Kiya Ghayal tumne....

by punam on April 27, 2008, 01:18:35 PM
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punam
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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2008, 08:17:40 AM »
Thanx syed ji...
marna mat..shayari padh ke..hehehe
bahot acha likha...
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syednaami
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«Reply #16 on: May 01, 2008, 11:23:48 AM »
Thanks kiss baat ka haan.

Apne shayr ko iss tarah change karta hun


Raaste to buhat hain aate teri taraf magar, -
Har rah par main khada rahun yeh mumkin nahin. -


(Syed Naami)
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punam
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«Reply #17 on: May 02, 2008, 08:55:40 AM »
Raste to kayi hain per manzil to ek hi hai..
kaise samjhaun tumhe,pata hai tum na samjh bhi nahi...
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punam
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«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2008, 09:02:12 AM »
jab apne hi dete dard karte hai dil ko ghayal
iljam main kisse dun kisse kya kahun...

dil ne jisse chaha tha diya tha ek darja
woh hi agar bedard nikle toh kisse kya kahun...

kis doar se gujra hai yeh dil muskil hai kehena
jo mood k bhi na dekha usse kya pukarun...
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: May 02, 2008, 05:21:19 PM »
bahoot khoob Sami ji and Punam!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #20 on: May 02, 2008, 11:06:21 PM »
Raste to kayi hain per manzil to ek hi hai..
kaise samjhaun tumhe,pata hai tum na samjh bhi nahi...


Anek raahen to manzlen bhi anek hain, -
Badhta hun teri audh to rahon men bhatak jaata hun. -

Kis rah par chalun ki paaun tujhe, -
Samjha de khud mujhe ya men yuhin chup rahun. -

 
(Syed Naami)

Puna Jee aap ki dono poetry par mere aansun nikle.
Rok nahin saka kuchh aisa jadu hai inmen.
Bas likhte raho yuhi aur hum rote rahen.

Buhat hi rula dene wala likha hai, aisa likhta hai koi.  crybaby2
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punam
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«Reply #21 on: May 03, 2008, 07:45:28 AM »
shukriya syed ji daad ka mujhy to kabhi iss baat ka yaqeen bhi na tha kay iss tarah sey mujhy daad miley gi...
par aap kuch jyada hi bole diye..mujhe likhna hi nahi aata sahi se...
thanx...ji..aap ko acha laga...
aap bahot khoob reply kiye..
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punam
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«Reply #22 on: May 03, 2008, 08:06:30 AM »
irada agar ho pakka dil se chahte ho
bhatak nahi sakte kabhi agar sacha pyar ho...

phool hi nazar aayenge kanton k raah me bhi
manjil pane ki aas me jab kadam badhate ho...

mann ki aankhon se dekho paloge manjil bhi
raah hogi rosan chahe amavas ki raat ho....
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punam
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«Reply #23 on: May 03, 2008, 08:13:50 AM »
Thanx shihab ji....
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zef
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«Reply #24 on: May 03, 2008, 08:41:51 AM »
yeh ada thi meri ke kabhi tumhari galati ko kaha nahi
isse liye shaayad tumhe apni khata yaad nahi
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syednaami
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«Reply #25 on: May 03, 2008, 05:10:31 PM »
Pyar to hai tabhi nikla hun teri talaash men, -
Bhatakta hun issliye ki teri ghar ka koi nishaan de, -

Kaanton par hi chal raha hun manzil ki talaash men, -
Ashayen sab hain jawaan bas tu zara sa pukaar de, -

Vishvaas ka samandar umad aaya hai mann men, -
Tabhi to justaju hai teri aur tu kabhi deedar de. -



(Syed Naami)

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shukriya syed ji daad ka mujhy to kabhi iss baat ka yaqeen bhi na tha kay iss tarah sey mujhy daad miley gi...
par aap kuch jyada hi bole diye..mujhe likhna hi nahi aata sahi se...
thanx...ji..aap ko acha laga...
aap bahot khoob reply kiye..


Aap agar yuhin likhogi to humen kon dilaasa dene ayega ki, mat ro ab bas karo rona.
Aap ki mann men jo khayaalat panktiyan ban kaavita men umad aye behad pasand aye.

Shukriya.


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punam
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«Reply #26 on: May 04, 2008, 09:18:28 AM »

Aap agar yuhin likhogi to humen kon dilaasa dene ayega ki, mat ro ab bas karo rona.
Aap ki mann men jo khayaalat panktiyan ban kaavita men umad aye behad pasand aye.

Shukriya.




aap ko humari kavita pasand aayi...sukriya ji...


Har raah pe tera prem ka deepak
har dharkan me tera naam basaya

tumhe kahi na chube kante
har raah ko phoolon se sajaya...

dil se sada deti hun tumhe par
har sada nakam hoke lout aaya

deedar ke liye tadapti tarasti
veeran raah pe tanha khud ko paya....
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Roja
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«Reply #27 on: May 04, 2008, 09:53:38 AM »
jab apne hi dete dard karte hai dil ko ghayal
iljam main kisse dun kisse kya kahun...

dil ne jisse chaha tha diya tha ek darja
woh hi agar bedard nikle toh kisse kya kahun...

kis doar se gujra hai yeh dil muskil hai kehena
jo mood k bhi na dekha usse kya pukarun...


Bahut khoob Punam  Applause

Mayusi kisii merj ka ilaz nahi
Jo guzar gaya usse khwaab samaj lena
Beeta hua kal kabhi hua aaj nahi
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honeyrose
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«Reply #28 on: May 05, 2008, 07:49:27 AM »
Bohat khoob likha hai punam aur sab dostho ney... Applause
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