Buri aadat ko ...

by tamanna.pt on April 28, 2010, 03:10:30 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2010, 11:27:12 AM »

wAH KYA BAAT HAI tAMANNAji...... Applause Applause Applause

Manaa Buri aadat hai,yu Shikaayat karne kee
Par tum bhi Yu intzaar humko karvaya na karo

Aana hai tou beshaq tum rubaru aao
Sapno mai mere yu tum aaya na karo

Bahut oodaas hai aaj-kal dil mera
Be-wajah mujhko yu sataaya na karo




                     
                    Buri aadat ko aise badhaya na karo,
                    De zakhm zamana to muskuraya na karo.

                    Maarna patthar to hai dastoor-e-duniya lekin,
                    Aaine-e-dil ko hatheli pe sajaaya na karo.

                    Mat baanton ye haq gairon me is tarah,
                    Lagao dil na jisse,chot bhi usse kabhi khaya na karo.

                    Kisko samjhaoge ye dard apna,k kaun farishta hai yahan,
                    Insaanon se to umeed ye lagaaya na karo.

                    Deni padhe gawaahi jab andhoon k sheher me,
                    Har baat ko nazroon se bataya na karo.

                    Utthe jikr jab bhi mehfil me gunaahgaaro ka,
                    Yun ghabra k nazrein jhukaya na karo.





                               ----Tamanna----
                      
                          

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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #16 on: May 01, 2010, 11:55:35 AM »
Shukriya BBl ji. Kaafi waqt baad aapki daad pakar bahut achha laga. Kalaam ko padhne ka bahut shukriya.

shukriya ji aur itni kabil-e-tarif kalaam main kaise miss karti..acha kaam khud-b-khud nazro k saamne ajata hai...keep writting...
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #17 on: May 03, 2010, 06:42:10 AM »
Behad Khubsoorat Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain Tamanna Ji.. Aapki Is Nazm Ke bare Me Kya Kahun.. Jitna Kahun Utna Hi Kam hoga..!! icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Har ek Sher Apne aap Me Lajawab Hai.. Apne Jazzbaaton Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon Me Pesh Kiya hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda aur Jabardast Peshkash hai... !!!

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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salil2002
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«Reply #18 on: May 03, 2010, 07:24:32 AM »
tamanna bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne
ummeed hai aapki agli nazm bhi aise hi nashe main doobi huyi hogi
do line aapke liye

kii dil ne chot khayi oosi pathar se jise apnaaya tha
haath main khoon bhi patthar oothane wale k haath main aaya tha
maine apni hasti mita di jiske labon par hansi laane k liye
kyun woh meri kaanch kii shakshiyat se lipat k rone aaya tha
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