Guanah!!! (neel)

by neelgold on April 06, 2010, 10:16:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 08, 2010, 09:04:07 PM »
KaPIL JI ...........Kya baat hai janab...
Yaar App ka muqabla nhi kaar sakti.... vry nyc creation.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Vll reply  bt latr jst vs checking reply...
App ka "KAMAL" ne muze bhut khush kaar diya
THANx A Lot KAPIL.......

Vait for my reply jst bak home vana sum rest thn vll cum & vll try to give u gud reply ......... THNXXXXXXXXXxx
Quote from: klaskar on April 08, 2010, 07:38:51 PM
Maan gaye Neel ji aapki kalam ko... bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki ye... mehboob k intzaar ke meethe dard ko bahut ki khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon k mala me piroya hai... lajawaab Neel ji... aapke hi shabdon me kehte hai... aapne "KAMAAL" kar diya... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Do panktiyaan maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hain...

ab to gunah karne ki hamari aadat si ho gayi hai,
roz tumko yaad karne ki chahat si ho gayi hai,
khaamoshi teri roz aake kaano me kuch keh jaati hai,
kaise kahen teri har khamoshi ab sangeet si ho gayi hai,

ab to tere intezaar ki aadat si ho gayi hai,
har ghadi raah takne ki chahat si ho gayi hai,
ab to meri saanso me bhi tera hi basera hai,
lagta hai ki jaise tujhse preet si ho gayi hai...
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«Reply #16 on: April 08, 2010, 09:09:06 PM »
MAdhu ji APp kapil ki baton main maat aana .......... I m no whr in front of u guys.......

U guys r really amzing....
 Kapil aap ko

App ne jo saraha hum ko hum to youn hi itrah gaye...
Jana kahi aur tha kahi aur hi aah gaye.....
Jamin pe kadam paad nahi humare..
Lagta hai hum Udh ke asaman pe aah gaye.........
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 08, 2010, 08:30:26 PM
Wah Neel ji ek baar phirse bahut khoob likha aapne.bahut achi lagi ye lines,hum
jitna dhoor jaate hai, tum utna paas bhula lete ho.Aur Kapil se aapne bhi kamaal ke likha.lovely work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: April 08, 2010, 10:14:48 PM »
Thanx SHiab.... Vaise ek baat bolo im not SAHAB ... im MAMSAHAB...  happy3

I 'm alwyz happy but aapke Khush Rahiye ne muze aur bi khush kar diya ..
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Quote from: Shihab on April 08, 2010, 09:18:56 PM
Bahut Khub Neel Sahab....


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #18 on: April 08, 2010, 11:05:36 PM »
Its ok SHihab...
AISE BADE BADE SHARION MAIN AISE CHOTI CHOTI GALTIYAN HOTI REHTI HAIN!!!
Humne maaf kiya kyonki aapne hume fir se khush kiya ...
U make me relly laugh vn i vs reading dis c im still smiling ...
Thanx
& keep smiling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quote from: Shihab on April 08, 2010, 10:23:47 PM
Ji Maafi Chahta Hun
Naam Se Dhoka Kha Gaya
Neel Aksar Ladkon Men Paya Jata Hai

Khair Aage Se Dhyad Rakhunga.....
Aur Achchi Baat Hai Aapki Khushi Mili..

Chalo Phir Aur Khush Ho Jaaiye
Phir Se Kahe Dete Hain Hum...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #19 on: April 09, 2010, 07:19:31 PM »

bahut bahut saara thanx aapke liye Neel... aapne to taarifon k pul hi baandh diye... itna bhi kuch khaas nahi likha ... aur aap hamara dil tod rahi hain muqable ki baat karke... yahan hum ladai thode na kar rahe hain? bas apne feelings share karte hain. aap apne shabdon me aur hum apne. agar aap muqable ki baat karenge to hum aapke posts pe likhna chhod denge. main chahta hi hoon ki aap haste muskurate rahen. tabhi "kamal" likha. aur aapne sach me kamal likha hai. waise Kapil k baad mujhe "Ji" achcha nahi laga.

aapke reply ka intezaar rahega humko. n u are always welcome.

