Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain. -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: September 21, 2013, 01:49:56 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 20, 2013, 09:43:01 PM

Cheekhtiin maazi ki hain perchhaiin,
ujade kooche se jab guzarte hain.

Toote sheeshe si hai hasti apni,
sirf chhoone se hi bikharte hain.

bahut bahut khoob Ram Saraswat ji. bahut mubarakbaad.

Bahut bahut shukriya Siddiqui Saheb


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #16 on: September 21, 2013, 04:52:08 AM »

Saraswat Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob jee bade umdaa khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...

Kafi khoob ashaar huye haiN sabhi... puri kalaam hi umdaa huyi haiN sahaaB... Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN aik baat hume thik nahi lagi ke aapne matle meiN jo kafiye liye haiN unhe baaqi ke ashaaroN ke kafiye se alag hi rakh diyaa...
Humari baat durust lage toH matla badal dijiye... Puri kalaam shaandaar ho jayeNgi...
Gar koi gustaqui huyi toH muafi ke talabgaar haiN...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #17 on: September 21, 2013, 07:48:55 PM »

Waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah ram ji.. behad umda peshkash.. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye.. is umda kalaam par meri hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #18 on: September 22, 2013, 12:12:57 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 21, 2013, 04:52:08 AM

Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaazji.

Mashware ke liye bhi shukriya, Haan, yeh baat mere jehn mein bhi aai thi.Lekin matle ke baad jo kuchh kahana chaah raha tha wo matle se mail nahi kar pa raha tha. Is liye, maine karte , sawarte, darte ko Qafiya aur Hain ko radeef lekar chalna hi durust samjha. Ummed hai aap mujh se muttafiq honge. Waise main koshish karoonga kisi aur matle ki .


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #19 on: September 22, 2013, 12:15:49 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on September 21, 2013, 07:48:55 PM

Waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah ram ji.. behad umda peshkash.. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye.. is umda kalaam par meri hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...

Bahut bahut shukriya Aqshji


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #20 on: September 22, 2013, 04:03:52 PM »

bahot khoooob, dheron daaad Applause


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #21 on: September 22, 2013, 04:32:24 PM »

Bade hi gehre aur dil ko chhoone waale ehsaasaat bayaan kiye apne Ram ji .. Apko dheron daad !!!


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #22 on: September 22, 2013, 11:27:11 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on September 22, 2013, 04:03:52 PM

bahot khoooob, dheron daaad Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Iqtedarji


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Re: Jab ujadta hai nasheman mera, kyon nadeemon ke ghar sawarte hain.

«Reply #23 on: September 22, 2013, 11:29:15 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on September 22, 2013, 04:32:24 PM

Bade hi gehre aur dil ko chhoone waale ehsaasaat bayaan kiye apne Ram ji .. Apko dheron daad !!!

Bahut bahut shukriya Zarraaji


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