Muhabbat ka dawa karte hain - sawaal kehte hain

by CIC on September 17, 2012, 02:34:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 06, 2012, 01:33:23 AM »
Shukriya Suman saheba comment ke liye, bass yahi kahunga..
Nashtar utar ke seene,
Wo haale dil mera poochne aaye hain ?


OH Sheba, aapki chulbule andaaz ne itni serious poetry ko comedy bana diya, shukriya aapke comment ka. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Sheel Didi, thanks for your comment, I hope soon you will be BIG SISTER OF Yoindia Shayariadab.
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«Reply #16 on: November 27, 2012, 08:17:57 PM »
Wah bahot khoob CIC ji. Achhi takhleeq hai. Daad.
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«Reply #17 on: December 19, 2012, 02:21:43 AM »
Shukriya Janaab Riyaz Saheb, adni si koshish thi, aap jaise logo se daad milti rahe to koshish mukammal hoti si malum padti hai.
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«Reply #18 on: January 27, 2013, 03:17:04 PM »
Ek peshkash, bohot is jald likhi gayi jisme koi badlaav bhi nahi kiye gaye, bas ek hi baar main puri ki gayi..umeed hai kabile pasand hogi .

Fir(PHIR) se dard diya usne,
Aaj fir(PHIR) sawaal kiya usne,

Poocha muhabbat thi gar tumhe, (USNE)
kyun sila naa diya tumne ?

Bheja tha jo paigham e muhabbat,
Kyun jawab nahi diya tumne ?

Main kaise jatao usko,
Mujhe ruswa kiya hai tumne..

Meri muhabbat ko lachaar,
Zindagi ko tabah kiya tumne..

Ab poochte ho sawaal..
Jab chheenli ronak hai tumne..

Ab baaki nahi jaan is jism mein,
Jawab dun.. jo sawaal pooche tumne..



good composition . tumne ki jagah usne likein to sahi hoga.aur haan qafia bhee sab jagah similar nahin hai

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«Reply #19 on: August 21, 2013, 07:17:54 PM »
Shukriya Janaab qalb, aaj hi aapki comment dekhi, jaise ki maine kaha, bass likha aur yahan post kar diya, mujhe ek do jagah aur bhi behtar karne ki gunjaish nazar aati hai.

Umeed hai agli nazm yaa fir ghazal aap ko pasand aaygi .. (agar kuch fursat ke pal mile).
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