kab tak

by nishita on June 13, 2005, 06:08:21 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 15, 2005, 06:56:56 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Bohot Khoob Nishi... Sam n Humtum ...................................!!!


Thanks Talat !!
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«Reply #31 on: June 15, 2005, 06:57:53 PM »
Well written Nishita, Hum Tum n Samnoj ji........

Dard ki ek leher phir se dil mein jawan hai,
Lagta hai ki aane wala phir koi toofan hai,
Wo rashq karte hai ki hum dard mein bhi muskuraye,
Kaise kahe unko ki ab jane ko jaan hai.......
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«Reply #32 on: June 16, 2005, 10:12:02 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Bohot Khoob Nishi... Sam n Humtum ...................................!!!


thanks talat  Usual Smile ... and thy.. gud ones humtum n sam
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«Reply #33 on: June 17, 2005, 12:26:38 AM »
Quote from: "nishita"
thanks raj

dil dukhaya maine bhi tumhara haina
par pyar mein badlaa to nahi hota hai
hamesha kyun galat samajhte hain sab mujhe
mera bhi dil hai, dard mujhe bhi hota hai


bahut khoob

woh narazgi ko to  samajh gaye hamari
par mohabbat ko hamari samajh na paayega
dil dukhakar badla lu , dil dukhane waale se
aisa sochne se pehle hi ye deewana marr jayega

BOND
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«Reply #34 on: June 17, 2005, 11:50:05 AM »
bahut khoob

tu mera na ho saka, mujhe iska ghum nahi
per khud apna nahi raha mujhe iska malaal hai

kya haal hai tere bina mujhe iska ghum nahi
per bahti hai kyun aankh teri? mera ye sawaal hai

main nahi raho me teri mujhe iska ghum nahi
per tu akela hai abhi tak, ye to bada kamaal hai

kahta nahi apni kabhi, mujhe iska ghum nahi
per rakhta hai her khaber meri, ye acha mazaak hai
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«Reply #35 on: June 17, 2005, 07:48:15 PM »
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Quote from: "nishita"
thanks raj

dil dukhaya maine bhi tumhara haina
par pyar mein badlaa to nahi hota hai
hamesha kyun galat samajhte hain sab mujhe
mera bhi dil hai, dard mujhe bhi hota hai


bahut khoob

woh narazgi ko to  samajh gaye hamari
par mohabbat ko hamari samajh na paayega
dil dukhakar badla lu , dil dukhane waale se
aisa sochne se pehle hi ye deewana marr jayega

BOND


Kuch yaadein bikhri hain aaj fiza mein
Ho sake to inn ko samait loon
Urr na jaayein yeh pal waqt ki hawaa mein
Ho sake to inn ko apni mutthi main qaid kar loon
Aaj baarish bhi hai..
To yeh khwaahish bhi hai
Aaj jee bhar ke aansoo baha loon
Koi na dekh le, koi na jaan le
Main tere gham mein thora naha loon

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«Reply #36 on: June 17, 2005, 07:49:27 PM »
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bahut khoob

tu mera na ho saka, mujhe iska ghum nahi
per khud apna nahi raha mujhe iska malaal hai

kya haal hai tere bina mujhe iska ghum nahi
per bahti hai kyun aankh teri? mera ye sawaal hai

main nahi raho me teri mujhe iska ghum nahi
per tu akela hai abhi tak, ye to bada kamaal hai

kahta nahi apni kabhi, mujhe iska ghum nahi
per rakhta hai her khaber meri, ye acha mazaak hai


Harr zakhm dil pe, mujhe dil se dua de
Khushiyan tujhe, gham saare mujhko khuda de

(NM)
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«Reply #37 on: June 17, 2005, 10:18:00 PM »
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Quote from: "samnoj"
bahut khoob

tu mera na ho saka, mujhe iska ghum nahi
per khud apna nahi raha mujhe iska malaal hai

kya haal hai tere bina mujhe iska ghum nahi
per bahti hai kyun aankh teri? mera ye sawaal hai

main nahi raho me teri mujhe iska ghum nahi
per tu akela hai abhi tak, ye to bada kamaal hai

kahta nahi apni kabhi, mujhe iska ghum nahi
per rakhta hai her khaber meri, ye acha mazaak hai


Harr zakhm dil pe, mujhe dil se dua de
Khushiyan tujhe, gham saare mujhko khuda de

(NM)


bahot  khoob.........sam..................nishi......... ..............tongue3
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«Reply #38 on: June 17, 2005, 10:44:49 PM »
bohat khoob bond,samnoj. and nishi,bohat khoobsurat words hain.

