*~*Mohabbat*~* -Panna 6:Shayri-E-Dard

Sayyid Randeri

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«Reply #75 on: September 16, 2008, 05:55:06 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 15, 2008, 03:16:23 PM

Sayyid Randeri ji /angel4u ji / Kanta ji / NODER ji,
Shukriyaa sab ko adaa kartaa hoon tah-e-dil sey!
Aur, yeh Nimmi-e-Kanta hain us zamaaney keen:
Jab, ki, 'hooroun ko zameen ki' duaayen hoteen theen:
'Allaah bachaaye: noujawaanoun sey!
Rang-wirangey parwaanoun sey!!'
Ab to 'dating' kaa zamaanah hai yeh!
Haan, bahut kam hai musalmaanoun mein!
- abd bundeli

Abd ji is daur ki nimmi to amar ki nimmi ko bewaqoof hi kahegi, magar us bewaqoofi ko sachha pyaar naseeb hota he, or aaj ki nimmi ko aksar dhoka.... pyaar mein nafaa-nuqsaan sochhne waalon ke liye pyaar karna nahi vayapaar karna zayada thik rahega....


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: *~*Mohabbat*~*

«Reply #76 on: September 16, 2008, 06:07:25 AM »

Quote from: Kanta on September 16, 2008, 05:51:26 AM

ankhen nahi keval dil ki bat he
nimmi nahi per uski ada to sath he

derd bhi bitar samae bethi hu
bikre hue jazbo se daman chak he

Waah....bohot khoooob... ise kehte hein shairi... jab tak dard n ho shairi ka mazaa hi nahi aata kya karen aadat hi aysi hui he... aaj aap ki shairi mein achanak dad ubhar aaya.

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Kanta

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«Reply #77 on: September 16, 2008, 06:27:32 AM »

bas kuch apni mistakes kuch oro ki tokre SR

rat bher roti rahi soi nahi
khun tapkati hu ab ansu nahi

soni or mahiwal ku gum kam mile
milan unka hua merke jeevan mein nahi


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: *~*Mohabbat*~*

«Reply #78 on: September 16, 2008, 06:41:24 AM »

Khoob.....Bohot Khoob

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Re: *~*Mohabbat*~*

«Reply #79 on: September 16, 2008, 06:44:02 AM »

Quote from: angel4u on September 15, 2008, 08:00:37 AM

Abd ji,

Mohabbat se hi qaayenaat ka qaarvaan chalta aaya,
har ek patthar iski tapish mein pighalta aaya,
Par ye bhi sach hai mohabbat ne hamara saath na diya,
Dil Har soo har rooh mein mohabbat ko dhoond aaya...

Bohot achhe.....Angel ji aap ke apne ash'aar kam hi dekhe, agar aap itna achha likh sakte hein to aap ko or zayada likhna chahiye...


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abdbundeli

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«Reply #80 on: September 16, 2008, 09:44:26 AM »

Kanta ji,
Aadat mein hain shumaar yeh Urdu key lafz ab:
Aatey hain apney aap nikal kar dimaag sey!
Par, aap key liye, mein, ab, 'Hindi' mein likhoongaa:
Mein ney likha hai, Kanta, Hindi mein hi ziyaadah!
- abd bundeli
Meyri eik bahut puraanee kawitaa hai, eik maan aur uski saal-deidh saal ki beitee key pyaar-o-dulaar par! Pahli teen laainey peish-e-khidmat hain:
"Maatru ank, nihshank baalikaa!
Rajat kanth ko, kar bhuj weishhthit,
Arpit karti ankmaalikaa!"
[Maan ki god mein (apni surakshaa aadi ki koyee chintaa naheen honey sey) samast shankaaoun sey mukt baalikaa, chaandi-sey gorey galey ko, baahuoun mein bhar kar,(apni maan ko) aalingan pradaan kar rahee hai!]
- Ramwatiya


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Re: *~*Mohabbat*~*

«Reply #81 on: September 16, 2008, 08:28:59 PM »

Shukriya DoSton,.
Aur Sabne Achchi Mehfil Sajaai hai,.
Lage Raho,.


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«Reply #82 on: September 16, 2008, 08:36:16 PM »

Main Rahoon Ya, Na Rahoon Mujhse Koi Gilaa Na Kare,.
Mehfilon Mein Shareek Hone Waale, Mujhse Milaa Na Kare,.

Bas Jaayengi Warna Tumjhaare Zehan-o-Dil Mein Tanhaayiaan,.
Kaheen Uthaana Na Pade, Is Zamaane Ki Ruswaayiaan,.

Hoon Badnaseeb Main Ke Ghamon Ke Andhere Mein Koi Saaya Nahi,.
Thukraaya Hai Mujhe Sabhi Ne, Aur, Mohabbat Ne Bhi Mujhe Apnaaya Nahi,.

"Hay Kismat Meri, Ye Kaisa Sitam Mujhpar Barsaa Gayi,.
Ek Mohabbat Maangi Thi, Aur maut Ke Liye Tarsaa Gayi,.

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«Reply #83 on: September 19, 2008, 04:49:30 AM »

Very Nice All... Applause


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«Reply #85 on: September 19, 2008, 08:33:41 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 16, 2008, 06:44:02 AM

Bohot achhe.....Angel ji aap ke apne ash'aar kam hi dekhe, agar aap itna achha likh sakte hein to aap ko or zayada likhna chahiye...

Shukriya pasand karne ke liya,
likha to bahtu kuch hai pehle yo pe.
abhi itna waqt nahi mil paata hai, isliye shayad nahi likh paati hoon...
par koshish wapas shuru karungii...


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«Reply #86 on: September 19, 2008, 08:35:04 AM »

Quote from: Aryaan on September 19, 2008, 05:24:05 AM

Bahut khoobsurat, padh ke aankh bhar aayi...


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«Reply #87 on: September 19, 2008, 08:36:50 AM »

Chaand sitare hai gawah meri mohabbat ki tapish ke,
ke kabhi kabhi wo bhi jalte hia mere ashqon ki aag mein,
sulagne lagta hai shayad chaand ka bhi dil mere haal pe,
udaas dekha hai kabhi usko bhi andheron ki chadar mein...


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Re: *~*Mohabbat*~*

«Reply #88 on: September 19, 2008, 07:12:51 PM »

Bahoot Khoob Aryaan Bhai,.
And Nice One Husnaina Ji,.


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Re: *~*Mohabbat*~*

«Reply #89 on: September 19, 2008, 07:21:19 PM »

Meri Mohabbat Ko Thukraane Waale,.
Tera Jahaan Abaad Rahe,.
Bhale Mere Ghar Barbaad Rahe,.

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