<>*Khwaab adhure*<> -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: March 28, 2011, 06:51:14 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on March 26, 2011, 04:58:34 PM

<>*Khwaab adhure*<> tearyeyed

Khwaab adhure kai meri palkon me chhipe rehte hain
Tute kaanch ki kirchan se aankhon me chubhte rehte hain

Reh jati hun main har raat ko bas tadapkar yunhi
Jab ye meri aankhon se bas ninden churate rehte hain

Sehmi si chupchap takti rehti hun main inhe kafi der tak
Jab savere ye mujhe bistar pe apne bikhre hue milte hain

Kasmasate aur simatte aur kabhi mujhpar haste hue
Ye mere nainon se har roz ashk banke pighalte hain

Sametna chahti hun jab main inhe hatheliyon me apni
Ye aur bhi zyada mere bistar ki chaadar se chipakte hain

Uthakar inhe main fir sahejkar rakhti hun apni dairy me
Ye har raat wahan se fir chupke se bhaag nikalte hain

Har raat ki tarah aaj bhi ye meri aanhon me bas jayenge
Dekhna hai kal ye kitne gehre meri palkon me chubhte hain….!!!

anu ji bahut badhiya poem he apki..
improvement to ho hi raha he apme..
dher saari daad~

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 27, 2011, 07:25:22 AM

bht bht khoob anu di...
3rd one bht accha laga mujhe...
bht pahle kuch likha tha isi theme par..
adhura hai par share kar rahi hu...

Aankho me sari raat ghule..
tera sapna din or raat jale..

main tanhayi me jab baithu...
ye sapna meri aankho me pale..

nice reply ki koshish priyaaa..
eise hi paglati ..mera matlab likhti rahoo..hihi

Quote from: heena i.s on March 27, 2011, 10:39:12 AM

manzil-e-ishq aap ki shayari puri karne ki ye koshish............

adhura hai vo sapna bhale
use puri karne ki aas is dil me jale

nice one heena ..

Quote from: Intezar on March 26, 2011, 05:03:50 PM

suna tha raaton ko aksar dard bahut huaa karta hai...
aaj khuli aankh teri aahat par to mehsus bhi kar liya humne... !

bahut khubsurat Kasak ji... bahut din baad aaj yo par aaye hain aur aap ki ye Peshkash dekhi dil khush ho gaya... !

aap yunhi likhte rehiye... hum to kisi kaabil rahe nahin ab...

Intezar !

intezaar ji bade gam me lag rahe hoo...
par likha bada achha he..
badhiya reply..
daad`


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Re: <>*Khwaab adhure*<>

«Reply #16 on: March 28, 2011, 09:43:23 AM »

Quote from: saahill on March 26, 2011, 05:28:07 PM

ADHOORE KHAWAB ANKHON SE NIKAL DIYE KARTEY HAIN,
JO TORH JAYE DIL KABHI TO KYUN USKE LIYE MARTEY HAIN

bht hi achchi lines saahil
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«Reply #17 on: March 28, 2011, 09:48:00 AM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on March 26, 2011, 05:40:30 PM

Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Anamika Ji

Quote from: nirala on March 26, 2011, 05:41:01 PM

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 27, 2011, 11:54:36 AM

Anamika di aur Priya di,
bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!

mummy ji..ye sirf kavita hi hai na

rishi nirala ji aur rahim ..bht bht shukriya aap 3no ka iss tarah sath nibhane ka....


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Re: <>*Khwaab adhure*<>

«Reply #18 on: March 28, 2011, 09:49:43 AM »

samj kar inhe kuch lafz yun ehsas ko mere khatam karna ,

kar do chahe dil se dhoor apni soch se kabhi dhoor na karna


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«Reply #19 on: March 28, 2011, 09:53:31 AM »

bahut bahut khub kasak..... dard ka ehsas.... kya kahun....

Applause


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Re: <>*Khwaab adhure*<>

«Reply #20 on: March 28, 2011, 10:01:00 AM »

DARD SEHKAR HI DARD KA EHSAS HOTA HAI,

DARD KAB KISI KE LIYE KHAS HOTA HAI ,

DARD MEIN JEENE SE TO MARNA KHAS HOTA HAI.

PHIR BHI DARD SE RISHTA KUCH KHAS BAN JATA HAI,
JAB CHORH JAYE DIL TORH KAR TO TANHAYEE MEIN DARD HI PAS HOTA HAI


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Re: <>*Khwaab adhure*<>

«Reply #21 on: March 28, 2011, 10:12:37 AM »

hmm………


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«Reply #22 on: April 08, 2011, 04:50:31 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on March 26, 2011, 04:58:34 PM

<>*Khwaab adhure*<> tearyeyed

Very Impressive .. Very Touching ...... Kasak Ji !

Good Expression ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... Applause


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«Reply #23 on: April 08, 2011, 12:56:33 PM »

Wonderful Creation Anamika ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat ehsaas base hai issme.. Bahoot Umda !!!!


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