Kitne sapne sajay the maine!!!

by ANKUR_CRAZY on March 05, 2007, 10:17:24 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 10, 2007, 05:25:48 PM »
Quote from: "Ravi_Dave"
Brilliant AnkurJi!



thanx ravi :D
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«Reply #16 on: March 12, 2007, 06:36:00 AM »
nice written pooja ji...

kitne sapne sjaye the maine...
sab kyun mujhe sab dur hue hai

chah the jinko maine
kyun mujhe sab khafa hue hai

apni khushiya bhi de di thi meine
par kyun mujhe woh tanha chod gaye hai

Rista joda tha maine unse
kyun woh yea rista tod gaye hai..

kitne sapne sajaye the maine
kyun  mujhse sab dur hue hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: March 13, 2007, 04:58:06 PM »
thanks Ankur and Deepika..

good one deepika!!
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #18 on: March 17, 2007, 01:19:22 PM »
gr8 deepika ...

lage raho
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #19 on: March 24, 2007, 05:45:54 PM »
sapno ki bhi ajeeb duniya hoti hai
per ye bahut haseen hoti hai
acchaa dekho to dil khush ho jata hai
bura dekho to sapna samajh ke bhul jaata hai.

sapno me wo shaksh mil jata hai
jise dekhne ke liye dil tarasta rehta hai
neend tut jaye to phir sone ka mann kerta hai
ki phir usi sapne ke liye dil bekarar rehta hai

per neend bhi to usi sapne se tutati hai
ki vishvas nahi hota unke deedar hone ka
aise to roz hi dikhte hai hame wo
per vishvas nahi hota sapno me bhi unhe hamse pyar hone ka
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«Reply #20 on: March 24, 2007, 10:06:59 PM »
Sapno ki dunya bohot haseen hoti hai
Sapno se bahar hi par zindagi hoti hai
Sapne dekh kar kyun hum jeete hain
Sapne hi to insaan ko dukh dete hain
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«Reply #21 on: March 25, 2007, 02:54:47 PM »
bohat khoob likha hai ankur..baaki sab ne bhi bohat acha likha hai :D .
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«Reply #22 on: March 25, 2007, 06:30:31 PM »
Quote from: "ANKUR_CRAZY"

Kitne sapne sajay the maine aaj sab bikher ke tut gaye
duniya to ham se ruthi thi aaj tum bhi hamse ruth gaye
kuch na mila tere pyar me hame jina dushvar ho gaya
sirf tujhe pane ke liye mujhse saathi mere sab chhut gaye

na mai kisi ka hu ab na koi mera hai
tere bina jeevan me chaya ghor andhera hai
bhul gaya hu subeh ki uss mithi tajgi ko
ki tere mujhe thukrane ke baad na hua mera savera hai

jalta tha mere dil me mohabbat ka diya
jisko hai tune bhujha diya
per phir bhi raushan karunga mai teri rahe
ki maine dil ko hi apne jala liya

muskurahat aati hai labo pe tere
to dil ki dhadkan badh jaati hai
teri ek jhalak paake ai sanam
ye duniya phir se haseen najar ati hai

apni inn bholi aadaon se tune
parwana hai mujhe bana diya
pur shama to tu bann na saki
aur mujhko hi tune jala diya

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Ankur this was really wonder ful.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: March 26, 2007, 03:19:33 AM »
Very Nice Ankur, BS, Talat, Pooja & Deepika...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #24 on: March 26, 2007, 04:59:47 AM »
Thanks Talat DI & pooja Ji & aryan...
Talat Di & ankur Well written...
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«Reply #25 on: March 26, 2007, 03:56:15 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
bohat khoob likha hai ankur..baaki sab ne bhi bohat acha likha hai :D .


thenku thenku

tu bina likhe chali gaye  



kabhi to kuch likh diya ker
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«Reply #26 on: March 26, 2007, 03:59:26 PM »
thanx natural aryan and deepika.....

deepika yahan likhne pe balance nahi khatem hota hai....!!!!
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«Reply #27 on: March 26, 2007, 04:35:41 PM »
hmmm Puzzled !

"Kitne sapna sajaaye thhe,na jaane kitne armaan jagaye thhe,
bohat thhin umeedein jinke saath ham aapke paas aaye thhe,
ye sila milega sachi mohabbat ka socha na tha maine yaaron,
di hai aisi chot usne,mitenge na ye zakhm janam me hazaron."
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«Reply #28 on: March 26, 2007, 04:42:36 PM »
ye hui na kuch baat bahut acche lage raho

sapne hot hai sajane ke liye
dil hota hai tut jan ke liye
iss mohabbat me pad ke yaaro
hame to pal nahi milta muskurane ke liye
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«Reply #29 on: March 27, 2007, 12:41:28 PM »
Very nice Nidhi and Ankur !
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