Isme Meri Mohabbat Ki Bhi To Rushwai Hai

by majid on February 24, 2009, 08:40:28 AM
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #30 on: March 13, 2009, 05:43:15 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on February 24, 2009, 08:40:28 AM
Shaam Hai Sindoori Aur Udaas Ghata Chhayi Hai
Aankhein Hai Nam Aur Saamne Khadi Tanhaai Hai

Khil Se Gaye Hain Saare Zakhm Phoolon Ki Tarha
Woh Pichli Yaadein Phir Mujhse Milne Aayi Hai.

Khidke Se Zara Sa Meine Jhank Kar Kya Dekha Ki
Dhalte Hue Chand Mein Ik Surat Nazar Aayi Hai.

Mumkin Nahi Shayad Ab Is Janam Mein Mil Paana
Is Qadar Mujhe Dasti Rehti Ye Zehar.e.Judaai Hai

Kaise Likhudu Mehfilon Mein Bewafaa Usko Shihab
Aakhir Isme Meri Bhi Mohabbat Ki To Rushwaai Hai.

Nice one Shihab Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #31 on: March 13, 2009, 05:44:47 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on February 28, 2009, 04:33:59 PM
Shukriya Majid.. Nice reply by you too..  Applause Applause

Bewafaiyon ka charcha bhi kuch is qadar kiya tune,
Ek hi Pal mein is dilko mom se patthar bana diya tune,

jazbaat mere the kuch haseen masoom se khwaabon jaise,
ruswaiyon ke dar se inhe ansuon ke hawale kar diya tune...

Nice response Angel Ji
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angel4u
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«Reply #32 on: March 13, 2009, 06:23:45 PM »
Thanks Rajesh Ji...
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dead heart
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«Reply #33 on: March 13, 2009, 08:20:39 PM »
Shukriya Angel jee aur Shihab bhaijan...Kamal ka likh rahe ho aap dono Applause bas lavz nahin milte Rahim ko ap dono ki tarif main...
ek purana shaer yaad agaya mujhe jo likha tha maine...Angel jee apke yeh 4 lines ka unt "ki tarha" ke upar yeh 4 lines hazir hai...

zindagi bikhar gayi hai ashkon ki tarha,
unko pyaar karke Rahim toot gaya lehron ki tarha,
kash woh humare hojate;yehi dua thi humari,
par woh bhi paraye nikli; humari saanson ki tarha...
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angel4u
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«Reply #34 on: March 14, 2009, 05:41:52 AM »
Quote from: dead heart on March 13, 2009, 08:20:39 PM
Shukriya Angel jee aur Shihab bhaijan...Kamal ka likh rahe ho aap dono Applause bas lavz nahin milte Rahim ko ap dono ki tarif main...
ek purana shaer yaad agaya mujhe jo likha tha maine...Angel jee apke yeh 4 lines ka unt "ki tarha" ke upar yeh 4 lines hazir hai...

zindagi bikhar gayi hai ashkon ki tarha,
unko pyaar karke Rahim toot gaya lehron ki tarha,
kash woh humare hojate;yehi dua thi humari,
par woh bhi paraye nikli; humari saanson ki tarha...

Bahut hi khoobsurat lines hai ye...

Kuchh is tarah aata hai ab wo mere ashqon ko jalane,
chaand jaise jalata ho dharti ko suraj ki tarah...
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dead heart
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«Reply #35 on: March 14, 2009, 07:01:48 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on March 14, 2009, 05:41:52 AM
Bahut hi khoobsurat lines hai ye...

Kuchh is tarah aata hai ab wo mere ashqon ko jalane,
chaand jaise jalata ho dharti ko suraj ki tarah...
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Angel jee aur apki do lines kamal ki hai...

pathar ka dil jaag gaya ek sapne ke bad,
dafan dil zinda hogaya ek arse ke bad,
kash hum unka haath tham sakte,
par yeh khwahish bhi adhuri rehgayi; humari zindgi ki tarha...
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angel4u
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«Reply #36 on: March 21, 2009, 06:03:45 PM »
Bahut achhe dh...

tujhe chaha hai humne apni saanson ki tarah,
dhadkano ka saaz chala teri aahaton ki tarah,

socha tha ke na intezaar karenge tera yun ab,
aankhein takti hai teri raah bhatke musafir ki tarah...
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dead heart
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«Reply #37 on: March 21, 2009, 07:48:15 PM »
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Angel jee aur apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai...

woh pyaar karne ka jutha natak karta raha tujse Rahim,
tu phasta gaya uske jhal main ek bebas insaan ki tarha...
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angel4u
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«Reply #38 on: March 22, 2009, 04:50:26 AM »
Quote from: dead heart on March 21, 2009, 07:48:15 PM
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Angel jee aur apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai...

woh pyaar karne ka jutha natak karta raha tujse Rahim,
tu phasta gaya uske jhal main ek bebas insaan ki tarha...




Nice one gain DH...

jaal aisa buna tha usne jhuthe khwaaabon ka,
waaqif to tha mera har lamha uski is saazish ka,

phir bhi samajhte the pighlega wo patthar dil sanam,
kinare aake doob gaye, ye manzar tha meri barbaadi ka...
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dead heart
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«Reply #39 on: March 22, 2009, 01:38:23 PM »
Shukriya Angel jee aur apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai... Applause

Manzar barbadi ka tujse acha kaun jann sakta hai Rahim,
Jo the bewaffa aj khud kisi bewaffa ki shikayat lekar aye hai...
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angel4u
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«Reply #40 on: March 22, 2009, 01:50:57 PM »
Thanks DH. once again good one..

agar dil todna tere liye wafa ki baat hia to,
tujhse zyada wafadaar koi nahi is jahan mein,

chalo pighal hi jaate hia is qabr ki mitti mein,
isse zyada sukoon kahan milega kisi aur jahan mein...
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dead heart
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«Reply #41 on: March 22, 2009, 01:58:40 PM »
Shukriya Angel jee and nice one again especially the first stanza... Applause

Kabse pighal gaya tera dil iss mitti main Rahim,
Dekh woh zalim aaj tujhe wahan bhi dard dena agaya...
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Roja
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«Reply #42 on: March 22, 2009, 02:14:19 PM »
Wah very good going Rahim ji and Angel dear. Thumbs UP
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dead heart
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«Reply #43 on: March 22, 2009, 02:23:11 PM »
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Roja jee hosla afzai ke liye...
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angel4u
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«Reply #44 on: March 28, 2009, 02:33:07 PM »
Quote from: dead heart on March 22, 2009, 01:58:40 PM
Shukriya Angel jee and nice one again especially the first stanza... Applause

Kabse pighal gaya tera dil iss mitti main Rahim,
Dekh woh zalim aaj tujhe wahan bhi dard dena agaya...

Good one..

Khud ka dard hi itna anmol ho jayega us bedard ke liye socha na tha,
kaise batayein use ye mitti aaj bhi gili hai mere ashqon ki nami se...
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