nazdikyon ke faasle -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: December 24, 2008, 03:11:42 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 22, 2008, 01:29:03 PM

Yunhi besabab na phira karo Koi shaam ghar bhi raha karo,.
Wo ghazal ki sachi kitab hay Usay chupke chupke parha karo,.

Koi haath bhi na milayega jo galay milo gay tapaak se,
Ye naye mizaaj ka shehr hay zara faslay se mila karo...

Ahmed Faraaz

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 22, 2008, 01:30:28 PM

Kon daita hay umar bhar ka sahara FARAZ..
Log to Janazay me bhi kandhay badaltey rehtey hain...

Ahmed Faraaz

Nice sharing Jaanasheen Bhai


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Re: nazdikyon ke faasle

«Reply #16 on: December 30, 2008, 10:10:11 PM »

Shukriya,.


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«Reply #17 on: December 30, 2008, 10:12:00 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 22, 2008, 12:47:40 PM

pooja ji,sada k tarah aapne ek baar fir is kaushish ki taareef ki,jiska main shukrguzaar hu.aap ki khaas baat yeh hein,ki rachna maamooli bhee ho to bhee aap taareefon ke pul baandh himmaatein badhaati rehti hein.

Aap ka jawaab khoob bhaaya,aap bhee badhai ki patra hein.

shukaria Prateek ji!!


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«Reply #18 on: December 30, 2008, 10:12:16 PM »

Good work lil bro


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«Reply #19 on: December 31, 2008, 01:48:06 AM »

bahut khoob Applause


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Re: nazdikyon ke faasle

«Reply #20 on: January 01, 2009, 02:07:25 PM »

Shukriya,.


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Re: nazdikyon ke faasle

«Reply #21 on: April 19, 2010, 11:45:45 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 21, 2008, 07:05:16 AM

Main ruka to wo chale, main uga to wo dhale
Aankhen faad faad ke dekhe maine, nazdikiyon ke faasle!

Garmjoshi se dur koson, raingtey se yeh silsile
Barf jaise thande nikle,nazdikiyon ke faasle!

Mun shithil,kamzor rishtey,chahre ka rung kaise khile?
Taazi-khuli saanso pe bandish,nazdikiyon ke faasle!

Zindgi ki umra mein,mil jaate hein,kuch shaks bure,kuch log bhale
Na dosti- na dushmani se, nazdikiyon ke faasle

Shokhiyaa unki mur gayi ,na hum rahe ub munchaale
Bezubaa aur beasar se, nazdikiyon ke faasle

Haasil hi kya thaa, kiska gila aur mujhko kya khale
Nukeele naakhon jaisi kharonchey,nazdikiyon ke faasle!~

________Prateek

Waah Waah Waah...

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Prateekji..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaat!!!Har lafz Dil Ko Chuuta Hua..

Bahut Hi Ache..


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Re: nazdikyon ke faasle

«Reply #22 on: April 19, 2010, 11:46:51 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 21, 2008, 09:23:13 PM

wah wah wah, kaya baat hai prateek ji, ek ek shabd teekha, ek ek shabd dard main dooba zindagi ki suchaio ko bayan karta hua.. apki is kavita ko padte waqat jo do line man main aai wo yah hai:

Faaslein aise bhi hoge, yah kabhi socha na tha
samne baitha tha mere aor wo MERA na tha (nm)

janati hu apki kavita main kuch aor roop se nazdiki ke faslon ke baare kaha gaya hai... kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu, shayad apko pasand ayye

hai ek he chat ke niche, magar tu mujhse anjaan main tujhse anjaan
naam jurra hai tera mera, magar dilo main na ab ek dooje ke liye koi armaan

mere ansoo tujhko lage drama, tere ahsaaso se main ab anjaan
khamoshi teri meri main, ghar na jaane kab se ho gaya sunsaan

jhoothi muskaan jamane ke liye, dil main uthe dard ghamasaan
chah kar bhi na kahe kuch ab hum ek dooje se, pyar lafz se ho gaye anjaan

hai ek he chat ke niche, magar tu mujhse anjaan main tujhse anjaan
naam jurra hai tera mera, magar dilo main na ab ek dooje ke liye koi armaan

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..


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Re: nazdikyon ke faasle

«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2012, 09:29:15 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 21, 2008, 07:05:16 AM

Prateek Ji kaash Kuch Aisa Ho ke Aap Phir Yoindia Vaps Laut Aaye..Aaj Aap Ki Rachnayen padhne Ka bahut Mann Ho Aaya..U r one of my most fav Poet...


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