Lahoo, ashk ban ker aankhon se rawaN hoota hai

by javedarshad on July 10, 2009, 09:54:13 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 14, 2009, 09:55:53 PM »
aaina

shukrai

aapka





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Kanta
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«Reply #16 on: July 14, 2009, 10:34:37 PM »
sab acha or sunder likhe hen
javed bahut sa urdu words uper se gujra abi kal mere ku meaning batao teek he na
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«Reply #17 on: July 14, 2009, 11:11:54 PM »
Kanta Bai
Namashkar

aap ko acha laga
mere ko bhi acha laga
aap mere ko bolo kaun kaun sa words ooper se gaya aur kaun kaun
sa hazam ho gaya ya sare ke sare ka matlab likhne ko mangta ha


dhanyawaad



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«Reply #18 on: July 15, 2009, 02:40:36 AM »
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai Javed Ji aapne...
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«Reply #19 on: July 15, 2009, 03:25:35 AM »
shukria aapka





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«Reply #20 on: July 15, 2009, 06:19:33 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 14, 2009, 05:48:02 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot achi kavita ki rachna ki hai apne javed ji.. apki kavita parte waqat kuch lines man mai aii, wo he likhne ja rahi hu:

Dard ka hai lahu, ya lahu mere dard se atta hai
AAnkhein bhi royegi kab tak, hosh goom ho jaata hai

Socho main hai dard, ya dard main doob gai soch
Beeta kaise kab waqat, ek andhkaar san ajar atta hai

Wafa, muhobat ke naam per, lub ab dete hai muskura
Yeh alag baat hai, tanhaai main dil ajj bhi tadap jaata hai

Pad kar dard bhari shayri, ajj bhi uthati hai ek tees
Aor Pooja likh deti bas, jo b hi uske man mai atta hai

Dard ka hai lahu, ya lahu mere dard se atta hai
AAnkhein bhi royegi kab tak, hosh goom ho jaata hai….


Boat Achcha Addiction Hai Sis,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #21 on: July 15, 2009, 10:31:10 AM »
Javed Sahad Adaab, Mashallah ... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...


Rumaal hatheli pe dil khaye hickole
Khamoshi kabhi koi baat kahan bole!!


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«Reply #22 on: July 15, 2009, 12:31:13 PM »
Walekum Adaab

bahut bahut shukria janab ka

Teri adaun mein hai ye  kaisi jadugari
khamosh nigahain sab kuch kahjati hain



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«Reply #23 on: July 15, 2009, 12:41:17 PM »
waah janab kya kehne iss misre ke....


KhamoshiyoN ko aaj phir di hai sada
SerhadoN par kyun qaid hai dil mera
Jis ke qadmoN tale mahaken mashk-o-gul
misl-e-sar pesh hota raha hai dil mera!!

regards,

HT
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«Reply #24 on: July 15, 2009, 12:51:20 PM »
Shukria H T

tune kis bedardi se raund dala dil mera
kash nafrat se hi thokar lagadeta kia hoota



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«Reply #25 on: July 15, 2009, 01:00:02 PM »
Milli hassi ki sazza rafta rafta
Taru'uf ghamooN se hua rafta rafta
Toot gaye ishq ke dhage daf'fataN
Chla ranjish ka silsila rafta rafta!!


regards,


HT
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«Reply #26 on: July 15, 2009, 01:05:23 PM »
H T wah
mager

Ranjish hi to agaaz e muhabbat hooti hai
Aik din aalage ga gale woh ahista ahista



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«Reply #27 on: July 15, 2009, 01:17:38 PM »
waah Javed Sahab... mazza aa gya !!


Magar intzaar ki bhi hadd hoti hai
Kahi mar na jaye hum rafta rafta !!


regards,

HT
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«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2009, 01:21:46 PM »
bahut hi khoob


H T
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Maza to bas itezaar mein hi hoota hai
Werna kaun kis ke liye beqarar hoota hai



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«Reply #29 on: July 15, 2009, 01:25:40 PM »
aree waah .. yeh bhi khoob kahi aap ne Javed Ji!


Mujhe harz nai koi intezaar se magar
Koi umeed bhi to ho uske aane ki aggar!!


regards,


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