Tera Yun Iss tarah meri zindagi mein aana !

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«Reply #15 on: August 29, 2004, 01:46:07 PM »
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unka vo loot key na ana mar gaya humko,
berha mey sulagti chud gaya mujko,
ek bar bhi na us bedard ko meyri yaad ahyee,
sang dil tha vo jo meyrey merney key bad meyrey ruh sey unki mulakat bhi na huyee.


naa sulgo etani ki hum ko bhi becheni ,
etani naa bahako rah se ki duniyan ho deewani .
bedard ka silaa na do ,
humen yaad hai wo muhabat puraani
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«Reply #16 on: August 29, 2004, 01:46:46 PM »
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unka vo loot key na ana mar gaya humko,
berha mey sulagti chud gaya mujko,
ek bar bhi na us bedard ko meyri yaad ahyee,
sang dil tha vo jo meyrey merney key bad meyrey ruh sey unki mulakat bhi na huyee.


naa sulgo etani ki hum ko bhi becheni ,
etani naa bahako rah se ki duniyan ho deewani .
bedard ka silaa na do ,
humen yaad hai wo muhabat puraani.
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«Reply #17 on: August 29, 2004, 01:48:47 PM »
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very very nice all shayaris
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«Reply #18 on: September 18, 2005, 09:40:57 AM »
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shukrya amit ji sorry for delay u r reply nice work amit ji.

na yaad kervaow humey vo purai batey,
naa yaad kervaow humey vo mahubaat key ratey,
kuch bacha hee nahi ab humrey beach,
keo kuraydtey hu puraney zakham dard to humko huga mager khushi kesi or ko melygi,
humto rakh key dhayer mey dub jayngey mager humari mahubatt badnam hu jaygi,
na kuradeo puraney zkaham nahi to rakh bhi angar ben jaygi.
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«Reply #19 on: October 03, 2006, 07:36:33 PM »
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Good everyone...!!
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«Reply #20 on: October 03, 2006, 07:37:46 PM »
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Bejaan patharon mein nayi jaan dali
in sookhe hue hotho pe ek muskan dali
Tere chahaton ne in rahon mein meri nayi pehchaan dali

Teri is muskurahat ne diya aisa sila
Apne jahan ki humney ek ek eeint(brick) badal dali

Sochne samjhne layak naa raha dimag
Ke dil ne apni nayi dukaan khol dali

Un ankhon ka kahar, un hothon ka zahar
Ab hamarey liye har dava-daru bekar kar dali

Hotey hue hum iss jahan mein nahin
Ke sarey jahan se naa jaane kaisi dushmani humney kar dali

Teri har ik adaa ka asar, janey kya hua idhar
Tere balon ka lahrana, uss par yun palkon ka jhapkana
Teri Inhi balaon ne ...

Bejaan patharon mein nayin jaan daali
in sookhe hue hotho pe ek muskan dali
Tere chahaton ne in rahon mein meri nayi pehchaan dali


I am digging out old posts...but its really nice to see your work Ricky !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: October 03, 2006, 07:59:26 PM »
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Bejaan patharon mein nayi jaan dali
in sookhe hue hotho pe ek muskan dali
Tere chahaton ne in rahon mein meri nayi pehchaan dali

Teri is muskurahat ne diya aisa sila
Apne jahan ki humney ek ek eeint(brick) badal dali

Sochne samjhne layak naa raha dimag
Ke dil ne apni nayi dukaan khol dali

Un ankhon ka kahar, un hothon ka zahar
Ab hamarey liye har dava-daru bekar kar dali

Hotey hue hum iss jahan mein nahin
Ke sarey jahan se naa jaane kaisi dushmani humney kar dali

Teri har ik adaa ka asar, janey kya hua idhar
Tere balon ka lahrana, uss par yun palkon ka jhapkana
Teri Inhi balaon ne ...

Bejaan patharon mein nayin jaan daali
in sookhe hue hotho pe ek muskan dali
Tere chahaton ne in rahon mein meri nayi pehchaan dali


wah wah!!!!!
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«Reply #22 on: October 16, 2006, 05:21:13 PM »
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Hum to nikle apne khwaabon ka nishaan paane
Khwaab dekhe, na mil paayi thi taabeer kabhi jiski
Kabhi ladkhadaye qadam to kabhi khaayi thokaren
Zamane ka chalan dekha humne, dil toota bhi kabhi
Udaas aankhon main phir ye jugnu chamakne lage
Baithe baithe yunhi aksar lab mere hansne lage
Dhadkanon ne bhi andar bohot shor machaaya
Naye khwaabon ka silsila khuli aankhon ne banaya
Badal daali meri zindagi, badal daale saare ehsaas
Bas ek hi khwaahish ki tum aa jaao mere paas
Hum ko kar gaya hai tera ishq dewaana
Tera Yun Iss tarah meri zindagi main aana!!!
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«Reply #23 on: October 16, 2006, 05:23:47 PM »
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Old Is Gold Talat.... Usual Smile    Khoob likha hai Aap ne aur Ricky ne...
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«Reply #24 on: October 17, 2006, 08:58:58 AM »
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Ricky ji.. talat ji wonderful.... sabney bahut acha likha hai wondeful dosto yeo hi likhtey rahow...
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«Reply #25 on: October 17, 2006, 05:08:29 PM »
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Thanks Aryaan and Sonu ! Yes Old is Gold Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: October 18, 2006, 09:41:08 AM »
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u r most welcome Talat ji...

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Thanks Aryaan and Sonu ! Yes Old is Gold Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: October 18, 2006, 10:16:05 AM »
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Hum to nikle apne khwaabon ka nishaan paane
Khwaab dekhe, na mil paayi thi taabeer kabhi jiski
Kabhi ladkhadaye qadam to kabhi khaayi thokaren
Zamane ka chalan dekha humne, dil toota bhi kabhi
Udaas aankhon main phir ye jugnu chamakne lage
Baithe baithe yunhi aksar lab mere hansne lage
Dhadkanon ne bhi andar bohot shor machaaya
Naye khwaabon ka silsila khuli aankhon ne banaya
Badal daali meri zindagi, badal daale saare ehsaas
Bas ek hi khwaahish ki tum aa jaao mere paas
Hum ko kar gaya hai tera ishq dewaana
Tera Yun Iss tarah meri zindagi main aana!!!


wah wah bahut khoob talat ji.........sonu ji aapka bhi jawaab nahi bahut khoob...........
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«Reply #28 on: October 18, 2006, 03:38:55 PM »
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Bohot Shukriya Gesu !!
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«Reply #29 on: October 18, 2006, 04:07:35 PM »
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yahan sabhi itna acha likhte hai ki thanx kehte kehte lafz khatm ho jaayenge...........very nice ricky ji ,talat ji .........too gud

ladkhadane do kadam mere,ye sambhlenge bhala kaise
likhi hai apni takdeer mai khud jab thonkre humne
.......................@fahi@......................
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