KAHA.N LAILA KAHA.N MANJNU ....MKV

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«Reply #15 on: November 18, 2011, 09:06:51 AM »
bahut khooob...

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«Reply #16 on: November 18, 2011, 02:58:07 PM »
mkv ji,

Aaj aapki ghazal padhkar bahut
achchha laga...

Dheron mubaarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

Dar asal, bahut pahle isee tarah kee
radeef - qaafiye par maine ek ghazal
kahee thee us ka ek she'r kuchh yoon tha...

"kya fir se iraada hai, dariya meN nahaane kaa
 kya aag tujhe zaalim, paanee meN lagaanee hai"

                          --- Raqeeb Lucknowi

Wish you all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
Satish Sir
Hum bas apke bataye raste par chalne ki koshish kar rahe hai. Apne hamare liye itna samay diye uske liye shukriya...
Apne jo sher arz kiya hai..Vaah Vaah ..ek hi sher puri ghajal par bhari hai..
Bas yu hi ashirwaad dete rahiye.. mai janta hu abhi aur sudhaar ki jaroorat hai..
Thanks once again.
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«Reply #17 on: November 18, 2011, 10:35:26 PM »
mkv ji,

Bahut khoob ashaar pesh kiye hain apne. Behad khubsurti se lafzo ko sheron mein dhala hai. Daad...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Usha Ji
Ye to apke dekhne ka andaaj hai..Baaki meri koshish jaari hai..i expect negative comments also for improvement..
I hope u understand...
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«Reply #18 on: November 19, 2011, 05:51:52 PM »
wah mkv sahab--
bht umda peshkash

humari dili daad kubul karen

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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Shukriya Raaz Sahab
Bas yu hi sath dete rahe...
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«Reply #19 on: November 20, 2011, 02:56:08 PM »
Wah wah khoob likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
Thanks Sarvesh Sir
Apne saraaha, pasand kiya, hausla badhaya...
Bas aise hi pyar dete rahey..
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«Reply #20 on: November 20, 2011, 11:07:30 PM »
wahhh......... Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Mann Sir
Samay dene ke mai apka abhaari hu.n
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«Reply #21 on: November 22, 2011, 11:23:30 AM »
bakhubi lafjon ko piroya h aapne.....har lafj apni alag kahani keh rha ho jaise.....daad kabul kariye
Nikhaar Mam
Bahut bahut shukriya time dene ke liye..Bas banda apki hauslaafjai ka talabgaar hai...Thanks
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«Reply #22 on: November 23, 2011, 09:47:06 PM »
fabolus...
Thanks Sana
I've read ur few postings..good going..keep writing and keep visiting my posts..
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«Reply #23 on: November 24, 2011, 12:50:26 PM »
MKV Jee Aadaab!


Waah janab waah kia kahne waah behad khubsrat kalaam
kahi hai janab.. aaj waqai hume khud par fakhar ho raha
hai...  NaNaNa

bahut khoob janab.. behad achchi kalaam kahi hai sabhi
ashaar dili daad O mubarakbad ke kabil hai.. Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate haiN.. Usual Smile


Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Janab waqai achchi shayari ki hai puri kalaam meiN kisi aik sher meiN bhi
aapne koi kami nahi rahne di .. bahut bahut daad janab... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye.. Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye.. Usual Smile
Humari dheroN daad aur shubhkamnaaye aapke saath hai.. Khuda Kare aapki
kalam aise hi achchi kalaamoN ka inteqab karti rahe.. Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   


Shukriya Parwaaz Bhai
apne meri muraad poori kar di..
kab se aisi hauslaafjaai ki ummeed thi sochta tha ki kabhi milegi ya nahi..jaane anjaane poori ho gayi.. mujhse jyada mehnat to apne comment karne me ki, itna time diya, uske liye tah-e-dil se apka shukragujaar hu.
apki dee naseehto ka dhyan rakhunga aur usse poori tarah se sahmat hu.n.
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«Reply #24 on: November 25, 2011, 07:58:45 AM »
bahut khooob...
Thanks Khata ji
Bas yu hi sath dete rahe yahi gujaarish hai..Keep visiting
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«Reply #25 on: November 26, 2011, 11:59:08 PM »
umda peshkash mkv ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: November 28, 2011, 06:43:55 PM »
umda peshkash mkv ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Touhid bhai
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«Reply #27 on: November 30, 2011, 07:07:38 PM »
MKV ji
I don't understand much but i enjoyed reading it.
u've covered the aspects of life beautifully.
just seen the news of YOindia and thought why not to start from you.

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«Reply #28 on: January 06, 2012, 12:59:18 PM »
MKV ji
I don't understand much but i enjoyed reading it.
u've covered the aspects of life beautifully.
just seen the news of YOindia and thought why not to start from you.


Thanks a lot Raaja
i'm really honoured.
wish u all the best & HNY
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