kuch jazbaato main se saansein jaati nahi -Panna 6:Shayri-E-Dard

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Re: kuch jazbaato main se saansein jaati nahi

« Reply #75 on: May 06, 2008, 08:16:37 PM »

wah ji wah.. kaya baat hai..


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Re: kuch jazbaato main se saansein jaati nahi

« Reply #76 on: May 06, 2008, 08:42:30 PM »

Teri wah se bhi ek aah mili, -
In jazbaat men bhi raah mili, -
Tum jo ho dur humse itna, -
Uss duri men bhi chaah mili. -

(Syed Naami)


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« Reply #77 on: May 06, 2008, 08:47:55 PM »

Shayri main Wah se ahh ka rishta
bada gahra gahra hai
jazbaato main, na jaane kyun
Gum itna thehra thehra hai!!


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Re: kuch jazbaato main se saansein jaati nahi

« Reply #78 on: May 06, 2008, 09:12:09 PM »

Ghor Talab

Koi wah ko samjhe aah
to koi aah men dhoonde raah
Aisi pukhta rakho chaah
ki har aah se mile wah

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« Reply #79 on: May 07, 2008, 10:30:22 AM »

bahoot khoob sami ji


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« Reply #80 on: May 07, 2008, 10:39:21 AM »

Teri khoob se hai 'Sami' ka shoq, -
Tere Wah se hai uska zoq, -
Tere ehsaas men yun sama gaya, -
Ab tu harne se payegi na khud ko rok. -

(Syed Naami)

Na chhed malanga nun...


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« Reply #81 on: May 07, 2008, 11:06:59 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 05:04:36 PM

bahoot hi achi KAVITA SHARE KI HAI APNE KHWAISH JI... Magar janati hu, Apki likhi kavita,, is kavita se kahin jayada achi aor gahari hogi....

Bahut Bahut shukriya aapke hausle-afsaai ka...bahut jald kuch likhne ki koshish rahegi...shukriya..


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« Reply #82 on: May 07, 2008, 11:12:30 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 05, 2008, 05:05:51 PM

Mr./Ms. Khwaish
Marvelous, trustworthy words, poetic valor hidden inside, heart impounding verses. Bravo!!!

Pooja Ma'am,
So nice, your philosophical indenture is really a ground breaking imagination. Sources are always like minerals just a need to explore is required.

Thanks

Bahut Bahut shukriya naami saab..aapne itni tareef ki,aapka shukrguzaar hoon..umeed karta hoon,aap aise hi hamara likha padhte rahenge..


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« Reply #83 on: May 07, 2008, 11:16:17 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 05, 2008, 05:41:02 PM

Kya baat he..... Bohot hi umda nazm he khwaish ji dil ko chhoo gai. Applause

Bahut Bahut shukriya randheri saab..yeh nazm maine kahi padhi thi...socha,share kar loon..shukriya


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« Reply #84 on: May 07, 2008, 11:18:02 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 05, 2008, 05:58:10 PM

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Apni jodi kisi se bhi jamti nahi
Phir bhi jazbaat ki saans thamti nahi

Dil ke jazbaat sapne dikhate rahe
Dil jalon ko barabar jalate rahe

Aandhiyan aarzuon ki uthti rahi
Mere seene me aawaz ghut-ti rahi

Umar bhar yaar ke naaz sehta raha
Kyun me patthar ko aawaz deta raha

Saans chalti rahi phir bhi jazbaat ki
Us ko parwah kya mere haalat ki

Ghar basa kar wo aabad hokar raha
Or "sayyid" bhi barbaad hokar raha
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Bahut Bahut khoob randheri saab..


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« Reply #85 on: May 07, 2008, 11:19:33 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 05:58:59 PM

kuch khaas nahi.. magar khwaish ji na jaane kyun ab jab dobara apki share ki lines pardi to yah lines khud b khud likhi gai...

dil bhi ussi ka tha
dhadkane bhi ussi ki thi

Ghar bhi ussi ka tha'
chaahtein bhi ussi ki thi

ghar chor kar jaane ki soch bhi ussi ki thi
dil torr kar jaane ka irrdda bhi ussi ka tha

ajj main akeli hu
dil yah sawaal karta hai

main to rahi ussi ki
kaya koi mera bhi tha...

