- Aab Hume Koi Rulayega Kaise -

by Meena on July 02, 2005, 09:33:26 PM
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #60 on: July 07, 2005, 12:41:53 PM »
You are most most welcome Pooja ...
You are really good ...


Baadalon se salaam leta hoon,
Waqt ka haath thaam leta hoon,
Maut ruk jaati hai pal bhar ke liye,
Jab main hathon mein jaam leta hoon ...(nm)
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sabreena
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«Reply #61 on: July 07, 2005, 12:52:16 PM »
bahot khoob..............JHL

khud ke dill kii awaaz abb sun nahi paati hun
bhari mehfil mein akeli ho jaati hun
pyaar kii her baat her mulaqat ko yaad kerke roo jati hun
teri berukhi kii baatein se darr jati hun
kaise jee rahi hun main tere bin ,kassh aye kisi din tu wapas,
isssiii aass mein jiye jaati hun................
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #62 on: July 07, 2005, 12:54:19 PM »
Thanks a lot Sabreena and you too have written well ...
Keep it up ...
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nikki
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«Reply #63 on: July 10, 2005, 04:52:00 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "nikki"
wao bahut bahut acha likha hai aap dono ne Meena sis n Talat sis..........is nacheez ko izat bakhshi aapne bahut shukriya sis...........

na bhool payenge unhe hum
magar unhe hum yaad ayein kaise

woh to apni duniya mein kho gaye
hum apni duniya basayein kaise


wowww nikkiiiiiiiii

unone ne nayi dunyia basa li,
to tu mbhi apna naya ashiyana bana lo,

woh ban gaye kisi aur ke aaj,
to tum bhi kisi aur se dil laga lo,

woh bane bewafa, usme "nikki" teri khata kya,
tum bhi apne dil ko bewafai ki adayne sikha do!!


bahut khoob sis................

mere liye yeh asaan nahi hai
sacha tha pyar mera
magar kya karun, kissi ne kadar na jaani
abb to log karte hain pyar mein bhi beyimani
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nikki
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«Reply #64 on: July 10, 2005, 04:52:53 AM »
bahut bahut acha likha hai aap sab logon ne.....maza aa gaya padh kar.........................
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #65 on: July 10, 2005, 05:49:21 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
bahut bahut acha likha hai aap sab logon ne.....maza aa gaya padh kar.........................



It was good one Nikki ...
Keep it up ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #66 on: July 10, 2005, 05:56:28 PM »
Khabar mere marne ke sunte hi,
Dekho wo haathon mein mehndi rachaane lage hai, Safar aakhri hai koi un se kehde,
Janaaza mera sab uthaane lage hai ...

Khtaaye bhula karke guzre dino ke,
Kiya maaf mujhko mere dushmano ne,
Magar wo naa aayi mayyat pe mere,
Lo jab hum ke duniya se jaane lage hai ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #67 on: July 10, 2005, 05:56:43 PM »
Khabar mere marne ke sunte hi,
Dekho wo haathon mein mehndi rachaane lage hai, Safar aakhri hai koi un se kehde,
Janaaza mera sab uthaane lage hai ...

Khtaaye bhula karke guzre dino ke,
Kiya maaf mujhko mere dushmano ne,
Magar wo naa aayi mayyat pe mere,
Lo jab hum ke duniya se jaane lage hai ...(nm)
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jalpari
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«Reply #68 on: July 10, 2005, 05:57:39 PM »
kia baat hai.. sab hi ne bohut acha likha...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #69 on: July 10, 2005, 06:14:18 PM »
Thanks a lot Jalpari for appreciating posts of all of us ...


Jab hum tujhe yaad subha se shaam karte hai,
Phir sar-e-shaam ek jaam tere naam karte hai,
Tujhe fursat nahi abhi aane ki shaayad,
Teri tasveer se hum yahi bas kalaam karte hai ...
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nikki
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«Reply #70 on: July 10, 2005, 06:57:35 PM »
Thanx JHL...................bahut hi acha likha hai apne bhi.............
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Yoindian Ghunda
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«Reply #71 on: July 10, 2005, 07:35:30 PM »
wowwwwwwwwwwww
tusi te bada likh linde  woh just hate love ji,nikki ji,dil kr da ve padhde ee jaooooooooooooooooo
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #72 on: July 15, 2005, 11:15:14 PM »
Thanks a lot Nikki and Yo .....
Aji main keh ria si ki tusi bhi likho ...


Chirago mein andhera hai andhero mein ujaala hai,
Hamare sheher mein kaali hawaa ne par nikale hai,
Lade the saath milkar hum chirago ke liye lekin,
Hamare ghar andhere hai aur tumhaare ghar ujaale hai ...
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Meena
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«Reply #73 on: July 24, 2005, 12:52:20 AM »
very nice JHL ji

jalaya tha jisne ussi ne buja diya woh diya,
aab tum hi batao hum kisi aur se gila kaise kare,
kale andhere me gum hai meri manzile aab,
zindagi ke is safar ko hum rangeela kaise kare?
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #74 on: July 24, 2005, 05:29:25 PM »
Thanks a lot Meena for appreciation ...
You too have done a great job ...


Na karo gila tum kisise apne andhere ghar ka,
Hum jalaayenge aapke ghar ka har ek diya,
Aapke safar mein ab rang hi rang honge,
Kyunki berang gumo ko hamne apne haatho hai piya ...
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