Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun...

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«Reply #15 on: March 19, 2010, 05:57:09 PM »
shukriya j.s ji...
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«Reply #16 on: April 10, 2010, 09:52:05 PM »
Bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne ise Geet ji... bahut pyaara hai...!!!

Aur Rajesh ji ne aur Khwaish ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 18, 2010, 08:39:40 PM
Kyun ye zamane wale zakhmo ko silne nhi dete,
kyun ye zamane wale labo ko khilne nhi dete,
iss zamane ne bhi kabhi chaht ki hogi kisi ki..
kyun ye zamane wale diwano ko milne nhi dete......


AKHIR KYUN... sad11 sad11
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«Reply #17 on: April 10, 2010, 10:00:59 PM »
Bahut achche Geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

khwaabon par bhi kahaan zor chalta hai aaj,
ab to meri dhadkano par bhi kaaboo mera nahi,
tujhe sukun ki saugat main kahan se du aaj,
is jahaan me jo mera tha wo bhi ab mera nahi...

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Main kahan zamane se terra hath mang rahi hu,
main tou sukun ki ek saugat mang rahi hu,
kya itna bhi tu mujhe nhi de sakta merre ajnabi..
main tou sirrf khuabo mein terra sath mang rahi hu......
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«Reply #18 on: April 13, 2010, 10:13:07 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 10, 2010, 09:52:05 PM
Bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne ise Geet ji... bahut pyaara hai...!!!

Aur Rajesh ji ne aur Khwaish ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!


shukriya kapil ji...
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«Reply #19 on: April 13, 2010, 12:53:24 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 10, 2010, 10:00:59 PM
Bahut achche Geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

khwaabon par bhi kahaan zor chalta hai aaj,
ab to meri dhadkano par bhi kaaboo mera nahi,
tujhe sukun ki saugat main kahan se du aaj,
is jahaan me jo mera tha wo bhi ab mera nahi...


bahut khoob kapil ji...aur shukriya ji...


Hum dhadkano ko hawao se gin lete hai,
terre dil ki baat in fizao se sun lete hai,
tu laakh chhupa le apne jazbaat..
hum apne khuab terri ankho se bun lete hai......
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«Reply #20 on: April 13, 2010, 01:36:36 PM »
Wah ji wah kya kehna aapka... bahut achche.... aur shukriya ji...

q hamari dhadkane kuch shaant si hain aaj,
aur hawaon ka bhi rukh kisi aur disha hai,
tere khwaab k intezaar me so rahe hain aaj,
aankhen to band hain par khamosh nisha hai...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 13, 2010, 12:53:24 PM
bahut khoob kapil ji...aur shukriya ji...


Hum dhadkano ko hawao se gin lete hai,
terre dil ki baat in fizao se sun lete hai,
tu laakh chhupa le apne jazbaat..
hum apne khuab terri ankho se bun lete hai......
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«Reply #21 on: April 13, 2010, 06:32:44 PM »
thnx kapil ji...per ye tou bataiye ye nisha kaun hai??

Aaj terri baato ne ek ehsas jaga diya,
tujhse milne ko phir se tadpa diya,
terri har baat mein jo wishwas tha..
usne merri chaht ko aur bhi badha diya......
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«Reply #22 on: April 13, 2010, 07:42:52 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... nisha kisi ka naam nahi hai nisha to raat ko kaha hai maine. mujhe raat ko khwaabon me kisi ka intzaar rehta hai par raat bhi khaamosh hai....

main tujhse milne jaroor aunga,
par chahat ko tere apna nahi paunga,
pyaar ne zakhmi kiya tha mujhe kabhi,
ab kisi aur se pyaar na kar paunga...
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«Reply #23 on: April 14, 2010, 11:28:36 AM »
shukriya ji n thnx clear karne k liye...aur bahut dard bhare alfaz likh daale apne...bahut khoob...

Bandhe hai ek hi dor se terre merre dil k taar,
jisse khinche chale aate hai hum dono har baar,
main kahu bhi naa tu phir bhi sun le..
isi khubsurat se ehsas ko kehte hai pyar......
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«Reply #24 on: April 14, 2010, 03:28:01 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... aur pyaar ki paribhasha ko aapne bahut hi sundar shabdon me pesh kiya hai... bahut achche...

apnapan tera kahin mujhse mere apno ko na le le,
saadgi teri kahin mujhse mera imaan to na le le,
humko to inkaar hai ki humein tujhse mohabbat hai,
darte hain kahin ye jhoot humse hamari jaan to na le le...
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«Reply #25 on: April 15, 2010, 08:01:28 PM »
shukriya ji aur bahut hi khoob likha hai apne...

Terre bin iss suni zingdi ko jina nhi,
in ankho mein terri surat na dikhe aesa koi aaina nhi,
tujhse kuch aesa rishta jud gaya hai ab tou..
sanso k begair ji lungi per terre bina nhi......
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«Reply #26 on: April 15, 2010, 08:35:29 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji aur jawab nahi aapke jawab ka par fir bhi koshish ki maine kuch likhne ki...

rishta hamare saanson ka bhi tujhse hai,
meri har subhah har shaam tujhse hai,
kal tak humein aadat na thi muskuraane ki,
aaj mere hothon pe muskaan bas tujhse hai...
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