Ab aa bhi jaaao !!!!!!!

by Talat on April 14, 2005, 05:41:30 PM
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«Reply #705 on: November 22, 2008, 01:26:43 AM »
Ceilmira, Pooja, JHL, Bekarar, Taheer Khaja, Arun,waheed aur aap sub doston ki nazer meray du sher...


Dobtay ko dobna he chahiey tha aay rafiq
Aass pass door tuk aur aasira koi na tha

Dhool urti deikh ker mien bhi behla tha mager
Dil kay veeraN rastay per qafila koi na tha

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #706 on: November 22, 2008, 04:19:44 AM »

Quote from: sharmaarunkumar on November 21, 2008, 11:04:42 AM


waah Kya baat hai!!! bahut achchhe!!! waah!!!

Pahale to apne dil ki Raza jaan jaaiye!
Phir jo Nigah-e-yaar kahe maan jaaiye!!

Pahale Mizaaz-e-rahguzar jaan jaaiye!
Phir Gard-e-rah jo bhi kahe maan jaaiye!!

Ek dhool si jami hai Nigaahon ke aas paas,
Yeh aap hain to aap pe kurbaan jaaiye!

Shayad Huzoor se koi nisbat humein bhi hai,
Ankhon mein jhaank kar humein Pahchan jaaiye!

Kuchh kah rahi hain aapke seene ki dhadkanein,
Meri Sune to dil ka kaha maan jaaiye!

aakar mere wajood mein sama jaiye,
ay mere humdum aa jaaiye!ab aa bhi jaaiye!

Arun Ji

Itne din baad aap ko dekha.....aur phir apne thread main dekha....aur phir us thread main jo dil ke behad qareeb hai..... Usual Smile

Bohot shukriya Arun Ji...aur aapne bhi to kya zabardast ghazal share ki hai....Mujhe behad pasand hai......

Kuch jawab dene ki koshish ki hai.....

Dil to paagal, dil ki hain khwahishain hazaar,
Aata hai bas ek hi naam, labon pe baar baar

Yoon kehne ko aisa bhi koi faasla to nahin,
Bas ek kaainaat darmiyan, main is paar wo us paar

Dhundla sa manzar hai, koi tasveer nahin hai,
Jaane dil main hai ki ye nighaon ka hai ghubaar

Soz-e-jigar ko bhala ab kaun pehchaane yahan
Chalke na dard, itna to hai dil pe ikhtiyaar

Be-sada awaaz hai, jo pahunche kabhi us tak
In toot ti saanson ko bhi aa jaaye kuch qaraar
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«Reply #707 on: November 22, 2008, 04:20:45 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on November 22, 2008, 12:33:57 AM
kya baat hai.talat.behad umda ..bilkul free flowing.......

Bohot bohot shukriya Sanjeev aapko ye sher pasand aaye....ye thread mujhe behad azeez hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #708 on: November 22, 2008, 04:23:22 AM »
Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 22, 2008, 01:18:49 AM
Bohat khoob Celmiraji...umda sher hien


Sajid Hadayat Ji, mujhe khushi ki ye adna se peshkash aapki nazron main thehri ...bohot shukriya.
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«Reply #709 on: November 22, 2008, 04:35:04 AM »
Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 22, 2008, 01:26:43 AM
Ceilmira, Pooja, JHL, Bekarar, Taheer Khaja, Arun,waheed aur aap sub doston ki nazer meray du sher...


Dobtay ko dobna he chahiey tha aay rafiq
Aass pass door tuk aur aasira koi na tha

Dhool urti deikh ker mien bhi behla tha mager
Dil kay veeraN rastay per qafila koi na tha

Sajid Hadayat

Bohot hi khoob Sajid Hadayat Ji Applause

Aap ke likhe sher ko hi ek doosre andaaz main likha hai, bataiyega kaisa raha !!

