derd ke ird gird

by samnoj on June 18, 2005, 11:53:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 18, 2005, 12:59:01 PM »
thanx n good one sanya

kuch jaate jaate keh gaye mujhe din bahaar ke
hum kitne khush the, saath tumse maigusaar ke
jo din guzer gaye wo lout ker nahi aate
haan, chor jaate hai nisha kuch yaadgaar ke
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«Reply #16 on: June 18, 2005, 01:05:08 PM »
thnx sam...very nice..

 jab cheer ke dil chhod jaana tha
to humein paagal banaya hi kyun
jab marham lagane saath na rehna tha
to humein ghaayal kiya hi kyun
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«Reply #17 on: June 18, 2005, 01:13:42 PM »
thanx sanya
ye bhi acha tah

tumne sabak wafa ka sikhaya kyu tha
deewana apna mujhe banaya kyun tha
chhod jana hi tha ager beech rah me saath
to ai bewafa tu mere saath aaya kyun tha
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«Reply #18 on: June 18, 2005, 01:19:21 PM »
wah wah...

ek main aur ek tu
aisi hi thi zindagaani
beech rah mein chhod gaya tu
adhoori reh gayi kahani
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«Reply #19 on: June 18, 2005, 01:22:21 PM »
hairat hai ki ab nikalte bhi nahi wo kareeb se
nafrat wo itni kar rahe hai bad naseeb se
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«Reply #20 on: June 18, 2005, 01:24:14 PM »
kar rahe hain itne zulm hum par kyun
ho gayi koi khata shayad hum gareeb se..
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«Reply #21 on: June 18, 2005, 04:15:33 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
hairat hai ki ab nikalte bhi nahi wo kareeb se
nafrat wo itni kar rahe hai bad naseeb se


wah  wah  ......sam.............sanya..........nice  work  both..............

dil  ke  fafoole jal  uthe seene ke daag  se,
is ghar ko  aag  lag  gayee ghar  ke chiraag se.......................nm
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«Reply #22 on: June 18, 2005, 06:06:38 PM »
bohat khoob sam and sanya........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Usual Smile !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: June 18, 2005, 07:21:23 PM »
thanks waheed and nidhi!! :D ....                                                                                                        ..
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«Reply #24 on: June 19, 2005, 07:55:37 AM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
kagaz per nazar aati hai ye siskiyan kis ki
koun sa hai derd wo, jo, ird gird rehta hai

ye shabd lete hai talashi kis ki aahat ki
ki koun hai lafzo me jo yu khamosh rehat hai

ek kachchi khawaish hai justaju ki kaid me
ki zubaan per koi adhpaka sa sawaal rehta hai

kerte hai aansu guftagu lafzo ke nukhto se
ki koun hai jo boond me ye samaya rehta hai

udhde pade hai lafz kai khud tees se apni
phir koun hai jo charcha ye sar-e-aam karta hai

deti nahi mohlat yaha jeene ko zindagi
phir koun hai jo surat badal ker nayi shakal leta hai


Bohot Khoob Sam !!!! Sanya, Dolly aur Waheed ne bhi achcha likha hai !!
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«Reply #25 on: June 19, 2005, 10:38:32 AM »
thanx talat!!!                                                                                          .. :D
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«Reply #26 on: June 19, 2005, 04:01:12 PM »
samnoj wrote,
hairat hai ki ab nikalte bhi nahi wo kareeb se
nafrat wo itni kar rahe hai bad naseeb se

wah bahut khub mere nawaab teri shayri mein to ek ajeeb sa falsafa paida ho gaya hai bahut khub keep it up or naam kama mera matlab apne group ka
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«Reply #27 on: June 19, 2005, 06:33:24 PM »
ur  welcome ..........sanya...........................tongue3........
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«Reply #28 on: June 20, 2005, 08:14:32 AM »
thanx nidhi,waheed,sufi,talat
bahut ache waheed, ye maine bhi suna hai

dil laga ker bhi akser dillagi karte rahe
saamne baithe rahe aur berukhi karte rahe

dushmano ki khair hai ker lenge unse do do haath
khair apno ki nahi jo dushmani kerte rahe
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«Reply #29 on: June 20, 2005, 09:03:50 AM »
jo kai barso pahle likha tha
wo aaj bhi taza mila
panno ki aad me mujhe
koi aaj bhi jhankta mila
sukhe hue lafzo me
koi mujhe rota mila
tahri hui kuch kataro me
raah koi takta mila
her shair ke aakhir me
mujhe koi sisakta mila
her lafz ki duri me
mujhe koi pukarta mila
likhna tha aasaan jo
padhna wo mushkil laga
mera likha her lafz mujhko
mujhse hi naraaz mila
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