Mera Mahboob Meri Dhadkan......

by punam on July 16, 2008, 03:54:54 PM
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #15 on: July 17, 2008, 04:55:55 AM »
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bohut khoob punam
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reeta_sharma
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«Reply #16 on: July 17, 2008, 03:13:44 PM »
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gr8
mahboob bahut yaad aate he? read2
padh kar bura mat lagana
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punam
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«Reply #17 on: July 17, 2008, 04:10:08 PM »
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bohut khoob punam

Thanx kaushik ji....


wow punam ji kya baat hai bohat khoob bayan kiya hai ji
lagey raho....

sukriya shihab ji...

gr8
mahboob bahut yaad aate he? read2
padh kar bura mat lagana

Pehle main aap ko welcome karti hun...
ab thanx .. aur haan mehboob ko bhule tab na yaad aayega..kyun hai na..?
its ok main bura nahi mani....
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syednaami
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«Reply #18 on: July 17, 2008, 04:23:52 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm chalo nahi bolete kuch jao...bhaiya kya batayenge main bhi dekhu...


Bekarar Bhaya Bekarar bhaya please jaldi aao...
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punam
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«Reply #19 on: July 18, 2008, 06:18:58 AM »
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Bekarar Bhaya Bekarar bhaya please jaldi aao...

arre kahan gaye aap k bhaiya..hehehe bulao bulao...
par jab tak woh aate hain aap kuch likho yehan...
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syednaami
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«Reply #20 on: July 18, 2008, 10:19:46 AM »
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Kuchh arz karte hain...

Mahboob ko bana kar dil ki dhadkan,,
Humen hua maloom ki pyar hota kya hai,,
Doob gaye unki chaahat men ab hum,,
Na khud ki khabar na duniya ka pata hai..
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honeyrose
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«Reply #21 on: July 18, 2008, 02:37:12 PM »
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khoob likha hai Punam yeh mehboob kon hai Winking tongue3

Khoob likha hai Syed aapne..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2008, 02:43:07 PM »
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uthha ke hath Khuda se jo dua maangi
to us fariyaad men wohi rahte hain..

qalam uthha ke kuch likhna chahati hun
to prerna wohi dete rahte hain...

jab kabhi khayaalon men kho jaati hun
tab tanha mujhe rahne nahin dete hain...

sona chahoon aur neend na aaye
to yaadon men aake sula dete hain....

har ghadi har jagah har pal jahan dekho
wahan woh hi woh nazar aate hain...

unhi se judi hai jaise meri saans
bas wohi is dil ki dhadkan hain...


Wonderful Creation Punam... Applause
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Perfect Replies Syednaami..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #23 on: July 18, 2008, 03:28:11 PM »
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khoob likha hai Punam yeh mehboob kon hai Winking tongue3

Khoob likha hai Syed aapne..

HoneyRose jee,,, aap ka buhat bhat shukriya...

Wonderful Creation Punam... Applause
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Perfect Replies Syednaami..  Thumbs UP

Shukriya Mahiya,,, pasand karne ka tah-e-dil se shukriya...
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punam
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«Reply #24 on: July 18, 2008, 04:50:42 PM »
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khoob likha hai Punam yeh mehboob kon hai Winking tongue3

Khoob likha hai Syed aapne..


Thanx Honey di....hehehe mil jaye toh bata dungi...

Wonderful Creation Punam... Applause
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Perfect Replies Syednaami..  Thumbs UP

Thanx a lot Mahiya ji....
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punam
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«Reply #25 on: July 18, 2008, 04:52:13 PM »
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Kuchh arz karte hain...

Mahboob ko bana kar dil ki dhadkan,,
Humen hua maloom ki pyar hota kya hai,,
Doob gaye unki chaahat men ab hum,,
Na khud ki khabar na duniya ka pata hai..


wah ji wah jawab nahi aap ka...bahot khoob...
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punam
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«Reply #26 on: July 18, 2008, 04:52:51 PM »
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Jab se mahboob ke saath rahne ki lagi hai lagan
Tab se dhadkanen tez tez hone lagi hain

yun to hum din raat baat karte rahte hain
phir bhi baat na khatam hone ki tamanna karte hain...

pata nahi unki awaaz men aisa kya jadoo hai
unki ek pukar se hum khinche chale aate hain...

saath jab hote hain hum khud ko bhool jaate hain
unki pyar bhari baaton men yun kho jaate hain...

dur jab hum hote hain, phir milne ke intezaar men
ghadi ko baar baar takte rahte hain...

unse dur hoke jee pana naamumkin hai
hum juda na hon, khuda se bas yahi dua karte hain....
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Pooja
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«Reply #27 on: July 18, 2008, 05:33:39 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam
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syednaami
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«Reply #28 on: July 18, 2008, 07:42:33 PM »
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Jab se mahboob ke saath rahne ki lagi hai lagan
Tab se dhadkanen tez tez hone lagi hain

yun to hum din raat baat karte rahte hain
phir bhi baat na khatam hone ki tamanna karte hain...
...................
dur jab hum hote hain, phir milne ke intezaar men
ghadi ko baar baar takte rahte hain...

unse dur hoke jee pana naamumkin hai
hum juda na hon, khuda se bas yahi dua karte hain....

Punam Saahiba,,,
Oh ho,,, ab to lagta hai kuchh kuchh hota hai...
Really wonderful,,, keep the good work up...
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2008, 07:50:27 PM »
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Jab se mahboob ke saath rahne ki lagi hai lagan
Tab se dhadkanen tez tez hone lagi hain

yun to hum din raat baat karte rahte hain
phir bhi baat na khatam hone ki tamanna karte hain...

pata nahi unki awaaz men aisa kya jadoo hai
unki ek pukar se hum khinche chale aate hain...

saath jab hote hain hum khud ko bhool jaate hain
unki pyar bhari baaton men yun kho jaate hain...

dur jab hum hote hain, phir milne ke intezaar men
ghadi ko baar baar takte rahte hain...

unse dur hoke jee pana naamumkin hai
hum juda na hon, khuda se bas yahi dua karte hain....


Achha likha punam aap ne, bohut khoob.
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