kya woh khafa hai mujhse.... -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

kaushikbhawna008

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«Reply #15 on: July 02, 2008, 10:50:55 AM »

bohut hi achi creation hai punam ji


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diya786

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #16 on: July 02, 2008, 04:06:55 PM »

bahut khoob punam ji
aapki likhi hui ek ek line khoobsurat hai
its full of emotions
great!!!


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syednaami

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #17 on: July 02, 2008, 04:59:54 PM »

Quote from: punam on July 01, 2008, 07:25:40 PM

Beech rah mein chod jayenge woh aise nahi
par kya aaj main yaad unko aati nahi..

mere dil ki koi baat unse chupi nahi
phir bhi kyun woh aaj mujh se dur hain, kuch kehate nahi...

pata hai woh mujhe chahte hain, mujh se jyada
par kya meri aankhon ke aansoo woh dekh sakte nahi...

jude hain woh mere dil se kis tarah pata hai unhe
par kya woh khafa hai mujhse aur kehate nahi...

jaroor meri koi baat se unka dil dukha hoga
dil hi dil me tadapte honge par kuch batate nahi..

Wow,,, truly a heart piece...
You have stopped the beats of heart... Amazingly painful...

Kuchh haalaat ka gham hai, -
Kuchh ghamgeen sa apna dil hai, -
Chaahat ho na jaaye meri natavaan,-
Is liye khamoshi ka pahna charam hai. -

(Syed Naami)


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punam

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #18 on: July 03, 2008, 12:26:57 PM »

Thanx kaushikbhawna ji....

sukriya diya ji..


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punam

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #19 on: July 03, 2008, 12:31:16 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on July 02, 2008, 04:59:54 PM

sukriya syed ji...kya kahun kuch samjh me nahi aa raha.. bas itna hi keha sakti hun thanx..

woh mujhse khafa hain kya
udaas kyun hain wajah hai kya
soch soch ke pareshan hu main
dil me unke chupi baat hai kya...

paas jake unke manaoon kya
dur hoke khush kar sakti hun kya
kya karun kya na karun
dil me aaj yeh uljhan hai kya...

mujhe woh bhula sakte hain kya
zindagi me aaj yeh mod hai kya
jab pa chuke the manzil hum
phir aaj achanak yeh toofan hai kya..


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Pooja

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #20 on: July 03, 2008, 08:30:09 PM »

wow Good one Punam!! bahoot acha likh rahi hai app, Good job!!


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syednaami

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2008, 12:58:51 AM »

Quote from: punam on July 03, 2008, 12:31:16 PM

Socha tha jo hota nahin, -
Kya hoga maloom nahin, -
Pal do pal khushi mili, -
shayad sukoon se apni dosti nahin. -

(Syed Naami)


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #22 on: July 04, 2008, 01:35:01 AM »

Quote from: punam on July 01, 2008, 07:25:40 PM

khoob, bohot khoob, punam ji...Padh kar kuchh apne zakhm bhi taza hogae, isi tarah likhte rahiye.


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punam

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #23 on: July 04, 2008, 10:55:18 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 03, 2008, 08:30:09 PM

wow Good one Punam!! bahoot acha likh rahi hai app, Good job!!

Thanx di...


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punam

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #24 on: July 04, 2008, 11:02:42 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 04, 2008, 01:35:01 AM

khoob, bohot khoob, punam ji...Padh kar kuchh apne zakhm bhi taza hogae, isi tarah likhte rahiye.

sukriya sayyid randeri ji...


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syednaami

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #25 on: July 04, 2008, 05:13:38 PM »

kuchh khaftgi naarazgi thi to nahin, -
Par rah gayi baaten adhuri ki jo nahin, -

Sochne ka aalam tha aqal dang hi rahi, -
Kahna tha kya bas zubaan kah bhi na saki. -

(Syed Naami)


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punam

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #26 on: July 04, 2008, 09:34:54 PM »

zindagi jab kabhi aise mod pe le aati hai
hum kuchh kar nahin sakte bebas ho jaate hain...

dimaagh kuchh kahta hai dil kuchh aur
lafz apne aap hi kahin gum ho jaate hain...


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syednaami

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #27 on: July 04, 2008, 11:48:06 PM »

Very nice reply Punam Saahiba...
Thanks a lot...


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baadal102

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #28 on: July 05, 2008, 10:05:00 PM »

bahoot aacha likha hai punam ji Applause

bahoot choti koshish hai
galti ke liye plz maaf ker dena

Beech rah mai koi kaise chor sakta hai,
Koi to majboori hogi,warna koi kaise bhoola sakta hai,

Majboorio ko naam na do bewafai ka,
Sache pyar ko kabhi koi bhoola sakta nahi,

Ae kaash ke wo samjhe ki majboori kya hai,
Waqt aane do, bewafai ka ilzaam bhi bhi wo dho sakta hai....

Baadal tearyeyed


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Sonia01

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Re: kya woh khafa hai mujhse....

«Reply #29 on: July 05, 2008, 10:08:41 PM »

Sab ne bahut accha likha hai...

Punam.., Syed bhaiya & Baadal jee


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