afsana..

by Harleyboy1 on August 25, 2004, 03:09:31 PM
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Tosha
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«Reply #15 on: August 27, 2004, 11:48:53 AM »
dil ke wo arzoo
wo tammaana humari
ab na rahi
na rahi wo humari
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«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2004, 05:24:11 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "sarafz"
Humne jab kabhi kushi mehsus ki
Har kadam par apki Dewangi mehsus ki
Door rehkar bhi apki Mohabat kam na hui
Yeh baat humne dil se mehsus ki


bahoot khoob sarafz. nice work all....

kahi dil mai teri yado ka, ek nashtar sa chubhata hai
tarpata hai bahoot aor kahi jism mai pigalata hai,
bad mai lahoo ban kar ankho se nikalta hai
teri yaado ke aine mai, na puch kaise yah waqat gujrata hai


Wah Wah bohat khoob pooja ji app shayari bohat accha likhti hai specially jawab bohat accha deti hai.

Saat samandar ka fasla to beshak bahut bada hai
Magar do dilon ka fasla to itna chota hai,
Ke humein bhi takleef hoti hai,
Jab tumhein dard hota hai
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nishita
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«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2004, 07:53:51 AM »
tooo good pooja...

gar bewafai hai mohabbat ka roop sachha
to uske pyar se, uska inkaar hai achha..
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Tosha
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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2004, 08:06:56 AM »
gar bewafai hai mohabbat ka roop sachha
to uske pyar se, uska inkaar hai achha

beautiful...!

chaw ka batlab samajhne ke liye
char pal to zindgi ke dhoop main batha karo...!
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nishita
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2004, 08:09:23 AM »
thank u tosha
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2004, 02:03:57 PM »
good one all
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«Reply #21 on: August 28, 2004, 03:33:44 PM »
dhoop me baith kar bhi hum ne din nikaale hai
wahi gum waha bhi the, jo ab humaare fasaane hai
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #22 on: August 28, 2004, 03:35:37 PM »
khoob
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sarafz
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«Reply #23 on: August 29, 2004, 04:13:36 AM »
Excellent  tongue3
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«Reply #24 on: August 29, 2004, 06:33:07 AM »
Quote from: "nishita"
tooo good pooja...

gar bewafai hai mohabbat ka roop sachha
to uske pyar se, uska inkaar hai achha..


bewafai ke roop par hunen monm ka ghar na banaa,
tere enkaar ki aag se, peenghal jayenge hum.
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #25 on: August 29, 2004, 08:30:10 AM »
khoob
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«Reply #26 on: August 29, 2004, 11:55:48 AM »
thanks guru :o
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Harleyboy1
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«Reply #27 on: August 30, 2004, 02:54:08 PM »
ek baar to hume dekh liya hota ,
          hum bhi khade the raaho main,
tumne hume yaad kiya hota ,
          to hum bhi karte yaad tumhe.
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«Reply #28 on: August 30, 2004, 03:09:32 PM »
Bahoot khoob tosha>>>> Chaw ko janan hai to kuch pal dhoop mai rah kar dekh<<<< bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.

nice shair Sarafz ji.
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«Reply #29 on: August 30, 2004, 03:29:42 PM »
dhoop me umar kaat di intezaar karte karte
kat gaye kai din uski rah takte takte
khuch aaram ke liye jab chaw ka sahaara liya
wo aagaye usi wakt hum pe ilzaam kaste kaste
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