Mauj-e-hawaadis main safeena doobta raha,
Wo tanha hi taqdeer se yoon joojhta raha

Qaafila thehra nahin uss mod par lekin
Ghubaar-e-rahguzar main wo kuch dhoondta raha!
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Pooja
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«Reply #710 on: November 22, 2008, 09:22:53 AM »
nice celmira
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #711 on: November 22, 2008, 09:54:13 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 22, 2008, 04:19:44 AM
Arun Ji

Itne din baad aap ko dekha.....aur phir apne thread main dekha....aur phir us thread main jo dil ke behad qareeb hai..... Usual Smile

Bohot shukriya Arun Ji...aur aapne bhi to kya zabardast ghazal share ki hai....Mujhe behad pasand hai......

Kuch jawab dene ki koshish ki hai.....

Dil to paagal, dil ki hain khwahishain hazaar,
Aata hai bas ek hi naam, labon pe baar baar

Yoon kehne ko aisa bhi koi faasla to nahin,
Bas ek kaainaat darmiyan, main is paar wo us paar

Dhundla sa manzar hai, koi tasveer nahin hai,
Jaane dil main hai ki ye nighaon ka hai ghubaar

Soz-e-jigar ko bhala ab kaun pehchaane yahan
Chalke na dard, itna to hai dil pe ikhtiyaar

Be-sada awaaz hai, jo pahunche kabhi us tak
In toot ti saanson ko bhi aa jaaye kuch qaraar



 :clapping:Waah! Applause Waah! Bahut khoobsurat!!! very nice lines!! Applause

Mere madhosh dil ki sargoshiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!
woh Nazakat se hui badmaashiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!

Hone ko to bahut hain Dil nawaz mere aas paas lekin,
Bhatki hui meri tanhaiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!
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Pooja
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«Reply #712 on: November 22, 2008, 09:57:08 AM »
wah kay abaat hai AKS ji bahoot khoob!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #713 on: November 22, 2008, 10:23:32 AM »
Thank you Pooja ji!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #714 on: March 06, 2009, 07:42:57 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 22, 2008, 09:22:53 AM
nice celmira

Thanks Pooja
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Talat
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«Reply #715 on: March 06, 2009, 07:49:41 PM »
Quote from: sharmaarunkumar on November 22, 2008, 09:54:13 AM
Clapping Smiley Waah! Applause Waah! Bahut khoobsurat!!! very nice lines!! Applause

Mere madhosh dil ki sargoshiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!
woh Nazakat se hui badmaashiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!

Hone ko to bahut hain Dil nawaz mere aas paas lekin,
Bhatki hui meri tanhaiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!


Waah Waah bohot Khoob Arun Ji...aur bohot bohot shukriya Arun Ji  icon_flower

Tanhaaiyon main tum aksar yaad aate ho,
Haan ! kitni baar tum hum ko rulate ho

Shikwa koi hota to mana lete hum tum ko
Kyun bewajah hi tum yoon hum ko satate ho !!
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«Reply #716 on: March 13, 2009, 06:34:06 PM »
Quote from: sharmaarunkumar on November 22, 2008, 09:54:13 AM
:clapping:Waah! Applause Waah! Bahut khoobsurat!!! very nice lines!! Applause

Mere madhosh dil ki sargoshiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!
woh Nazakat se hui badmaashiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!

Hone ko to bahut hain Dil nawaz mere aas paas lekin,
Bhatki hui meri tanhaiyaan tumhein yaad karti hain!



Bohat Khoob Arun Ji.. Bohatumda sharing... Masha Allah

Niazmund

Sajid Hadayat
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #717 on: March 17, 2009, 11:21:03 AM »
Quote from: sjid hadayat on March 13, 2009, 06:34:06 PM

Bohat Khoob Arun Ji.. Bohatumda sharing... Masha Allah

Niazmund

Sajid Hadayat



Shukriya Hidayad ji!
But pls note this is not  sharing!!! OK!!
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salma786
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«Reply #718 on: March 17, 2009, 11:48:13 AM »
Bahoot khoob Talat sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Sabne acha sath diya!
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