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«Reply #30 on: August 13, 2007, 01:57:56 AM » |
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Really a wonderful thread  |
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«Reply #31 on: August 13, 2007, 07:46:36 AM » |
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Bohat khoob Khwaish..  |
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«Reply #32 on: August 13, 2007, 10:41:24 PM » |
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THANX FOR APPRECIATING ANGEL & ARYAN |
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«Reply #33 on: August 14, 2007, 12:32:02 AM » |
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YEH SABR AAKHIR KAHAN TAK
NIBHAYE JAAU MAIN...
KI AANKHEIN BHAR AAYI AB TO
PHIR BI MUSKURAYE JAAU MAIN...
CHOT KHAYI HAI DIL PE
PHIR BI LOG KEHE HAI BHOOL JAAU MAIN...
TUJHE BHOOL JANE KE LIYE
MOHABBAT KI NA THI
YEH DUNIYA KO KAISE SAMJHAU MAIN...
LABO PAR KHAMOSHI
THAM SI GAYI HAI
PAR UNKA HUKAM HAI"KHWAISH"
KI DASTAAN-E-MOHABBAT
SUNAE JAAU MAIN
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«Reply #34 on: August 14, 2007, 11:54:09 PM » |
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Beautiful again khwaish....i wish i could write like u
Bahut khoob hoti hai mohabbat mein judai
saath deti hai har waqt tanhai
nighahon mein har waqt thehar jaate hai aansu
Poochti hai zindagi
ab tak maut kyon na aayi
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«Reply #35 on: August 15, 2007, 10:24:04 PM » |
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Beautiful again khwaish....i wish i could write like u
Bahut khoob hoti hai mohabbat mein judai
saath deti hai har waqt tanhai
nighahon mein har waqt thehar jaate hai aansu
Poochti hai zindagi
ab tak maut kyon na aayi
BAHOOT KHOOB SHONA...AAP NE TO HUMSE BI ACHA LIKHA HAI.LIKHTE RAHIYE =D> =D> |
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«Reply #36 on: August 15, 2007, 11:00:11 PM » |
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good job khwaish and Shona ji!!
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«Reply #37 on: August 16, 2007, 04:47:42 AM » |
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=D> =D> =D> ...hats off to u yaar.aapki shayri ke har ek lin me itna dard hai...bahut gehrai se likhte ho aap..simply great
"zakhm bar bi jaaye to kya faayda
aakhir tak zindagi mein nishaan to rehta hai".....superb Aapki Shayri main kafi dard hai.............Rajiv'sshayri |
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«Reply #38 on: August 16, 2007, 04:48:42 AM » |
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=D> =D> =D> ...hats off to u yaar.aapki shayri ke har ek lin me itna dard hai...bahut gehrai se likhte ho aap..simply great
"zakhm bar bi jaaye to kya faayda
aakhir tak zindagi mein nishaan to rehta hai".....superb Aapki Shayri main kafi dard hai.............Rajiv'sshayri |
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«Reply #39 on: August 17, 2007, 01:26:16 AM » |
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Bahut khoob hoti hai mohabbat mein judai saath deti hai har waqt tanhai nighahon mein har waqt thehar jaate hai aansu Poochti hai zindagi ab tak maut kyon na aayi BAHOOT KHOOB SHONA...AAP NE TO HUMSE BI ACHA LIKHA HAI.LIKHTE RAHIYE Thanx a lot for your sweet words khwaish but it will take me a long time to write like you. Thanx pooja for your reply.your appreciation means a lot to me... |
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«Reply #40 on: August 17, 2007, 01:45:17 AM » |
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Ek raat woh mile khwaab mein
humne poocha
kyon thukraya aapne....
Jab dekha,unki aankhon mein
bhar aaye te aansu
phir kaise pooch leti
ke kyon Rulaya aapne....
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«Reply #41 on: August 17, 2007, 09:45:56 PM » |
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Ek raat woh mile khwaab mein
humne poocha
kyon thukraya aapne....
Jab dekha,unki aankhon mein
bhar aaye te aansu
phir kaise pooch leti
ke kyon Rulaya aapne.... BAHUT KHOOB SHONA..BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE AB TO MAAN JAU KI AAP BAHUT ACHA LIKHTE HO O:) |
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«Reply #42 on: August 17, 2007, 10:03:23 PM » |
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ZUBAAN KHAMOSH
AANKHO MEIN NAMI HOGI
YEHI BAS EK DASTAAN-E-ZINDAGI HOGI
BHARNE KO TO HAR ZAKHM
BHAR JAYEGA APNA "KHWAISH"
KAISE BHAREGI WOH JAGAH
JAHAN TERI KAMI HOGI.... :cry:
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«Reply #43 on: August 17, 2007, 11:44:59 PM » |
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Ek raat woh mile khwaab mein
humne poocha
kyon thukraya aapne....
Jab dekha,unki aankhon mein
bhar aaye te aansu
phir kaise pooch leti
ke kyon Rulaya aapne.... That was so touching...  |
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«Reply #44 on: August 17, 2007, 11:46:47 PM » |
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Unki aankhonse jo chhalke aansu,
un aansuon ko palkon ko chunna chaha,
pata tha unhe mil jaana hai mitti mein,
is liye us mitti ka humne shringaar chaha
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