Shikayatein

by Pooja on February 28, 2007, 02:55:54 AM
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«Reply #285 on: May 01, 2009, 01:11:48 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai DEAD HEART JI aur ROJA SIS.. Behad Pyaara Likha hai aap Dono Ne... Yeh Silsila Rukne na Paye.. yunhi Likhte rahiyega.! Applause Applause


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«Reply #286 on: May 01, 2009, 09:38:19 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 11:04:43 AM
wah ji galat baat kaise maan jaaye... Usual Smile  tongue3

humari tarah kon tumhare nakhre uthayega
tumhari padosan sung ankh micholi bhi jhail jayega

jante hai list hai badi tumahri jab main
magar kon humari tarah shayri se dil behlayega

qasam to kha jaate ho ab baat baat per tum
mar gaye jo hum, kon is kadar apki kasam per vishwaas kiye jayega

Hmm.. Bahut accha Likha Hai.. Wo Isliye Ki Padosan Beech aa hi gai hai.. Isliye Yeh Poem aur zyada Khubsooorat ban gai Hai.. Hahahahaha
Abbbbbbbbbbb...... Jawab Bhi sun Lo.. Kuch Alag hatt ke Hai..!! NaNaNa


Ab Jaan-e-Jigar Padosan Ko Inkaar Kaise Kar Doon,
Wo to Saanson Me Shamil Hai, Juda Kaise Kar Doon.... Winking

Ishaaron se Bulaati hai, Aankhon se Pilaati Hai,
Kahan Tujhme Wo Baat, Kaise Use Khud se Door Kar Doon...

Par Qasam Teri E-Jaanam, Pyaar Phir Bhi tujhse Karta Hoon,
Tujh par Aisi Hazaar Padosan, Qurbaan Main kar doon..!! Giggle Giggle Winking


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #287 on: May 02, 2009, 08:03:39 AM »
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Thanks Vicky bro...

Nice lines Pooja di and vicky brother  Usual Smile
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«Reply #288 on: July 14, 2009, 10:08:21 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 01, 2009, 09:38:19 PM
Hmm.. Bahut accha Likha Hai.. Wo Isliye Ki Padosan Beech aa hi gai hai.. Isliye Yeh Poem aur zyada Khubsooorat ban gai Hai.. Hahahahaha
Abbbbbbbbbbb...... Jawab Bhi sun Lo.. Kuch Alag hatt ke Hai..!! NaNaNa


Ab Jaan-e-Jigar Padosan Ko Inkaar Kaise Kar Doon,
Wo to Saanson Me Shamil Hai, Juda Kaise Kar Doon.... Winking

Ishaaron se Bulaati hai, Aankhon se Pilaati Hai,
Kahan Tujhme Wo Baat, Kaise Use Khud se Door Kar Doon...

Par Qasam Teri E-Jaanam, Pyaar Phir Bhi tujhse Karta Hoon,
Tujh par Aisi Hazaar Padosan, Qurbaan Main kar doon..!! Giggle Giggle Winking


**~** Mann **~**

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Mann ji... kaya khoob likha... Magar last line sabhi lines per bhari hai  Thumbs UP wo kahte hai na ki last line per to Main mar jawab Golguppe kha ke (Gurr bahoot meetha ho jaata hai  NaNaNa) Laughing hard


BACK TO REAL WORK;  Crying Crying

Raho padosan ke ghar, wahi khana bhi khao tum
apne do char nahi, sare saj-o-saman le ussi ke ghar le jaao tum

pakwao manpasand khane usi se, apne kapre bhi dhulwao tum
apne sare nakhre bhi ussi se poore karwaao tum

chale hum mayke na lout kar ab ayege wapis
ja rahe hai hum, padosan sung he jeevan ab bitaao tum
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«Reply #289 on: July 14, 2009, 10:19:02 AM »
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Hahahaha.. Golgappe Kha Ke.. Wow.. Golgappe to Bahut pasnd hai mujhe.. tongue3 tongue3
Par yeh Kya kaha diya aapne.. Padosan ke ghar kaise raha sakta hooon..? Wahan Tumhare Haath Ke Raajma Chaanwal Kaise Milenge..  Crying Crying Crying


Kambakht Padosan ka Kissa Hi Tamaam Kar deta Hoon,
ise Apni Hi Nigaahon se Halaal Hi Kar Deta Hoon...

