koi..................

by Pooja on February 20, 2006, 01:08:38 PM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #15 on: February 24, 2006, 11:57:25 PM »
Thanx  Pooja  sis..........  nice   MBBT..............
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #16 on: February 25, 2006, 04:53:42 PM »
Thanks Waheedbhai and you are most welcome Pooja ...


Main lafzo se kuchh bhi izhaar nahi karta,
Tere liye khuda se takraar nahi karta,
Par kuchh to baat hai fitrat mein zaalim,
Varna tujhe chahne ki khata baar baar nahi karta ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: February 26, 2006, 12:56:42 PM »
Good one JHL JI!!!

Lafaz nahi kahty, nigain bayan karati hai
mere dil ki baaty, payal bayan karati hai
Sunni meri kalai, payal ki jhunkaar sunati hai
Suni suni rahein teri, meri nigain takkati hai!!!
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #18 on: February 26, 2006, 01:10:27 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Akelepan ka ahsaas karwa gaya koi
Tanha chal rahi zindagi ko, tarpa gaya koi
barso se suni chal rahi zindagi mai
hulchal mucha gaya koi
kuch palo ka karaar dekar,
Umar bhar ko bekraar kar gaya koi
barso se daba rakhi thi ek chingaari
bhir se dil mai shola sulga gaya koi...............................


excellent Pooja jee..lafz nahi mil rahe hain tarif k liye


ab iss akelepan ki adat se hogai hai
mehfil mujhe katne ko daudti hai
mushkurati aankon me ab ason jalakti hai
Tadapne k liye srif yaadein reh gai hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: February 26, 2006, 01:22:42 PM »
Thanks salma, bahoot dino baad app najar aai hai..sab khaiyat hai...

tanhai ka alma is dil se na puch
raat tanha, dil tanha, ashaq tanha
meri bebasi ka alam na puch
dard apna, dil apna, gum apna!!
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sharaab
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«Reply #20 on: February 26, 2006, 08:49:48 PM »
very nice pooja ji.....

TERI YAADOWON KE SAHARE JEE RAHA HAI KOI,
JAKHMO KO BHI KAATOWN SE SEE RAHA HAI KOI,

MAT SOCH KI BHOOL GAYA WO TUMHE,
YE SOCH KI;
JUDA HOKAR KIS TARAH JEE RAHA HAI KOI,

ARE JAA KAR DHEK,
KIS TARAH PAL PAL JAL RAHA HAI WO,
BAS ISI AAG KO "sharaab"se bujha raha hai koi...!
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: February 26, 2006, 10:56:57 PM »
wah, bahoot khoob sharaab ji!!

Khud ko mitta kar, muje mitta raha hai koi
kar ke khud ko sharaab ke hawaaly, rula raha hai koi  
bechain main yahan, bechain wo waha, kis kadar bhatka raha hai koi
Jo bujh nahi sakati Agg, kayun usko aor bhardka raha hai koi!!!
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Nino
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«Reply #22 on: February 26, 2006, 11:55:31 PM »
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Akelepan ka ahsaas karwa gaya koi
Tanha chal rahi zindagi ko, tarpa gaya koi
barso se suni chal rahi zindagi mai
hulchal mucha gaya koi
kuch palo ka karaar dekar,
Umar bhar ko bekraar kar gaya koi
barso se daba rakhi thi ek chingaari
bhir se dil mai shola sulga gaya koi...............................



Super Pooja ji 2 good
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harshit101
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«Reply #23 on: February 27, 2006, 10:24:35 AM »
POOJA N NIKKI U R GREAT


TANHA HUN MAI MUJHE TANHA REHNE DO.............................
       YEH DARD MERA HAI MUJHE TANHA HI SEHNE DO...................
        IN ASHKO SE HAI PYAR MUJHE BEHTE HAIN YEH TO BEHNE DO
        LOG KAHEIN MUJHE AGAR DIWANA TO KEHNE DO..........
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sharaab
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«Reply #24 on: February 27, 2006, 07:18:50 PM »
very nice above all............n pooja ji reply pasand aya.

jalne ka jo maza hai wo aag se nahi,
 parwaane se poocho,
bechaini bhi ik nasha hai ye khud se nahi,
apne diwaane se poocho,

khushi rah gayi hai aansoowon me,
ab wo muskuraane mein nahi,  
bahut khushi se mitate hai khud ko begaane yaha,
ye "SHARAAB" se nahi sharaab khaane
                                          se poocho...........!
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nikki
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«Reply #25 on: February 27, 2006, 08:20:04 PM »
thanx Pooja sis, Waheed n Harshit 101  ji....
bahut hi khoob likha hai sabne....
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shail_shayar
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«Reply #26 on: February 28, 2006, 08:13:18 AM »
Kuch thdi bahot shayari hum bhi kar lete hai, shayad aap logo ko pasand aaye.

Woh aaye meri Qabra par,
Phool Gulab ka rakh kar chal diye,
Meri Qabra ki sukhi mitti ko,
apne aasuo se sinchkar chal diye.
ae mere khuda thodi si zindagi de de mujhe,
wada raha lautkar wapis aayenge,
shayad ye unse aakhri mulakaat hai meri,
na jane agle janam mein kaha milenge?

--> kshitij <--
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tanhaa musaafir
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«Reply #27 on: February 28, 2006, 08:32:54 AM »
Pooja,

bahot khoob likhaa hai aap ne. yahaaN to maiN pahali baar aayaa hooN aur aate aate aapki kalam paRhne ko milee.

hameshaa khush rahiye

Tanhaa Musaafir
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #28 on: February 28, 2006, 03:09:25 PM »
Excellent work by all of you ...
Keep going all ...


Dil ke dard ko shabdo mein dhala nahi gaya,
Gum ke aansuo ko aankho se nikala nahi gaya,
Yu isne mujhe dard is liye diya,
Kyunki yu isse mera pyaar sambhala nahi gaya ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: February 28, 2006, 10:39:35 PM »
bahoot khoob Nino, Harshit, Sharaab, Shail_Shayar and JHL JI!!!

Shukariyan nikki and tanha_musafir ji!!!
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