qurBaton mein faaSlaa bhi zarooRee hai,.......

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«Reply #15 on: April 25, 2013, 03:24:14 PM »
reallyvery nice Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: April 25, 2013, 03:28:04 PM »
bahut khoob laaiba jee

yun safar  bhi kat hi jaataa lekin jaanaa
raastey mein qaAflaa bhi zarooRee hay


bohat shukria aapkaa mkv ji,..........
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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2013, 03:54:41 PM »
very nice line
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #18 on: April 25, 2013, 04:48:41 PM »


dil pe ghum kaa aaBlaa bhi zaooRee hay
ish.q mein ik karBalaa bhi zarooRee hay

iss muhabbat ko  haraa rakhna ho gar toh
qurBaton mein faaslaa bhi zarooRee hay

yun safar  bhi kat hi jaataa lekin jaanaa
raastey mein qaAflaa bhi zarooRee hay

dil se  dil  kaa  raabtaa  rakhna gar ho to,
baa.t  kehnaa baRmalaa bhi za rooree hay
 
gar muhabbat ko nibhaa naa hy to dil men
yaa.d kaa ik silSilaa bhi za roo ree hay,..


nice,ma'am
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«Reply #19 on: April 25, 2013, 06:46:03 PM »
Laibaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob aur umdaa gazal kahi hai aik se badhkar aik gazab ke ashaar rahe hai jee... bade hi khoob umdaa ... Usual Smile


Is khoobsurat gazal par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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laaiba
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«Reply #20 on: April 25, 2013, 07:24:31 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
       
  Bahut achchi ghazal hai..............
bohat shukria aapkaa,...........
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laaiba
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«Reply #21 on: April 25, 2013, 07:26:01 PM »
wah wah kya khoob! Usual Smile
bohat shukria,............
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laaiba
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«Reply #22 on: April 25, 2013, 11:21:31 PM »
just excellent ek rau bhee
thnku sir Usual Smile
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laaiba
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«Reply #23 on: April 25, 2013, 11:22:18 PM »
Bohat Khub!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bohat shukria,..........
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laaiba
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«Reply #24 on: April 25, 2013, 11:23:49 PM »
Applause
 Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

waah waah waah waah, laajawaab ghazal, kya she'r nikaale haiN Laaiba jee, maza aa gaya. In ash'aar ka to jawaab nahiN-

Iss mohabbat ko haraa rakhna ho gar to
QurbatoN  meiN  faasla   bhi  zaroori  hai

YuN  safar  bhi  kat  hi  jaata  lekin jaana
Raastey  meiN   qaaflaa   bhi   zaroori hai


YuN hi likhte rahiye aur YO pe aate rahiye. Meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye.
bohat bohat shukria enayat hai aapkee iftikhar ji
rau ke liye b shukria,.........
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«Reply #25 on: April 25, 2013, 11:25:12 PM »
bahut khoob peshkash hai laaiba ji... bahut khushi huyi aap ki peshkash ko padh kar kuch naya padhne ko mila... aise hi likhte rahiye...

Intezar !


bohat bohat shukria aapkaa,............
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«Reply #26 on: April 25, 2013, 11:45:53 PM »
Applause Applause :clap:bhut khub ji
shukria aapkaa,..........
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«Reply #27 on: April 25, 2013, 11:46:21 PM »
reallyvery nice Applause Applause
bohat bohat shukria,...........
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laaiba
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«Reply #28 on: April 25, 2013, 11:46:55 PM »
very nice line
bohat shukria,
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laaiba
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«Reply #29 on: April 25, 2013, 11:47:22 PM »
nice,ma'am
thnx ,..........
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