Na Rahega Baans, Na Bajegi Baansuri E-Jaan-e-Jigar,
Phir Tere Sath Baith Ke Tabla Waadan Karta Hoon... tongue3 Laughing hard

Ab To Laut Aa Dilbar, Apne Mayake se Jaldi Se Tu,
Warna Main Apne Sasural Ko Abhi Rawaana Hota Hoon.....!!! NaNaNa


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«Reply #290 on: July 14, 2009, 10:29:05 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 14, 2009, 10:19:02 AM
Hahahaha.. Golgappe Kha Ke.. Wow.. Golgappe to Bahut pasnd hai mujhe.. tongue3 tongue3
Par yeh Kya kaha diya aapne.. Padosan ke ghar kaise raha sakta hooon..? Wahan Tumhare Haath Ke Raajma Chaanwal Kaise Milenge..  Crying Crying Crying


Kambakht Padosan ka Kissa Hi Tamaam Kar deta Hoon,
ise Apni Hi Nigaahon se Halaal Hi Kar Deta Hoon...

Na Rahega Baans, Na Bajegi Baansuri E-Jaan-e-Jigar,
Phir Tere Sath Baith Ke Tabla Waadan Karta Hoon... tongue3 Laughing hard

Ab To Laut Aa Dilbar, Apne Mayake se Jaldi Se Tu,
Warna Main Apne Sasural Ko Abhi Rawaana Hota Hoon.....!!! NaNaNa


**~** Mann **~**

Koi haal nahi.. rajmaah chawal keliye padosan ka tyaaag.. wah kaya Ashiq paya hai Padosan ne  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


Apni payari padosan ke hatho se he ab to rajmaah chawal khaye
Hum hai mayke main araam se na hume yaha sataye koi

Tabla bajaye ki bajaye ab taan pura ke tarane Laughing hard
hume apni besuri chal na ab dikhaye koi

na ayege hum ab wapis, kar lo ab kuchipuri naach jitna  Laughing hard
sari train baso ki bhi hadtaal karwaaye koi  NaNaNa
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«Reply #291 on: July 14, 2009, 10:41:24 AM »
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Hahaha.. Baut Hi Pyara Likha hai Pooja Ji.. Lajawab aur bada Hi Sharaarti sa jawab.. Applause



Nach Na Jane Aangan Teda, Yehi Mera Haal Hai,
Tere Bina E-Sanam, Na Sur Hai Na Koi Taal Hai...

Padosan Roz Karti Hai, Meethi Meethi Baaten Mujhse
Par Kahan Usme Ras, Jo Tere Labon Pe Mithas Hai...

Aa raha Hoon Aaj, Tujhe Laane Main Ghar Par Apne,
Kyunki Tujhse Hi Yeh Ghar, Aur Tujhse Hi Sansaas Hai..!!



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«Reply #292 on: July 14, 2009, 10:46:54 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot he payara jawab likha hai... dil ko karta hai ek second main Mann jau.. itna pyar... magar apki ek ek ada se wakif hai janab  NaNaNa

Aa gaye wapis to wo he purana thikana hoga
yah padosan nahi to doosri ke ghar jaana hoga

na ho pass mai jo hum, to her sur taal lagta hai
ghar mere atte he her surila taar bhi besura apko lagta hai

jante hai bahoot ache se, rag rag apki se wakif hai
ghar hai humse aor padosano se apka yeh sansaar hai
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«Reply #293 on: July 14, 2009, 10:56:34 AM »
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Hahaha.. Matlab Maan-na Hi Nahi hai.. Ab kya karen.. Doosra Tareeqa Hi Apnaana padega lagta hai.. tongue3 tongue3
Lajwab likh diya Pooja ji.. Bahut hi pyaara likha hai.. Applause


Tu Nahi To Yeh Pinki Pappu Mujhe Bahut Sataate Hain
Mammy Mammy kaha kar, Padosan se Lipat Jaate Hain.....!!

Yeh Padosan Bhi Is Baat ka Poora Fayad Uthaati Hai,
Aur Suno Ji Suno Ji Kaha Kar, Mere Qareeb aa Jati hai...

Meri khatir nahi Dilbar, Bacchon Ki Khatir Hi Aa ja,
Mujhe Na Sahi, In Masoom Phoolon Ko to Gale se laga Ja..!!!


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«Reply #294 on: July 20, 2009, 10:44:32 AM »
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oh ho to pinki pappu bhi padosan ke pass  DOH DOH  koi haal nahi Mann ji  Clapping Smiley   Laughing hard Laughing hard  kaya teer chalaya hai.....  NaNaNa to ab humari bhi sun lijiye....


