^^%Hum Dard Bhare Nigaha Se^^%

by honeyrose on August 21, 2008, 11:16:57 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 25, 2008, 08:51:43 AM »
bahut accha likha hai aapne jaya di
sabhi lines acchi hain...
keep going  Applause Applause Applause

Thanks diya dear...
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«Reply #16 on: August 26, 2008, 09:38:23 AM »
Meri aadat k chalte hue Fir der se aaya
Aur Jo Last Me aata Hai Woh comment nahi dete woh dua dete hai

Jee Honey aap ki Ye Nazm Me Jagah jagah Lafz b'Lafz dard k Ahesaas se Muzeyyal Hai..
Bahot hi Badhiya ashaar Likhe Hai aapne..
Har Ash'aar Pe Dua Dua Deta Hun Ki Kabhi aap Par Gamo k badal Umad kar na aaye..
Allaah aap ko Zer-e-saay-e-Karam Rakhe Sada
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«Reply #17 on: August 26, 2008, 09:45:15 AM »
wah wah sali sahiba din-b-din aap behtar se behtareen likhti ja rahi hain..aur khas tour se dard me....... Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: August 26, 2008, 10:38:51 AM »
Meri aadat k chalte hue Fir der se aaya
Aur Jo Last Me aata Hai Woh comment nahi dete woh dua dete hai

Jee Honey aap ki Ye Nazm Me Jagah jagah Lafz b'Lafz dard k Ahesaas se Muzeyyal Hai..
Bahot hi Badhiya ashaar Likhe Hai aapne..
Har Ash'aar Pe Dua Dua Deta Hun Ki Kabhi aap Par Gamo k badal Umad kar na aaye..
Allaah aap ko Zer-e-saay-e-Karam Rakhe Sada
Aamin

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Aaj aapki baaton se mujhe bohat bohat khushi hue ki aapki dua hai
mere saath aur mujhe kya chahiye doston ka pyaar aur dua hi
zindagi ki umeed hai shukriya raza ji aapka... happy9.





wah wah sali sahiba din-b-din aap behtar se behtareen likhti ja rahi hain..aur khas tour se dard me....... Applause Applause

Shukriya Sanjeev jiju joh aapne mera likha pasand kiya
thanks so much.... happy9
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«Reply #19 on: November 09, 2008, 10:44:16 AM »
Dard Hi Dard Hai Naseeb Me To Kya Hua,
Duniya Me Sab Ajeeb Hai To Kya Hua,
Mujhe Marne Ka Dar Zara Sa Bhi Nahi Hai,
Jeene Chale The Mar Gaya To Kya Hua 

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«Reply #20 on: November 09, 2008, 02:13:03 PM »
Bahoot Badiya Didi Jaan,.
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«Reply #21 on: November 09, 2008, 02:16:12 PM »
Hume Mohabbat Bhari Nigaahon Se, Ab Kaun Dekhega,.
Bharliya Hai Dard Humne Bhi, Apni Nigaahon Mein,.

Milti Rahi, Kuch Galiyon Se, Mohabbat Mujhe "Azeem,.
Ab Tu Bhi Dekhle,,
Bhardiye Hain Kismat Ne Kaante Bhi Meri Raahon Mein,.

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«Reply #22 on: November 10, 2008, 07:19:13 AM »
 

Shukriya bhai...


Umeed ki roshni se na door hona tum
Muhabbat bhari nigaahon se na door hona tum

Ek na ek roz badal jaayegi kismat na darna tum
Kadam kadam pe toofano ka samna hoga hosla rakhna tum...

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«Reply #23 on: November 10, 2008, 01:52:55 PM »
Shukriya Didi And Nice One,.
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«Reply #24 on: November 10, 2008, 01:59:17 PM »
Shukriya bhai....
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«Reply #25 on: November 10, 2008, 02:15:00 PM »
Hum Apna Dard Nigaahon Se Bhi Bayaan Kar Dete,.
Magar, Darr Tha, ke Meri Bebasi, Tumhaari Ruswaai Na Banjaaye,.

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«Reply #26 on: November 10, 2008, 02:52:18 PM »
 


Mere zindagi mein sirf nafrat hi likhi thi
Nigaahon se dekhu to zindagi ke aakri safar dikhi thi..

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«Reply #27 on: November 10, 2008, 03:10:08 PM »



Mere zindagi mein sirf nafrat hi likhi thi
Nigaahon se dekhu to zindagi ke aakri safar dikhi thi..

_____________honeyrose__________





Mere zindagi mein sirf nafrat hi likhi thi
Nigaahon se dekhu to zindagi ke aakri safar dikhi thi..

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Tumhe Kuch To Haasil Hua Is Zamaane Se "Jaya",.
Hamaare Hisse Mein Kisi Ki Nafrat Bhi Na Mili,.

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«Reply #28 on: November 10, 2008, 09:54:48 PM »
...good work Honey...i loved to read your post...it was a nice one...good going...
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