"Ye barish hi to hai jo ansoo chupane deti hai,
  warna poori duniya ansoo bahaane deti hai."
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«Reply #39 on: June 18, 2005, 01:59:38 AM »
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thanks raj

dil dukhaya maine bhi tumhara haina
par pyar mein badlaa to nahi hota hai
hamesha kyun galat samajhte hain sab mujhe
mera bhi dil hai, dard mujhe bhi hota hai


bahut khoob

woh narazgi ko to  samajh gaye hamari
par mohabbat ko hamari samajh na paayega
dil dukhakar badla lu , dil dukhane waale se
aisa sochne se pehle hi ye deewana marr jayega

BOND


Kuch yaadein bikhri hain aaj fiza mein
Ho sake to inn ko samait loon
Urr na jaayein yeh pal waqt ki hawaa mein
Ho sake to inn ko apni mutthi main qaid kar loon
Aaj baarish bhi hai..
To yeh khwaahish bhi hai
Aaj jee bhar ke aansoo baha loon
Koi na dekh le, koi na jaan le
Main tere gham mein thora naha loon

NM

bahut khoob nishi...n nice sammy.....

meri har aah mein , bas tum hi tum hai
mere har khwaab mein , tum hi tum hai
jis gum ki barsaat mein bheeg rahe ho tum
usko ek ek boond mein bas tum hi tum ho

BOND
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«Reply #40 on: June 18, 2005, 01:57:50 PM »
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bohat khoob bond,samnoj. and nishi,bohat khoobsurat words hain.

"Ye barish hi to hai jo ansoo chupane deti hai,
  warna poori duniya ansoo bahaane deti hai."


wah  wah  wah  nidhi..kya  jabardast likhi ho.................bahot  khoob  bond.........
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«Reply #41 on: June 18, 2005, 05:39:49 PM »
bahut ache nidhi

khaber mili hai unki aankh ka paani gira hai
tab hi kahu kyu is derd ko mujhse gila hai

main zimmedaar nahi uski gili aankho ka
per khojti wajah ko pata sirf mera mila hai

hai ye aahat kis ke chori se aane ki
ki her kadam per koi aansu behta hua mila hai

dekha ro ker jab humne aankh se apni
hua ehsaas ki is aankh me koi ruka hai

tha ye aasaan ki main keh du ponch lo aansu
jhaka jab aankh me to paya ki sab mujh se mila hai
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«Reply #42 on: June 21, 2005, 04:22:00 PM »
waah nidhi and sam


Agar tapakta Ashkon ki jagah Lahoo aankhon se...
Koi kisi ko phir shayed hi rulaata...

Dil ke tootne ki hoti jo Awaaz...
Too tumhein mere dard ka andaza ho paata..

Yaadein jo na aati yun khamoshi se chupke chupke...
To mere ghar ki Rounaq hoti teri mehfil se bhi zyada..

Na hota agar chaand mein daag...
Teri khubsoorti ka mujhe tod mil jata...

Agar karta na koi kisi se bewafai...
To shayron mein mera naam kahan se aata..

NM
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«Reply #43 on: June 21, 2005, 08:11:36 PM »
marvellous nishita very good
aap bahut achcha likhti hain please hamesha yese hi rahana nisihta ji sukh aur dukh to zindagi ke do pahloo hain please be happy ok

yaadon ke saaye main kuch pal gujar leta hoo
tumhari bholi si surat is dil main utar leta hoo
tum aa jaao kabhi bhule se in raahon main
khuda se thori si zindagi aur udhar leta hoo
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«Reply #44 on: June 22, 2005, 04:39:28 PM »
waah sammy,nishi n poem........bahut achhe

daag duniyaa ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile
ham ko ye tohafe tumhein dost banaane se mile

ham tarasate hii taraste hii tarasate hii rahe
vo falaane se falaane se falaane se mile

khud se mil jaate to chaahat kaa bharam rah jaataa
kyaa mile aap jo logon ke milaane se mile

kaise maane ke unhein bhuul gayaa tuu ai 'Kaif'
un ke Khat aaj hamein tere sarahaane se mile

KIAF BHOPALI
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