Quote from: neelgold on April 08, 2010, 09:04:07 PM
KaPIL JI ...........Kya baat hai janab...
Yaar App ka muqabla nhi kaar sakti.... vry nyc creation.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Vll reply  bt latr jst vs checking reply...
App ka "KAMAL" ne muze bhut khush kaar diya
THANx A Lot KAPIL.......

Vait for my reply jst bak home vana sum rest thn vll cum & vll try to give u gud reply ......... THNXXXXXXXXXxx
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«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2010, 07:37:39 PM »
Neel... yahaan koi kisi se kam nahi hai. har koi ek se badhkar ek hai. aur aap bhi unme se ek hain. sabka alag andaaz hai. sabki alag soch hai. aur hum jhooti taarif nahi karte. aap sachme bahut achcha likhte ho. sach me aap "Kamaal" likhte ho. aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne ye waali kavita bhi... sach...

hunar aapme me tha humne bas ehsaas dila diya,
dulhan aap hi the humne bas sringaar kar diya,
likhne ki kala aapne bahut khoob hai,
aapse kehke humne bas aghaaz kar diya,
kalam ko aapne tijori me band kar rakha tha,
aapse kek k humne use azaad kar diya....

Quote from: neelgold on April 08, 2010, 09:09:06 PM
MAdhu ji APp kapil ki baton main maat aana .......... I m no whr in front of u guys.......

U guys r really amzing....
 Kapil aap ko

App ne jo saraha hum ko hum to youn hi itrah gaye...
Jana kahi aur tha kahi aur hi aah gaye.....
Jamin pe kadam paad nahi humare..
Lagta hai hum Udh ke asaman pe aah gaye.........
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«Reply #21 on: April 09, 2010, 09:34:24 PM »
Hey KApil... ( c no Ji ANymre) .. Maine muqbla ache way se kaha hai doosre way se nhi ... I AM SOrry agr aap ko aisa laga ....
Aree main to apne dushmn se b fight nahi karti to Dosto se to door ki baat hai ....... Actual in dis world Thr's no bad ppl yha koi dusman nahi hai yeh hota hai apna Nazriya ... .... I belive in Good Toughts .....

My God maine to ek lecture likh diya yaha ... u can c d change .. yeh saab aap logon se hi aah rehi hai aap  saab ki wirintgs paad ke ... bhut kuch sikhne ko mil reha hai .......

Thnx 4 bieng so supportive ...... ur relly vry gud human being ..
alwyz keep smiling ......God bless u  and dnt 4gt to give ur valuable commnt to my posting each & evry cmmnt means a lotttttttttttt 2 me

THanx...........
Quote from: klaskar on April 09, 2010, 07:19:31 PM
bahut bahut saara thanx aapke liye Neel... aapne to taarifon k pul hi baandh diye... itna bhi kuch khaas nahi likha ... aur aap hamara dil tod rahi hain muqable ki baat karke... yahan hum ladai thode na kar rahe hain? bas apne feelings share karte hain. aap apne shabdon me aur hum apne. agar aap muqable ki baat karenge to hum aapke posts pe likhna chhod denge. main chahta hi hoon ki aap haste muskurate rahen. tabhi "kamal" likha. aur aapne sach me kamal likha hai. waise Kapil k baad mujhe "Ji" achcha nahi laga.

aapke reply ka intezaar rahega humko. n u are always welcome.
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«Reply #22 on: April 09, 2010, 09:36:18 PM »
WAh Janab Kya bat hai .....

Fir aaap mante ho na Ki u r supprtive & very helpful ..

THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXx
Quote from: klaskar on April 09, 2010, 07:37:39 PM
Neel... yahaan koi kisi se kam nahi hai. har koi ek se badhkar ek hai. aur aap bhi unme se ek hain. sabka alag andaaz hai. sabki alag soch hai. aur hum jhooti taarif nahi karte. aap sachme bahut achcha likhte ho. sach me aap "Kamaal" likhte ho. aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne ye waali kavita bhi... sach...

hunar aapme me tha humne bas ehsaas dila diya,
dulhan aap hi the humne bas sringaar kar diya,
likhne ki kala aapne bahut khoob hai,
aapse kehke humne bas aghaaz kar diya,
kalam ko aapne tijori me band kar rakha tha,
aapse kek k humne use azaad kar diya....
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«Reply #23 on: April 09, 2010, 11:57:18 PM »
Thanx 4 the sweet reply Neel...

