hai jaise ISHQ ke Aghaaz me......

Palat ke dekhun toh Chand bhi uss Husn pe Chandani barsaata hai.....
SaYa banke bas bhatak rahe hai hum Kismat ke Imtihaan me......

Likhte nahi kabhi hum aam baat unke Khumaar me....!!!!


acha likha hai hamesha ki tarah

kuch apna andaz-e-byaan yaisa hai apki is baat pe.......

Likhte nahi kabhi hum aam baat unke Khumaar me...

ek tera khyaal jab dil me aata hai chupke se...
bad jati hai ek khushi mere gum besumaar mein...

Likhte nahi kabhi hum aam baat unke Khumaar me....

dil kah chuka hai mera tera ho gya hai wo
lagta nahi hai dil mera ab is sansar mein.....

Likhte nahi kabhi hum aam baat unke Khumaar me....

sakhi
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«Reply #32 on: June 09, 2007, 11:09:54 PM »
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Accha likha hai Sakhi...Nice Reply.....!!!!!

Zindagi reh gayi ek Safar ka Aadha Peher......
Par teri ASHIQUI me Gujarte dino ki alag baat hai.......

Yeh toh HarQat hai hamare Khayalaat ki......
Ke lagta hai jaise kisi SaYe ke haathon me haath hai......

Awaara bachi hai yeh Saansein......
Bas ab yahi beete dino ka Hisaab hai......

"NA" keh dete hum kabka Zindagi ko......
PAr teri ASHIQUI me gujarte dino ki alag baat hai......!!!!!!
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«Reply #33 on: June 09, 2007, 11:19:55 PM »
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Apki tareef ek dost se suni maine....yahan padh ke laga ki kabhi kabhi suni batein bhi sach hoti hai.....

Muhabbat ke nashe mein doob kar nikalna nahi aata,
Uske saason ki mehek pe dil ko sambhalna nahi aata,
Kaise samjhe usse dunia jisse iss dil ne samjha hai...
Iss shama-e-muhabbat mein jisse jalna nahi aata...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #34 on: June 09, 2007, 11:25:00 PM »
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Shukriya Amit ji...aapne bhi Kamaal ka likha hai....!!

Gungunata me Geet bana ke tujhe......
Par Kalam ek Ghazal me dhal gayi......

Rangeen see banata me Tasveer teri......
Par Zindagi se meri tu Roshni bann Gujar gayi....!!!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #35 on: June 09, 2007, 11:33:33 PM »
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wah wah.......hey, apko mera real name kaise mlaum hai yaar.....??

Kehte hai muhabbat mein apna hosh nahi hota,
Wo aashiq kahan hua jo madhosh nahi hota,
Aye kaash hum iqrar kar pate apni juban se,
Kya kare unhe dekh dil khamosh nahi hota...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #36 on: June 09, 2007, 11:41:30 PM »
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Kuch hee Minutes me hum Insaan ka poora Profile Nikaal lete hai....abhi aap i think Canada me hai Shayad.... :wink:  :wink:  :wink:


Tareef karun me kya uss Husn ki......
Jo Gairon ke beech apna sa dikhta hai......

Bas likhti hai Kalam meri usi ke Khumar me......
Jiske liye harr Shayad ka Lafz barasne ko tadapta hai.....!!!!!!
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«Reply #37 on: June 09, 2007, 11:46:14 PM »
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Accha likha hai Sakhi...Nice Reply.....!!!!!

Zindagi reh gayi ek Safar ka Aadha Peher......
Par teri ASHIQUI me Gujarte dino ki alag baat hai.......

Yeh toh HarQat hai hamare Khayalaat ki......
Ke lagta hai jaise kisi SaYe ke haathon me haath hai......

Awaara bachi hai yeh Saansein......
Bas ab yahi beete dino ka Hisaab hai......

"NA" keh dete hum kabka Zindagi ko......
PAr teri ASHIQUI me gujarte dino ki alag baat hai......!!!!!!


wah kya baat hai gv



sakhi :D
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«Reply #38 on: June 09, 2007, 11:57:07 PM »
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amit ji kamal ka likha doino baar


sakhi
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thycreator
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«Reply #39 on: June 10, 2007, 12:07:56 AM »
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Kuch hee Minutes me hum Insaan ka poora Profile Nikaal lete hai....abhi aap i think Canada me hai Shayad.... :wink:  :wink:  :wink:


Tareef karun me kya uss Husn ki......
Jo Gairon ke beech apna sa dikhta hai......

Bas likhti hai Kalam meri usi ke Khumar me......
Jiske liye harr Shayad ka Lafz barasne ko tadapta hai.....!!!!!!


Abhi tak toh india mein hi hai bhai....agar visa office walon ki daya hui toh canada chale jayenge......

Wo pyar ka iqrar, tera bhi hai, mera bhi,
Wo unkaha ijhaar, tera bhi hai, mera bhi,
Muhabbat ki intha dekhni hai aaj toh humko,
Dono dil beqarar hain, tera bhi hai, mera bhi.
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«Reply #40 on: June 10, 2007, 12:10:50 AM »
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amit ji kamal ka likha doino baar


sakhi


Thanks a lot sakhi ji.....apko bhi padha humne...kam aap bhi nahi...Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: June 10, 2007, 01:42:27 AM »
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Sakhi, Gaurav, Amit(chalo ji humein bhi pata chal gaya aap ka naam :D)

Bahut mazaa aaya aap sab ka likha padh kar =D>

Kash main bhi aisa likh pata Puzzled !
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thycreator
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«Reply #42 on: June 10, 2007, 11:48:31 AM »
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Thanks a lot Rajbir...........kissi ne kaha hai na, whats in the name, rose with any other name will still smell sweet....tongue3
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Pooja
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«Reply #43 on: June 10, 2007, 01:27:40 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB Majid ji and Sakhi...

Creator ji and Badnaam ji,.... kamal ka likha hai app dono... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #44 on: June 10, 2007, 01:31:30 PM »
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Wah Bahut Khoob.. Amit Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Dooriyan Humaare Beech ki, main Saha nahi Sakta Hoon,
Tumhari Yaad me Din-Raat Bas Tadapta Hi Rahata Hoon.....

Suna Hai Mehndi Laga Rakhi Hai Tune Mere Naam Ki,
Bas Usi Naam ko Talaashne Ki Koshish Karta Rahata Hoon..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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