..~~Tujhey Pukare~~..

by HumTum is back on January 04, 2006, 01:23:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 06, 2006, 01:06:29 PM »
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aapko dekh kar sharma jana
Appse nazarein  milakar nazar ko chora jana
Tum na mila tu ghabharahat mein bimaar ho jana
Appse takrakar dhadkhan ka thaaz ho jana


waah waah Anjani ji .. nice one  oke let it continue !!

bimaar hone pe woh aapka davva de jana
deke zakhm kudh hi phir marhaam lagana
walla aap ki adyien bhi to ajeeb hai mohtrama
kudh bula ke gali mein humey aur sharmaa jana !!
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«Reply #16 on: January 06, 2006, 03:10:03 PM »
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good going humtum and meena!!!!

good job anjani_si!!!!


Thanks Pooja ji !!
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«Reply #17 on: January 06, 2006, 05:17:20 PM »
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 oye hoye ... aa gaye oo soneyo  :D   haye mashaalaah kya farmaya hai ... as usaual ..... jaan le li aap ki shayri ne !!!  kuch arz hai gaur farmayiga !!

Teri iss gazal ko hum apne hotoon se gungunayegey
kiya hai jo wadda pyaar ka 'taa umr hum nibayegey
bsa ke rakheygey tumko hamesha apne dil mein hum
ik pyara sa tere dil mein apna hum ashiyaan sjayegey !!

kidda ji :D



wow maine kaha bohot wadiya ji, haal bhi aur apki shayari bhi  :wink:

banaaya hai mere dil me apna ghar jo tumne,
ussi pyare ashiyane ki murat ho tum,
door na hona kabhi humse yeh wada karo aaj,
chahat hai kushiyon ki, meri zaroorat ho tum!
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«Reply #18 on: January 06, 2006, 05:20:10 PM »
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bahoot hi khoobsurat HumTum ji and Meena!!!
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«Reply #19 on: January 06, 2006, 05:56:42 PM »
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meena and humtum

app dono ko kia baatein hum
deewana hoza rahe hain hum
app dono ko dekh kar ab shayari karne laghan hain hum
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«Reply #20 on: January 06, 2006, 05:59:52 PM »
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ashiyana jo hum dono ne banaya
usko dil mein uthara
jo dil mein ashiyana banaya
usko mithi mein samaya
dil ka khwab jo uthara
khwab se haqeeqat banaya
aur jis ko chaha
usko apna banaya
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«Reply #21 on: January 08, 2006, 02:18:06 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai hum tum
can't stop myself appreciating the work
wanted to write few words in reply
but i think you desrve the reply from the one,
this is dedicated to..
cheers!


Thanks a Million Tinda !!! now i would expect some nice poetry from your side as well .. as you see now i got reply from her to whom the poem was dedicated Winking


uski ankhoon mein dekhi hai zanaat ki roshni
uske agosh mein meieny sara jahan paya hai
duur hai ankhoon se lekin paas hai dil ke woh
mere sath hamesha cla uska hi to sayaa hai !!  


thanks humtum good to see you both again to the forum...

kehti hai bahut khat likhe hain usne mujhko
magar likhkar fir unko fada hai
meri khushi ka thikana nahi hai aaj
ki aaj hi uska ek khubsurat khat aya hai
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«Reply #22 on: January 10, 2006, 01:58:24 PM »
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wow maine kaha bohot wadiya ji, haal bhi aur apki shayari bhi  :wink:

banaaya hai mere dil me apna ghar jo tumne,
ussi pyare ashiyane ki murat ho tum,
door na hona kabhi humse yeh wada karo aaj,
chahat hai kushiyon ki, meri zaroorat ho tum![/quote]

waah waah kya baat hai Meena -JI ..  meiney kha mohtrama ...... bahut umda sher likha hai .....  kuch pesh e nazar hai janab ke !!!


waada hai sanam na chodengey kabhi sath tera
ter darr pe sajda karta rehega yeh pagal dil mera
teri rahoon ke sabhi kantoon ko nigahoon se uthayegy
rehega jigar mein hamesha chand sa mukhda tera !!


what say ji :D
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«Reply #23 on: January 10, 2006, 02:10:11 PM »
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waah waah ....... Tinda ji  ... bahut achey .....


khola jo khat uska to betey din yaad aaye
kabhi usne bhi toot ke humey muhoobat ki thi
kyun phir aaj hum ho gaye judda  'e  khuda
humney to har lamha uski ibadaad ki thi !!
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«Reply #24 on: January 10, 2006, 06:26:00 PM »
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humtum nice ji!!!waise meena ji nazar nahi aah rahi kahan hain woh!!!

teri yaad bohat satati hai
woh lamhe bohat yaad atte hai
teri muskan bohat tadpati hai
teri baatein yaad atti hai
aur kya kahoon
mujhe app bohat yaad atta hai!!!
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«Reply #25 on: January 10, 2006, 08:04:20 PM »
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baharon me sargum ka ghul jana;
hawaoon me sangeet sa bajna;
shahed ghol gayi kano me mere;
ye haatho me teri choodiyon ka bajna.

NICE ANJAANI JI ;; KEEP WRITING.
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«Reply #26 on: January 11, 2006, 03:18:35 PM »
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humtum nice ji!!!waise meena ji nazar nahi aah rahi kahan hain woh!!!

teri yaad bohat satati hai
woh lamhe bohat yaad atte hai
teri muskan bohat tadpati hai
teri baatein yaad atti hai
aur kya kahoon
mujhe app bohat yaad atta hai!!!


waah Anjani ji ......  bahut khoob !!! Meena -JI bhi aati hi hongi :D


yadoon se apni yun mitta dijiye mujhey
meiney kiye hai gunaah sazza dijiye mujye
yun to shola e jaan kab ka bhuj chuka hai
gar sulag uthu kabhi to hawaa dijiye mujhey !!  
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«Reply #27 on: January 11, 2006, 05:29:24 PM »
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waah waah kya baat hai Meena -JI ..  meiney kha mohtrama ...... bahut umda sher likha hai .....  kuch pesh e nazar hai janab ke !!!


waada hai sanam na chodengey kabhi sath tera
ter darr pe sajda karta rehega yeh pagal dil mera
teri rahoon ke sabhi kantoon ko nigahoon se uthayegy
rehega jigar mein hamesha chand sa mukhda tera !!


what say ji :D


wadiya hai ji wadiya!  :D

taman aab ek hi hai meri zindagi me,
tere dil me humesha ke liye rehna chahate hai,
hogi na kam mohabbat meri yeh wada raha,
tum bhi mere rehna bas, yeh kehna chahate hai!

 :D
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«Reply #28 on: January 13, 2006, 03:32:15 PM »
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Hum tumhare hai tumhare sanam  :D


Teri har adaa ke qaiil hai hum
meri har saans mein tu shamil hai
tere bina zindgi zindgi nhi hai "Jaan"
teri muhoobat mere ishq ka hasiil hai !!!  
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«Reply #29 on: January 13, 2006, 05:06:33 PM »
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Good going humtum and meena,nice work all of u.
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