Ab Na Aaungi Lautkar...

by pinky on February 24, 2007, 11:51:45 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 18, 2007, 12:09:07 PM »
Quote from: "paani"
Nice Pinky ji & good on Roja ji


Thank You Paani..!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: March 18, 2007, 06:11:50 PM »
hehehee,,,,,,,,   main  bhi.........  :lol:
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«Reply #17 on: March 19, 2007, 12:35:51 PM »
Quote from: "pinky"
Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..

Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..

Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..

Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..

Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..

Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi..


wah wah bohot hi ache!!! apka teesra sher to bohot hi acha laga mujhe!!! keep it up kuddiye! Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: March 20, 2007, 10:18:58 PM »
It's Awesome Pinky.... Especially these lines....
Quote from: "pinky"

Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #19 on: March 21, 2007, 08:05:12 AM »
Quote from: "pinky"
Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..

Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..

Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..

Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..

Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..

Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi..


Very nice Pinky......................
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pinky
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«Reply #20 on: March 27, 2007, 09:13:33 PM »
Thanx a lot Meena..
Nattu and khushi with five i's
he he he :lol:

ji haan wo lines mere dil ke bhi kareen hain bahut..
Thanx again..
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pinky
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«Reply #21 on: March 27, 2007, 09:21:04 PM »
Laut kar aaoon kiske liye ae dil bataa
Har shaqs yahan masroof hai..
Kyun tu le aata hai mujhe iss mehfil mein
Kaun mere jaane se mayus hai..
Mehfil ab bhi rangeen hai har taraf roshni hai
Waisa hi to ab bhi yahan noor hai..
Ek mere na hone se kya ho jayega mere dil
Sabke paas yahan apna mehboob hai..
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Aryaan
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«Reply #22 on: March 27, 2007, 09:45:45 PM »
Bohat khoob Pinky...
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paani
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«Reply #23 on: March 28, 2007, 04:16:21 AM »
Quote from: "pinky"
Laut kar aaoon kiske liye ae dil bataa
Har shaqs yahan masroof hai..
Kyun tu le aata hai mujhe iss mehfil mein
Kaun mere jaane se mayus hai..
Mehfil ab bhi rangeen hai har taraf roshni hai
Waisa hi to ab bhi yahan noor hai..
Ek mere na hone se kya ho jayega mere dil
Sabke paas yahan apna mehboob hai..



O it's simple d best pinky...
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: March 28, 2007, 11:35:18 AM »
Very nice Pinky...Keep writing Usual Smile
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Muhammed
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«Reply #25 on: October 14, 2008, 05:03:46 AM »
Quote from: pinky on February 24, 2007, 11:51:45 AM
Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..

Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..

Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..

Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..

Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..

Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi..

Waah..Waah..Pinky bahot hi khoob..Kya asha'ar Hai aap ne Likhe.
aapki saari haqeeqat se Main aaj Waaqeef hun.
Lekin aaj Bhi Apka Intezar Ho Raha Hai...Aa jaa o! JahaaN Kahin Bhi Ho...!!!
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #26 on: October 14, 2008, 05:40:47 AM »
bohut khoob pinky ji Applause
and nice reply u all

jise chaha kabhi usne apnaya nahi
jisne chaha use kabhi paaya nahi
likha kabhi to kabhi mita diya
ye raaz khud hamko samajh aaya nahi

bhula hai wo ya ham yaad kar rahe hain
ya dil ko ye bharam hua hai abhi
suna hai wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ka
dard ab bhi hai aur koi usse gila bhi nahi
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«Reply #27 on: April 29, 2011, 02:17:02 PM »
last ke 2 para dil me ghar bana gaye pinky ji…
aap wapis aajao ki ab
aapse kisi ko ‘gila  nahi…

dhajjiya udhed di humne yo ki iss mehfil ki magar
aap jesi ‘pinky’ umda shayra to koi mila nahi…

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khaak me lipta zism hai kb
raakh mgr,ab tak kisi ko dikha nahi……
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