HUm ne to.....

by Princess21 on February 12, 2005, 11:57:44 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: February 12, 2005, 02:27:02 PM »
wahhhh!!!!! bohot ache princess sis!

jiski na umeed ti woh kam tumne aaj kar diya,
pyar me bewafai ka jam tumne mere nam kar diya,
ujale se pyar jo karne lage te hum jab,
din ko hi tumne andheri sham kar diya!
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #16 on: February 12, 2005, 02:28:22 PM »
Bhai koo faizanalnasar kee bhee tu tareef Karay....

Ques....
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #17 on: February 12, 2005, 02:30:35 PM »
Well said Meena..

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jiski na umeed ti woh kam tumne aaj kar diya,
pyar me bewafai ka jam tumne mere nam kar diya,
ujale se pyar jo karne lage te hum jab,
din ko hi tumne andheri sham kar diya!

"
Well said Meenaji....

Ques..
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thycreator
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«Reply #18 on: February 12, 2005, 02:30:58 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wahhhh!!!!! bohot ache princess sis!

jiski na umeed ti woh kam tumne aaj kar diya,
pyar me bewafai ka jam tumne mere nam kar diya,
ujale se pyar jo karne lage te hum jab,
din ko hi tumne andheri sham kar diya!


Wah Meena ji.........apki batein din ba din gehri hoti ja rahi hai... :wink:

Pyar ka naam aaj bewafai hone laga hai,
Mehboob ke khayal se hi dil rone laga hai,
Aisi hawa chali hai aaj bahare chaman mein,
Khuda par se bhi ab toh vishwas khone laga hai.
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #19 on: February 12, 2005, 02:36:31 PM »
Well said theCreator..

"
Pyar ka naam aaj bewafai hone laga hai,
Mehboob ke khayal se hi dil rone laga hai,
"
I like this the most...

And make it like this..
"
Aisi hawa chali hai aaj bahare chaman mein
Khuda par he yakee honay lagaa hai...
"
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Meena
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«Reply #20 on: February 12, 2005, 02:36:59 PM »
shukriya Qutubuddin ji aur creator ji! halat gehri bate sikha di dete hai na  :wink: aapne bhi bohot acha likha!

sach hai ke vishwas ki dhoor haath se chutne lagi,
haath ke zakhmo se mere hi khoon me rangne lagi,
kaise hifazaz kare aab us dhoor ki hum,
jab apno ki chahat hi zakhmo me namak lagane lagi!
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Meena
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«Reply #21 on: February 12, 2005, 02:37:15 PM »
shukriya Qutubuddin ji aur creator ji! halat gehri bate sikha di dete hai na  :wink: aapne bhi bohot acha likha!

sach hai ke vishwas ki dhoor aab haath se chutne lagi,
haath ke zakhmo se mere hi khoon me rangne lagi,
kaise hifazaz kare aab us dhoor ki hum,
jab apno ki chahat hi zakhmo me namak lagane lagi!
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thycreator
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«Reply #22 on: February 12, 2005, 02:44:30 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
shukriya Qutubuddin ji aur creator ji! halat gehri bate sikha di dete hai na  :wink: aapne bhi bohot acha likha!

sach hai ke vishwas ki dhoor aab haath se chutne lagi,
haath ke zakhmo se mere hi khoon me rangne lagi,
kaise hifazaz kare aab us dhoor ki hum,
jab apno ki chahat hi zakhmo me namak lagane lagi!


Wah.....

Koi apna tumhare samne sab kuch liye khada tha,
Tumne jana hi nahi ki uska dil kitna bada tha,
Ek vishwas ka diya bhi nahi jalaya tumne,
Wo tumhare liye jane kitne apno se lada tha...
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Meena
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2005, 02:54:11 PM »
niceee creator ji!!!!

aya tha ek shaks jo mere dhar par,
pyar aur vishwas ki puri umeed lekar,
diya (deepak) apne armano ka haath me uske rakh diya,
apne raste chal diya wo lafzo se us diye ko hi buja kar!
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pandit
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«Reply #24 on: February 12, 2005, 02:59:13 PM »
gud ........
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thycreator
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«Reply #25 on: February 12, 2005, 02:59:25 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
niceee creator ji!!!!

aya tha ek shaks jo mere dhar par,
pyar aur vishwas ki puri umeed lekar,
diya (deepak) apne armano ka haath me uske rakh diya,
apne raste chal diya wo lafzo se us diye ko hi buja kar!


Hmmmmm...

Kisne bujhaya hai armaano ka diya ye jante ho tum,
Apne pyar par hi tum bharosa kar nahi sake.......
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Meena
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«Reply #26 on: February 12, 2005, 03:06:16 PM »
hmmmm
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #27 on: February 12, 2005, 03:12:20 PM »
Well Said thycreator...

Wo tumhare liye jane kitne apno se lada tha...

Bahoot Khoob...

Ques...
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thycreator
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«Reply #28 on: February 12, 2005, 03:15:22 PM »
Quote from: "Qutubuddin"
Well Said thycreator...

Wo tumhare liye jane kitne apno se lada tha...

Bahoot Khoob...

Ques...


Thanx Qutubuddin ji........ tongue3
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Princess21
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«Reply #29 on: February 13, 2005, 01:20:53 AM »
Thnx meena sis....
wowwwwwwww meenaaaaaaa sisssssss kya bat ha..................bohut acha likha ha...
everyone gr8 jobbbbbb!!!!!!!

tu ne humain buss dard dya...
humain to tum ne bhula bhi dya...
humare dard ko kon samjhe ga...
tum ne to humain apno se hi door kar dya...
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