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«Reply #30 on: October 13, 2006, 08:32:23 PM » |
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oho pinku khatarnak shayeri chal rahi hai tumhari bahut khoob dear ek hamari taraf se............
meri aankhon ko jo padh leti hain teri aankhen
dil ki baaaten tabhi sari hi ayan hain tujh par
main jhuka kar rakhun aankhen yahi behtar hoga
jane kya kya na padhen inme ab teri aankhe
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«Reply #31 on: October 14, 2006, 12:56:04 AM » |
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Zindagii ka taweel safar hai
Hazaron gham hain,Hazaron dukh hain
Kahan kehkashaan sii rahguzar hai
Ghame hastii, ghame janaa
Shakastagii ka musalsal toofan
Charon taraf jaise
khada hai wehshat ka azdhaa
Ruston mein jaise muqadar huwa
Narsayon, Namooradiyon ka ghnaa jangle
Aur idher hai faqat!
Ikk sehmaa huwa Dil......
Magar janaa! Mujhe yaqeen hai
Main itnii be yaqeenyon ke darmiyaan bhi chamakta rakhoon gii
tumharii mohabbat ka qeemtii jugnoo
Apne Dil mein Zindah rakhoon gii
*Tumhara Naam*
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #32 on: October 15, 2006, 07:00:15 PM » |
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bahot khoob ....Tabassum.....ZKQ.........
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Gesu
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«Reply #33 on: October 16, 2006, 09:23:19 AM » |
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wah pinki ji bahut khoob........ :D
Kaise kaise Khwab dikha jaate ho tum..
Dikha kar phir kahin kho jaate ho tum..
Kabhi kabhi aa jaya karo is dil ke paas bhi..
Na jaane kyun itna tadpaate ho tum..
ek ek lavz khoobsurat.........simple and gr8
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Gesu
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«Reply #34 on: October 16, 2006, 09:25:38 AM » |
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Wah Kya baat Hai. Bahut Khub Pinkiji.
ye to wahi baat hai........
Dekhne ko khwab jinke tarasti hai aakein;
Raah takte jinki thak gayi ye aakhein..
hai khabar nahi unko humari in tanhaiyo ka;
Jinki yaad mein aksar barasti hai humari ye aakhein.... kya baat hai jai excellent!!!!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #35 on: October 16, 2006, 08:18:14 PM » |
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Kaise kaise Khwab dikha jaate ho tum..
Dikha kar phir kahin kho jaate ho tum..
Kabhi kabhi aa jaya karo is dil ke paas bhi..
Na jaane kyun itna tadpaate ho tum.. bahot khoob Nikki,.......... kaun tadpaata hai.....  Ab to har baat per ro dete hain waakif sood jayan the pehle dil se jaise koi kaanta nikla ashk aankhon se rawan the pehle........
bas sherr hai Waheed..
koi nii tadpaata 
bahut khoob likha hai.. |
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«Reply #36 on: October 16, 2006, 08:19:10 PM » |
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oho pinku khatarnak shayeri chal rahi hai tumhari bahut khoob dear ek hamari taraf se............
meri aankhon ko jo padh leti hain teri aankhen
dil ki baaaten tabhi sari hi ayan hain tujh par
main jhuka kar rakhun aankhen yahi behtar hoga
jane kya kya na padhen inme ab teri aankhe arre Di...
ye to aise hi hain :lol:
aapse achcha to nii likh sakti na!!
Thanx a lot!! |
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«Reply #37 on: October 16, 2006, 08:20:25 PM » |
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Zindagii ka taweel safar hai
Hazaron gham hain,Hazaron dukh hain
Kahan kehkashaan sii rahguzar hai
Ghame hastii, ghame janaa
Shakastagii ka musalsal toofan
Charon taraf jaise
khada hai wehshat ka azdhaa
Ruston mein jaise muqadar huwa
Narsayon, Namooradiyon ka ghnaa jangle
Aur idher hai faqat!
Ikk sehmaa huwa Dil......
