अभी खत्म कहाँ हुआ है राब्ता अपना

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अभी खत्म कहाँ हुआ है राब्ता अपना,
इस फलक के फलक पर है बाक़ी जहाँ अपना,

कहीं टकराए जो शीशे तो आवाज़ होगी,
जहाँ दिल टकराए वहां होगा अंजाम अपना,

कोई सोया होगा बेशक चाँद लेकर आगोशों में,
कोई जागता है मगर लेकर टूटा मकान अपना,

सफर, हमसफ़र, मंज़िलों के दोस्त,
बढ़ चले हैं छोड़ के निशाँ अपना,

हर आता जाता कहता है ये जहाँ मेरा,
मैं कहता हूँ, जो नहीं है आज, दे गया है मुझे वो कब्रिस्तान अपना.
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2016, 09:59:55 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2016, 10:14:44 AM »
Bahot khub.......
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2016, 11:52:36 AM »
अभी खत्म कहाँ हुआ है राब्ता अपना,
इस फलक के फलक पर है बाक़ी जहाँ अपना,

कहीं टकराए जो शीशे तो आवाज़ होगी,
जहाँ दिल टकराए वहां होगा अंजाम अपना,
Applause Applause Applause Applause

कोई सोया होगा बेशक चाँद लेकर आगोशों में,
कोई जागता है मगर लेकर टूटा मकान अपना,


सफर, हमसफ़र, मंज़िलों के दोस्त,
बढ़ चले हैं छोड़ के निशाँ अपना,

हर आता जाता कहता है ये जहाँ मेरा,
मैं कहता हूँ, जो नहीं है आज, दे गया है मुझे वो कब्रिस्तान अपना.



ek  rau janaab  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2016, 02:43:57 PM »
Behad Shukriya aap sabhi logon ko !!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2016, 07:33:39 PM »
NICE...  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2016, 07:44:49 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2016, 03:59:34 AM »
bahut khoob waah.
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2016, 02:29:25 PM »
Bahot hi beautiful sharing hai....plz neeche author/writer ka naam bhi likhiye taki agar aapne likhi ho toh hum aapki likhawat ko nawaaz sake. aise me confusion bna rehta hai .....bahot badhiya lines hai humari aur se dili daad aur mubarakbaad....

अभी खत्म कहाँ हुआ है राब्ता अपना,
इस फलक के फलक पर है बाक़ी जहाँ अपना,

कहीं टकराए जो शीशे तो आवाज़ होगी,
जहाँ दिल टकराए वहां होगा अंजाम अपना,

कोई सोया होगा बेशक चाँद लेकर आगोशों में, clap..clap..
कोई जागता है मगर लेकर टूटा मकान अपना,


सफर, हमसफ़र, मंज़िलों के दोस्त,
बढ़ चले हैं छोड़ के निशाँ अपना,

हर आता जाता कहता है ये जहाँ मेरा,
मैं कहता हूँ, जो नहीं है आज, दे गया है मुझे वो कब्रिस्तान अपना.humari favorite lines me se ek..clap...clap..clap...
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2016, 03:05:39 PM »
Bahot hi beautiful sharing hai....plz neeche author/writer ka naam bhi likhiye taki agar aapne likhi ho toh hum aapki likhawat ko nawaaz sake. aise me confusion bna rehta hai .....bahot badhiya lines hai humari aur se dili daad aur mubarakbaad....
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2016, 03:08:03 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2016, 03:11:28 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2016, 12:48:22 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2016, 01:57:23 PM »
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