Jee karta hai ......

by Just_Hate_Love on April 15, 2005, 07:26:32 AM
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«Reply #30 on: May 09, 2005, 08:50:16 AM »
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Nidhi, JHL and Waheed bohat khoob... dill tak lagay sher iss thread per...

Always Anjli
wah naveed,bohat khoob,thanx anjali. Usual Smile khushi hui apko sher pasand aaya.
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«Reply #31 on: May 09, 2005, 09:25:25 AM »
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wah waheed,wat a reply,wonderful yaar,thanx.
Thanx naveed,JHL,Aryaan and ISha,thanx a lot Usual Smile

Nice one JHL.


ur  always........welcome  nidhi...........Just_Hate_Love....aryan.....& All....

very  nice.........Just_Hate_Love........naveed........ ......
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«Reply #32 on: May 17, 2005, 11:51:05 AM »
Thanks Waheed ...


Yaad aaye kabhi to aakhen bandh na karna,
Hum chale bhi jaaye to ghum na karna,
Yeh zaroori nahi har rishtey ka koi naam ho par,
Dosti ka ehsaas dil se kam na karna ...
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«Reply #33 on: May 17, 2005, 11:54:49 AM »
kya faida ehsaas-e-dosti ka tuharey  
jab waffa ka naam hi nhi jantey ho !!
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«Reply #34 on: May 17, 2005, 12:03:50 PM »
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Thanks Meenaji a lot ...


Woh aayi thi to ajnabi gayi to jaan bankar,
Mezbaan ko loot liya hai usne mehmaan bankar,
Badnaseeb hai meri yaa meri kambakhti hai,
Dil mein jo haan hai hotho pe aati hai na bankar ...


kya baat hai JHL very nice wording really good

jaan keh kar jo mujhe bhulata tha kal tak
usshi mera aashique ne meri jaan le li
ki aaur se jodke rista meri pehchaan le li
kaise sahenge hum uski bewaffai usne tuh meri har saans le li
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«Reply #35 on: May 17, 2005, 12:08:04 PM »
Wahhh ... bahut hi  khoob likha hai Sandhya ...



Daaman bachake baithe hai,
Nazre jhukaake baithe hai,
Hum zinda hai phir bhi wo,
Aansu bahaa ke baithe hai,
Shaadi hai hamaari aur wo,
Mehandi lagaake baithe hai ...
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«Reply #36 on: May 17, 2005, 12:13:37 PM »
dil ki chotton(zakham) ne kabhi chain se rehne na diya
jab chaki sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska gum nahi ke tumne dil kiya barbaad
iska gum hai ke bohat der mein bardaad kiya,
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«Reply #37 on: May 17, 2005, 03:06:22 PM »
waaahhhh...JHL,sandhaya,tajinder.all r mindblowing.

"Dil me mere umeed aaj bohat hai......,
 afsos hai mujhe yakeen kyon kam hai,
 vishwas hai tujhpar mujhe khud se zyada,
 phir aaj dil me roshni kyon kam hai."
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«Reply #38 on: May 17, 2005, 08:17:38 PM »
Zindagi
Ek azab si paheli hai zindagi
Sabke saath hote hue bhi akeli hai zindagi
Kabhi to ek pyara sa arman hai zindagi
To kabhi dard se bhara tufan hai zindagi
Kabhi to gulon se bhara gulistan hai zindagi
To kabhi katon se bhara rasta hai zindagi
Kabhi phoolon jaisi masoom ho jati hai zindagi
To kabhi gunahon ka bojh ban jati hai zindagi
Koi to bata de mujhe kya hai zindagi
Suna hai chand roj ki mehman hai zindagi
Zindagi ko chod kar ek din jana padega
Maut ko us din gale lagana padega
Zindagi se chahe jitna pyar tum karlo
Hoti to akhir bewafa hai zindagi
E bande ke kuch ese jee ke ja yeh zindagi
Ke ban jaye ek ehsaas ek itihas zindagi
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«Reply #39 on: May 28, 2005, 06:39:56 PM »
Thanks a lot Nidhi ...

Hamare to chahne waale kam hai,
Isi baat ka to hame ghum hai ...


Khair koi baat nahi ...
Aapne bhi khoob likha hai ...
Keep writing ...
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«Reply #40 on: June 26, 2005, 06:33:06 AM »
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"Kisi ki yaad is kadar aa rahi hai,
 kyon aaj jaan meri jaa rahi hai,
 kaash tu aa jaye ek baar mere paas,
 khushi khushi lungi,jeevan ki akhiri saans."


LOVED this one...

So descriptive... so.... so..... wow. I don't even know what to say.
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«Reply #41 on: June 26, 2005, 10:35:37 AM »
"Kisi ki yaad is kadar aa rahi hai,
 kyon aaj jaan meri jaa rahi hai,
 kaash tu aa jaye ek baar mere paas,
 khushi khushi lungi,jeevan ki akhiri saans."[/quote]


Aap kyu zindagi ki aakhri saanse gin rahi hai,
Hum aur aap pehle jahaa the ab bhi wahi hai,
Ye mat socho ki is zindagi mein kitne pal hai,
Par socho ki is pal mein kitni zindagi hai ...
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«Reply #42 on: June 30, 2005, 05:47:04 PM »
Phool hi phool the kal raahon mein,
Kadam kadam par aaj hai kaante,
Tum bichhre to kaun hai ab jo,
Dard-e-dil ko mere baante ...
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«Reply #43 on: July 07, 2005, 08:43:18 AM »
Zindagi hame dekh kar tadap ti hai,
Maut hamare haal par tarasti hai ...
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«Reply #44 on: July 15, 2005, 04:53:37 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"


"Kisi ki yaad is kadar aa rahi hai,
 kyon aaj jaan meri jaa rahi hai,
 kaash tu aa jaye ek baar mere paas,
 khushi khushi lungi,jeevan ki akhiri saans."


LOVED this one...

So descriptive... so.... so..... wow. I don't even know what to say.


Thanx Unicorn :D

Bohat acche JHL,very well said .
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