Magar janaa! Mujhe yaqeen hai
Main itnii be yaqeenyon ke darmiyaan bhi chamakta rakhoon gii
tumharii mohabbat ka qeemtii jugnoo
Apne Dil mein Zindah rakhoon gii
*Tumhara Naam* Bahut hi achche ZKQ ji...
likhte rahiye..
hum intezar karenge ki aapko aur padh sakein.. |
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«Reply #38 on: October 16, 2006, 08:21:11 PM » |
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wah pinki ji bahut khoob........ :D
Kaise kaise Khwab dikha jaate ho tum..
Dikha kar phir kahin kho jaate ho tum..
Kabhi kabhi aa jaya karo is dil ke paas bhi..
Na jaane kyun itna tadpaate ho tum..
ek ek lavz khoobsurat.........simple and gr8 Thanx Gesu ji...
aapne kuch arz nahi kiya yahan!! |
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«Reply #39 on: October 16, 2006, 08:25:25 PM » |
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Yaad aaya hai phir wo..
Phir hawa mein uski mehak hai..
Mausam phir hua suhana..
Phir Ghata barasne laggi hai..
Yun to akeli hoon main apne aangan mein
Par yun lagta hai jaise
dekhti hain mujhko yahan bhi uski aankhein..!!
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«Reply #40 on: October 16, 2006, 08:44:59 PM » |
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Yaad aaya hai phir wo..
Phir hawa mein uski mehak hai..
Mausam phir hua suhana..
Phir Ghata barasne laggi hai..
Yun to akeli hoon main apne aangan mein
Par yun lagta hai jaise
dekhti hain mujhko yahan bhi uski aankhein..!! TOO GUD PINKY...MUJHE NAHI PATA THA AAP INNA AACHA LIKHTE HO
Main kahan achcha likhti hu..
ye to tumhari achchai hai..
jo ye lines tumko pasand aayin... |
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«Reply #41 on: October 17, 2006, 06:23:29 PM » |
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Yaad aaya hai phir wo..
Phir hawa mein uski mehak hai..
Mausam phir hua suhana..
Phir Ghata barasne laggi hai..
Yun to akeli hoon main apne aangan mein
Par yun lagta hai jaise
dekhti hain mujhko yahan bhi uski aankhein..!! TOO GUD PINKY...MUJHE NAHI PATA THA AAP INNA AACHA LIKHTE HO wonderful Pinky......... very nice wordings........... :lol: |
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«Reply #42 on: October 18, 2006, 04:58:26 AM » |
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kya baat hai pinki ji bahut khoobsurat......
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«Reply #43 on: October 18, 2006, 06:58:57 PM » |
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Yaad aaya hai phir wo..
Phir hawa mein uski mehak hai..
Mausam phir hua suhana..
Phir Ghata barasne laggi hai..
Yun to akeli hoon main apne aangan mein
Par yun lagta hai jaise
dekhti hain mujhko yahan bhi uski aankhein..!! TOO GUD PINKY...MUJHE NAHI PATA THA AAP INNA AACHA LIKHTE HO
Main kahan achcha likhti hu..
ye to tumhari achchai hai..
jo ye lines tumko pasand aayin...NAHI PINKY....AAP SACH MEIN BHYUT UMDAA LIKHTE HO...AAJ SE AAP KE HAR SHAYARI PADUNGA MEIN
Zarur padhiyega...
par iss section mein zara kam likhti hoon main |
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«Reply #44 on: October 18, 2006, 06:59:45 PM » |
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Yaad aaya hai phir wo..
Phir hawa mein uski mehak hai..
Mausam phir hua suhana..
Phir Ghata barasne laggi hai..
Yun to akeli hoon main apne aangan mein
Par yun lagta hai jaise
dekhti hain mujhko yahan bhi uski aankhein..!! TOO GUD PINKY...MUJHE NAHI PATA THA AAP INNA AACHA LIKHTE HO wonderful Pinky......... very nice wordings........... :lol: Thanx Waheed.... Par aap hasse kyun?? Mera mazak udaa rahe hain??  |
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