..~~Tumhare aks ko apne wajood mein~~..

by HumTum on July 14, 2005, 02:24:16 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 14, 2005, 05:05:21 PM »
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Wah Sandhaya ji............nice one........

Tere iss dard e dil ki tujhe dawa bhi milegi,
Na udas ho aye dost tujhe wafa bhi milegi,
Raat kali ho yahan,lambi bhi ho bhale,
Uske beetne ke baad phir subah bhi milegi...
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«Reply #16 on: July 14, 2005, 05:13:41 PM »
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Subha hi ke intezaar main humne gujari umar saari hai
na hua hasil humko kuch bhi bas mili bekarai hai
abh na hota hi sabr humse na kisi ka intezaar humse
humne tuh maut ko bhi bhulya kahi baar aur usko bhi awajen maari hai
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«Reply #17 on: July 14, 2005, 05:19:19 PM »
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Thanks Sandhya & Thy...
And Nicely written both of you....keep it up
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«Reply #18 on: July 14, 2005, 05:23:31 PM »
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Thanks Sandhya & Thy...
And Nicely written both of you....keep it up
ur welcome Bhambra ji and ..........thanks alot from both of us........
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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2005, 05:29:29 PM »
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Thanks Sandhya & Thy...
And Nicely written both of you....keep it up
ur welcome Bhambra ji and ..........thanks alot from both of us........




Ji?Huh? :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
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«Reply #20 on: July 14, 2005, 09:20:50 PM »
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Thanx a lot bhambra ji....n nice one sandhaya ji...

Tumhe paya,khushi payi,saara jahan maine paya,
Dua karta hu na pade ispar kissi ka bhi saaya,
Bahut tadpa hu din o rat mai ab talak jeewan mein,
Na ho ab rat andheron ki,muddat mein savera aaya...
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«Reply #21 on: July 14, 2005, 09:35:28 PM »
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bohot ache humtum ji! nice poem!!

sandhaya ji, creator ji aur bhambra ji...aap sab ne bhi acha likha hai!! keep it up friends!!

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«Reply #22 on: July 14, 2005, 11:34:15 PM »
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Thanx a lot meena ji...............

Ek tu hi tamanna hai, ek tu hi aarzuu hai,
Jahan tak dekhu mai,nazar aati bas tu hai,
Kab tak rahogi tum mere pyar se anjaan,
Ek din kahogi ki tumhe bhi pyar mujhse hai...
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«Reply #23 on: July 15, 2005, 01:39:55 AM »
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very nice humtum ji,
bahut khoob,kya baat hai!!!!!
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«Reply #24 on: July 15, 2005, 02:15:11 PM »
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aarzoo dil mein hai kya, kya kahoon
gar waqt tham jaaye to bas tumhein dekhtaa rahoon
tumhaare aks ko apne wajood mein aise shaamil kar loon
jab bhi aankhein band karoon, bas tumhein dekhaa karoon

nigaahon ke darmyaan yeh khaamosh silsilay rahein
hothon pe tabassum ke phool aise hi khiley rahein
aur in phoolon ki khushboo se mai youn hi mehka karoon
tumhaare aks ko apne wajood mein aise shaamil kar loon
jab bhi aankhein band karoon, bas tumhein dekhaa karoon

ungliyaan aanchal sambhaale youn hi ulajhti rahein
hawaaon ko choomkar zulfein aise hi sulajhti rahein
aise hi mai bhi ulajh kar suljhaa karoon
tumhaare aks ko apne wajood mein aise shaamil kar loon
jab bhi aankhein band karoon, bas tumhein dekhaa karoon

dhadkano ki beqraari aise hi rukh par bikharti rahe
rukhsaar par chandni pal pal nikharti rahe
aarzoo hai ki is roshni se mai bhi raushan rahoon
tumhaare aks ko apne wajood mein aise shaamil kar loon
jab bhi aankhein band karoon, bas tumhein dekhaa karoon



bohat khoob humtum....and nice work by all.
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«Reply #25 on: July 15, 2005, 02:17:23 PM »
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Thanks a lot Nidhi ji ........  you came here after sach a long time !!!  
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«Reply #26 on: July 15, 2005, 03:10:58 PM »
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sukhriya Creator ji, Meena ji, aur........nidhi ji ........and nice reply creator ji ......

Tamana humne ki hai teri tujhe paane ki
Tujhe hi mana hai apna tere sang jeevan bitane ki
kaise dilwaun tujhe aitbaar meri jaan hai tu
humne tuh khai hai kasam har wada apna nibhane ki
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«Reply #27 on: July 15, 2005, 03:19:10 PM »
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Wah Sandhaya ji..........bahut khoob.....

Ek tamanna humne bhi ki hai ki tu iss dil mein rahe,
Jab bhi bahe tere aansoo mere kandho pe bahein,
Sahara mai tumhe de du,tu mera sahara bane,
Bebaak ho dil ki har bat hum ek duje se kahein.
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«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2005, 03:20:09 PM »
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Thanx Meena Ji, and nice sayeri by all of u friends...

Ab Unse Wafa ki Umind hi kuch aise hai
Jaise kisi saye ko , pani mai bhigona hai!!!
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«Reply #29 on: July 15, 2005, 03:32:46 PM »
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Nice Bhambra ji..........par ye kahin suna hai maine...............shayad issi forum mein kissi ne post kiya hai............i am sorry agar mai galat hu toh........
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