Pinki, pappu ko bhi apne sath lijiye
padosan ke hath main dono bacho ka hath dijiye

bhaj rahi hu apne bhai ke tinku babli bhi
pinki, pappu ke sath unhe bhi waha rahne dijiye  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa

do din main he padosan ka haal pata chal jayega
dena kisi aor ko, humko yah dhamki na dijiye  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #295 on: July 28, 2009, 10:38:00 PM »
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Lagta Hai Yeh Farmula Bhi Fale Hi Ho Gaya Hai,
Ab To Pinki Pappu se Bhi Isko Bair Ho Gaya Hai..!!  Giggle Giggle


Pooja Ji Yeh bahut Galat Baat hai. Kam se Kam Bacchon par Taras Khao.. tongue3 tongue3
Bahut Hi Mast Likha Hai Yaaar.. Bahut Hansi aa rahi hai.. !!  Laughing hard Laughing hard
Ab Kya Karun..? Ab doosra Paintra Aazmaana padega..  Winking Winking



Meri Hai Qasam Tujhe, Pinki Pappu Ka Hai Waasta,
Ghar Aaja Dilbar, Tujhe Khilaaunga Burgar & Paasta……. Winking

Film Bhi Dikhaaunga, Aur Dinner Pe Bhi Le Jaaunga,
Bike Pe Bitha Ke Tujhe, Poora Shahar Bhi Ghumaaunga…..

Kisi Acche Se Mall Me Shoping Karwa Ke Meri Jaan,
Banaarsi Saari Aur Heere Ka Haar Bhi Dilwaanunga……

Bas Ek Baar Ghar Apne, Laut Ke Aaja Meri Jaanam,
Teri Qasam Phir Kabhi us Padosan Ke Paas Nahi Jaaunga..!! tongue3



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«Reply #296 on: August 21, 2009, 04:22:01 AM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Burger and pasta... too good Mann ji!!  Applause Applause bahoot he payara jawab diya hai... magar Typical Bando jaisa... na ji na aise nahi .. kuch aor sunaye  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa yah dil mange More...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Her qasam ab teri bekaar jaane lagi hai
Padosan per niyat teri her baar behak jaane lagi hai  Crying

Do din ki yah chandini, phir hogi wo he padosan ki baat
Teri yah sari hoshiyaari, ab meri samjh main anne lagi hai  NaNaNa

Na koi shopping, na he bahar chaiye mujhko khana
Such such kaho apni, ki ab bacho sung Nani yaad anne lagi hai  Laughing hard

Nahi anna mujhko wapis, bahoot baar ho chukka yah drama
Meri sakhi bhi ab mujhko “Facebook”, “orkut” per le jaane lagi hai  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #297 on: August 22, 2009, 08:57:11 PM »
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Awesone thukbadi Pooja di Mann ji.. Bahoot bahoot Pyaara laga apna rutna aur mann ka manana.. Waah Waah kya baat hai .. Good Going guys...

BUt has has mera pet dukh raha hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard ,... situation jo aap dono ne create kiya hai padne walo k saamne.. wakai tabile kareef..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #298 on: August 23, 2009, 11:30:41 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 22, 2009, 08:57:11 PM
Awesone thukbadi Pooja di Mann ji.. Bahoot bahoot Pyaara laga apna rutna aur mann ka manana.. Waah Waah kya baat hai .. Good Going guys...

BUt has has mera pet dukh raha hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard ,... situation jo aap dono ne create kiya hai padne walo k saamne.. wakai tabile kareef..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

 Thankyou ! Hats off to you! Swinging

Yeh sab Mann ji ka kiya hua hai...jaisa wo likhte hai main bas jawab dene ki koshish karti hu....

Mann ji jawab ka intzaar ho raha hai... dekhin ki kitne paintare hai apke pass..... NaNaNa
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«Reply #299 on: August 23, 2009, 12:21:10 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 28, 2009, 10:38:00 PM
Lagta Hai Yeh Farmula Bhi Fale Hi Ho Gaya Hai,
Ab To Pinki Pappu se Bhi Isko Bair Ho Gaya Hai..!!  Giggle Giggle


Pooja Ji Yeh bahut Galat Baat hai. Kam se Kam Bacchon par Taras Khao.. tongue3 tongue3
Bahut Hi Mast Likha Hai Yaaar.. Bahut Hansi aa rahi hai.. !!  Laughing hard Laughing hard
Ab Kya Karun..? Ab doosra Paintra Aazmaana padega..  Winking Winking



Meri Hai Qasam Tujhe, Pinki Pappu Ka Hai Waasta,
Ghar Aaja Dilbar, Tujhe Khilaaunga Burgar & Paasta……. Winking

Film Bhi Dikhaaunga, Aur Dinner Pe Bhi Le Jaaunga,
Bike Pe Bitha Ke Tujhe, Poora Shahar Bhi Ghumaaunga…..

Kisi Acche Se Mall Me Shoping Karwa Ke Meri Jaan,
Banaarsi Saari Aur Heere Ka Haar Bhi Dilwaanunga……

Bas Ek Baar Ghar Apne, Laut Ke Aaja Meri Jaanam,
Teri Qasam Phir Kabhi us Padosan Ke Paas Nahi Jaaunga..!! tongue3

**~** Mann **~**

ahaaaa.... kya baat hai... tongue3 Laughing hard
Bahut accha maska mar lete ho.... Laughing hard
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