kab tak........

by Pooja on January 28, 2005, 01:53:09 AM

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Pooja

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«Reply #315 on: August 09, 2007, 07:38:49 PM »

nice lines Manav ji!! apki lines pard kar jo man mai ayya wo hi likh rahi hu:

Khushio se dard bhulaya ja sakta hai, mitaya jaata nahi
Beet gaya jo waqat, wo kisi haal wapis laya jaata nahi
Tinka tinka kar ke banaya jo ashiana, toot gaya wo pal main
Basa kar naya ashiyana, wo toot.ta pal mitaya jaata nahi!!!


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kab tak........

«Reply #316 on: August 09, 2007, 07:54:28 PM »

meena ji bahoot hi acha likha hai!!! jawab wapis akar deti hu!!


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kab tak........

«Reply #317 on: August 10, 2007, 03:25:50 PM »

Nice Nice .... All ..

Dhahkta hua khoffnak manzar kab tak?
Dard ka aakhir yeh samandar kab tak?
Kabhi to koi roshni ki kiran aaye, moula
Rahega yeh andera dil ke ander kab tak?

HumTum


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Pooja

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kab tak........

«Reply #318 on: August 10, 2007, 07:53:46 PM »

bahoot khoob humtum ji!!


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harashmahajan

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kab tak........

«Reply #319 on: August 11, 2007, 12:02:37 PM »

Pooja bahoot hi oomda likha tumne...ahsaas bahoot hi pursakooN hain dost......

Dil ka khayaal achha hai
Akele maiN sawaal achha hai
Lagta hai dost ruk jayeNgi sanse
Asliyat chhupane ka raj achha ha

poochhti hai kitna ahsaaN kerti hai
Duniya hai apna intzaam kerti hai
Na chhuuo is be-reham duniya ko
Tanha chhorh ker nakaam kerti hai

Chahte haiN woh wafa zafa deker
Chain tumko bhi nahiN saza deker
Gum ke sholoN ko kyuiN badate ho
Apni yadoN ki tum dawa deker.

Harash[/i][/color]


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Pooja

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kab tak........

«Reply #320 on: August 12, 2007, 08:30:15 AM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Harsh ji!! apki last four lines bahoot hi kamal hai!! very meaningful!!

Saja dekar use apna hi dil dukhaya hai
Ho kar juda usse, khud ko hi tadpaya hai
Akele mai socha karu bas yahi ab main
Kaya khoya hai kaya paya hai!!!


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_Vicky_

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kab tak........

«Reply #321 on: August 13, 2007, 01:35:37 PM »

Wah Kya Baat hai POOJA JI & HARASH ji.. Bahut Accha Likha Hai aap Dono ne.. !!! Usual Smile

Aansoo Ponch Liye the Humne, Ab Wo Phir Rulaane Aaye Hain,
Tabaah Karne Ke Baad Mujhko, Phir Pyaar Jataane Aaye Hain........

Kabhi Sochta Hoon Bhula Doon Unko, Par Dil Yeh Maanta Nahi,
Ki Ek Zakhm Aur Sahi Dil Par, Jahan Itne Zakhm Khaaye Hain........!!


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Pooja

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kab tak........

«Reply #322 on: August 14, 2007, 10:23:28 PM »

bahoot khoob Vicky ji!!!


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Pooja

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kab tak........

«Reply #323 on: August 24, 2007, 12:25:20 AM »

De kar dard, wo wafa apni jatate hai
Rula kar khoon ke ansoo, ansoo pochne atte hai
Issi bahne se ho jaate hai deedar unke
Issi khawaish main, unse her jkahm liye jaate hai