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«Reply #15 on: January 26, 2011, 05:48:58 PM » |
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bahut khubsurat Priya ji...
qaid huaa main jab band ki tumne apni ye aankhe
ban ke aansu beh gayaa jab khuli teri ye aankhe
na sone de na jagne de, na karwat hi badalne de
kisi nazar se milkar sharm se jhuki teri ye aankhe... !
Intezar !
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«Reply #16 on: January 26, 2011, 06:18:31 PM » |
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Nice Once Again Priya Ji
Nice Creation...
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«Reply #17 on: January 26, 2011, 06:49:58 PM » |
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wowwww mastam mastam thread hai ye to....
priya mastam poem chhoti si poem wid lots of feelings
nirala ji mastam reply
rajaji..mast hai aapka reply par iss topic pe expected more from u
humnaam...mastam re ek dum mast
intezar ji..kya kehne apke...
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«Reply #18 on: January 29, 2011, 10:32:41 AM » |
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bht pyari lines kahi hai aapne intezar ji....
bht bht khoob....
bht bht shukria rishi ji...
& thanx anu di....
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«Reply #19 on: January 29, 2011, 11:22:41 AM » |
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hmm Priya--
aaj mila mujhe ye thread.
yar kamaal hai
uff kya mohabbat bhara ehsaas aur azeeb se bhole sawaal.
superb ji--
chota aur dhamakedaar Nazraana hai re.
bahut pyari kavita ke liye
hazaaron daad dil se.
khus raho
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pyar ka ehsaas dilati aankhe
dil ke zazbaat batati aankhen
apno ko khas banati aankhe
dusmano ko bhi paas bulati aankhen
khusiyon me chalkti hain
gam ki numaish bhi karti aankhen
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baaki sabka jawaab Mindblowing hai ji.
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«Reply #20 on: January 30, 2011, 08:46:21 AM » |
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tumhe accha laga jaan kar mujhe bht accha laga kb......
or tumhara reply bhi bada accha hai......
eise hi aate raho.....
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«Reply #21 on: January 30, 2011, 12:06:54 PM » |
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jagi neend se jab se aankhe....
hui kkhawab se khali aankhe...
ashq bacha na baki koi....
reet gayi ye geeli aankhe..
feeki feeki ho gayi duniya...
gai raat jab kholi aankhe...
na aahat na dastak koi....
kise dhundhe fir meri aankhe..
khoob kaha nice one |
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«Reply #22 on: January 30, 2011, 02:01:07 PM » |
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hahaha Manzil sahiba-- mere kuch lines ko pasand karne ke liye sukriya Ishq ji. aapne mujhe 'SIR' kah dia issi baat par khus hokar maine faisala kiya ki aapke Sar pe 'MADAM' ki upadhi Maar du aise ---Dhapakkkkkk  " thanx " |
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«Reply #23 on: February 01, 2011, 11:43:00 AM » |
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bht bht shukria sheba ji....
nirala ji badi jor se lagi aapki upadhi....
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«Reply #24 on: March 30, 2011, 02:17:17 PM » |
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jada zor se to nai lagi na ji……
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«Reply #25 on: March 31, 2011, 08:17:52 AM » |
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jagi neend se jab se aankhe....
hui kkhawab se khali aankhe...
ashq bacha na baki koi....
reet gayi ye geeli aankhe..
feeki feeki ho gayi duniya...
gai raat jab kholi aankhe...
na aahat na dastak koi....
kise dhundhe fir meri aankhe..
bahut umda manzil ji |
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«Reply #26 on: March 31, 2011, 08:23:40 AM » |
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superb priya ..mast maja aya ...
bahut badhiya likha hai..
dher saarii daad~
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«Reply #27 on: April 01, 2011, 05:54:56 AM » |
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nahi nirala ji....
Nahi laga jyada jor se...
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«Reply #28 on: April 01, 2011, 05:56:01 AM » |
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bht bht shukria adil ji....
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«Reply #29 on: April 01, 2011, 05:57:11 AM » |
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thanx abhi....
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