AAENA. (khud se Rubaroo)

by khwaish on September 21, 2008, 07:14:40 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 28, 2008, 03:22:02 AM »
aakhiri sher ke liye dad hazir hai khwaish ji bahoot khoob
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«Reply #16 on: September 28, 2008, 03:26:15 AM »
Woh jo ghar pe aaye mehmaan ko Khuda kehte the
ab woh insaan kahan hai??

woh jo auro ke gham par aansuu bahate the
ab woh insaan kahan hai??

woh jo auro ki khushi ko apni khushi maante the
ab woh insaan kahan hai??

woh jo har halaat mein muskuraate the
ab woh insaan kahan hai??

Aankhon mein rote-rote nam bhi nahi hai ab,
aankhon mein tha jo tufaan, ab woh kahan hai??

"KHWAISH" KHUDA TO ZARRE-ZARRE MEIN SHAAMIL HAI,
PAR SOCH INSAANO KI ISS DUNIYA MEIN,
AAKHIR INSAAN KAHAN HAI???

Bahut khoob
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«Reply #17 on: September 28, 2008, 06:54:53 AM »
aakhiri sher ke liye dad hazir hai khwaish ji bahoot khoob

bahut bahut shukriya bekararji..
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«Reply #18 on: September 28, 2008, 06:56:08 AM »
Bahut khoob


Thankyou Roja..
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«Reply #19 on: September 28, 2008, 06:58:23 AM »


"KHWAISH" KHUDA TO ZARRE-ZARRE MEIN SHAAMIL HAI,
PAR SOCH INSAANO KI ISS DUNIYA MEIN,
AAKHIR INSAAN KAHAN HAI???

Bohot gehri baat keh di...poori nazm hi achchi lagi, par ye lines bohot zyada achchi lagin  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: September 28, 2008, 07:20:11 AM »
Bohot gehri baat keh di...poori nazm hi achchi lagi, par ye lines bohot zyada achchi lagin  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut shukriya celmira, magar aap bhi kuch likhte to chaar chand lag jaate...Shukriya
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«Reply #21 on: February 07, 2009, 01:45:13 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Khawis

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Paani Ji...
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«Reply #22 on: February 07, 2009, 01:53:34 AM »

Bahoth qoob Kuwish sahab , maafi chahata hon nazar nahi padi thi is nazam pe , allah tumhe khush rakhe janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #23 on: May 29, 2009, 02:30:18 PM »
Bahoth qoob Kuwish sahab , maafi chahata hon nazar nahi padi thi is nazam pe , allah tumhe khush rakhe janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer Saheb..
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«Reply #24 on: May 29, 2009, 02:58:58 PM »
Mashallah, Bohat Achche Bhai, Phirse Ek Behtareen Kalaam Pardhne Ko Milaa,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #25 on: June 01, 2009, 01:25:26 AM »
Mashallah, Bohat Achche Bhai, Phirse Ek Behtareen Kalaam Pardhne Ko Milaa,.
Bohat Achche,.

Hausle-Afsaai Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..
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«Reply #26 on: June 01, 2009, 02:10:14 AM »
very very nice Khwaish ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: June 01, 2009, 02:15:11 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Khawaish Ji. Applause  Applause

Shally.
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