Aapne bahut achca likha hai. maine kaha tha na aapse likhna shuru karenge to aap kya likh lenge aapko khud hi pata nahi chalega. bas dil se direct hoga har cheez. wahi ho raha hai. n I am very happy abt it.

Itne saare taarifon k liye bahut baut shukriya.Don't worry. main mazakh kar raha tha. Comment main jaroor dunga. aur wo comment nahi compliment hi hoga.

Keep writing. Aap bahut achcha likhte ho.

N u are always welcome

Quote from: neelgold on April 09, 2010, 09:34:24 PM
Hey KApil... ( c no Ji ANymre) .. Maine muqbla ache way se kaha hai doosre way se nhi ... I AM SOrry agr aap ko aisa laga ....
Aree main to apne dushmn se b fight nahi karti to Dosto se to door ki baat hai ....... Actual in dis world Thr's no bad ppl yha koi dusman nahi hai yeh hota hai apna Nazriya ... .... I belive in Good Toughts .....

My God maine to ek lecture likh diya yaha ... u can c d change .. yeh saab aap logon se hi aah rehi hai aap  saab ki wirintgs paad ke ... bhut kuch sikhne ko mil reha hai .......

Thnx 4 bieng so supportive ...... ur relly vry gud human being ..
alwyz keep smiling ......God bless u  and dnt 4gt to give ur valuable commnt to my posting each & evry cmmnt means a lotttttttttttt 2 me

THanx...........
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«Reply #24 on: April 09, 2010, 11:59:43 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Neel...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 09, 2010, 09:36:18 PM
WAh Janab Kya bat hai .....

Fir aaap mante ho na Ki u r supprtive & very helpful ..

THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXx
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«Reply #25 on: April 10, 2010, 12:38:49 AM »
Quote from: neelgold on April 07, 2010, 09:55:24 PM
APp ko kya bolo rajesh / Harish Huh???
Its 2 names 2ghtr

Rajesh is my first name
N Harish is my surname

It's ur choice what u want to call me
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«Reply #26 on: April 10, 2010, 12:42:08 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 08, 2010, 07:38:51 PM
Maan gaye Neel ji aapki kalam ko... bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki ye... mehboob k intzaar ke meethe dard ko bahut ki khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon k mala me piroya hai... lajawaab Neel ji... aapke hi shabdon me kehte hai... aapne "KAMAAL" kar diya... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Do panktiyaan maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hain...

ab to gunah karne ki hamari aadat si ho gayi hai,
roz tumko yaad karne ki chahat si ho gayi hai,
khaamoshi teri roz aake kaano me kuch keh jaati hai,
kaise kahen teri har khamoshi ab sangeet si ho gayi hai,

ab to tere intezaar ki aadat si ho gayi hai,
har ghadi raah takne ki chahat si ho gayi hai,
ab to meri saanso me bhi tera hi basera hai,
lagta hai ki jaise tujhse preet si ho gayi hai...

Wah! kapil Ji bahut khoob likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #27 on: April 10, 2010, 01:04:58 AM »
Neel Ji, kuch likh raha hoon
Aap ki tarah umda lekh nahi hai


Aap gunah baar baar hi kiye ja rahe hain
Aur hum gunah kar ashq baha rahe hain
Aap mera intezaar aaj bhi kiye ja rahe hain
Ek hum hain ki  raha badal kar ja rahe hain
Aap bhool kar hume yaad kiye ja rahe hain
Aur hum yaad karke bhi bhulaye ja rahe hain
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«Reply #28 on: April 10, 2010, 10:50:14 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 10, 2010, 12:42:08 AM
Wah! kapil Ji bahut khoob likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #29 on: April 10, 2010, 10:51:18 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 10, 2010, 01:04:58 AM
Neel Ji, kuch likh raha hoon
Aap ki tarah umda lekh nahi hai


Aap gunah baar baar hi kiye ja rahe hain
Aur hum gunah kar ashq baha rahe hain
Aap mera intezaar aaj bhi kiye ja rahe hain
Ek hum hain ki  raha badal kar ja rahe hain
Aap bhool kar hume yaad kiye ja rahe hain
Aur hum yaad karke bhi bhulaye ja rahe hain
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