Bahut Bahut khoob!!! sach mein bahut saral aksharo mein gehri baat ki hai pooja aapne..bahut ache..


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« Reply #86 on: May 07, 2008, 11:22:09 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 06:16:36 PM

Sayyid ji... Adat hai ek sath kavita pard kar jawab likhne ki.. Ruk jaau to phir kuch likha nahi jaata... app jitani gahari kavita to nahi likh saki.. magar jo bhi likha gaya wo post kar rahi hu:

Is najar ko ab koi aor nahi bhaata
Armaano ka silsilla tham kyun nahi jaata

Armaan, jaGate hai Khwabo ko,
khwabo sa koi ab ban nahi paata
Khyalo ka yah silsilla thum kyun nahi jaata

Mere seene mai dabe Ahsaas, dhundate hai use
Us jaise koi Ahsaas mujhe de nahi paata
Socho ka yah silsilla thum kyun nahi jaata

Saansein chal rahi hai jab tak, khayal-o-khwab jagayegi
Ahsaas-e-Jazbaat se khayal-o-khwab alag kiya nahi jaata
In bachi hui saanson ka chlana Ruk kyun nahi jaata.........

bahut ache pooja..ek se badhkar ek likh rahe ho aap!! bahut ache


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« Reply #87 on: May 07, 2008, 11:28:41 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 06, 2008, 10:33:47 AM

pooja ji,
yeh sub ek shaam mein likha gaya he!jitni gati hamari padhne ki bhee nahi ho sakti utni aap ki liikhne ki he. aap ki soch ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kum he.
agar aapki anumati ho to Limca book of records mein aapka naam propose karna chaunga-mein vakai achambhit hu.jitni meri poori zindgi ki jamapoonji nahi he-us-se adhik kavitaye ek shaam mein--namumkin sa lagta he.

Kaash aapka shatansh(1/100 hissa aa jaata)!kaise ho sakta he..kaash..

Syeednaami ji,

sangat ka khoob asar he,mere bhai--aap chaa gaye he.samy se tez chal rahe he aap to!

Sayidji,
Aap ne hausla afzahi kar aur saath saath likh kar bahut umdaudaaharan prastut kiya he, Badhai.

Khwaish ji ,

Aap ka likha padh kar hamesha he sukhad anubhav rehta he..baar baar tareef isliye karta hu.

Saarthika ji,

bahut khoob likha he aapne.

bahut bahut shukriya prateekji..bahut khushi hui yeh jaankar ke aap hamara likha padhte hai..umeed karta hoon ki aapse bhi kuch seekna milega...


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Re: kuch jazbaato main se saansein jaati nahi

« Reply #88 on: May 07, 2008, 11:33:29 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 06, 2008, 07:45:21 PM

Dil ki hasrat ki baat kaya karna
Apni halat ki baat kaya karna

Hath khaali he, jeb khaali he
Ab muhabbat ki baat kaya karna

Char din ki he zindagi yaaro
Or nafrat ki baat kya karna

Sab ke jazbaat sun raha hun me'n
Apni hajat ki baat kya karna

Quote from: syednaami on May 06, 2008, 08:15:32 PM

Dar lagne laga ab jazbaat se
Baat karne ka bahaana jo na mila

Tune pyar se khel khela hai
Maine pyar ko paake bhikera hai

(Syed Naami)

bahut bahut khoob!! aap dono ne bahut khoob likha..


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Re: kuch jazbaato main se saansein jaati nahi

« Reply #89 on: May 07, 2008, 11:35:45 AM »

Quote from: sarthika on May 06, 2008, 09:36:00 AM

Dil ka dard shabdo se khail jaata hai
Shabdo ka male, dil se khail jaata hai
Khwab jab bhari padne lage haqiqat per
Khayal zindagi se khail jaata hai!!!

Nice one sarthikaji..bahut ache!!


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