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by Anushka on June 14, 2006, 04:03:04 PM
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ranjana
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«Reply #15 on: June 15, 2006, 03:29:32 PM »
shukriya Rajbir and Anu...............

kabhi kisi nishaan se kabhi kisi hadase se mila hai koi
jab dekhe hamne unko apne saath chalne ke liye
toh reit per pade kadamo ke nishaan dikhta hai har koi
chala thaa woh ban ke mera humsafar meri raho mein
per aaj meri veeran jindagi ka na koi caravaan hai
AUR NA HAI MANZIL KOI........................
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #16 on: June 15, 2006, 03:58:12 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
shukriya Rajbir and Anu...............

kabhi kisi nishaan se kabhi kisi hadase se mila hai koi
jab dekhe hamne unko apne saath chalne ke liye
toh reit per pade kadamo ke nishaan dikhta hai har koi
chala thaa woh ban ke mera humsafar meri raho mein
per aaj meri veeran jindagi ka na koi caravaan hai
AUR NA HAI MANZIL KOI........................


Na Manzilein Na manzar......
Aur na hee mahobbat ka Karvaan hai koi......

Sirf ek Garm raigistaan ki ret hai......
Bhatakta raha main paaglon ki tarah par yahan na mila koi.......!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: June 15, 2006, 04:03:21 PM »
aaj is bedard duniya mein mohabbat nibhta hai bhala kaun
ek hota hai jara sa dard mohabbat  ka is ko ab bhala chipta hai kaun
karte hain fariyaad bhi aaj sahil ke kinare sagar se........
ki hamre pade nishano ko apne kadamo se bhala mitata hai kaun.....
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Anushka
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«Reply #18 on: June 16, 2006, 06:42:13 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Jab Naam mitaana he hai mera.....
Toh yoon baar baar ret pe ise likhti kyu ho.....

Jab nahi Dard tumhe mujhse bichadne ka.....
Toh ro ro ke aankhen apni Sujaati kyu ho......

Karta tha jab bhi main tumse apni mahobbat ka Izhaar......
Tum kehti thi bikta hai Pyar yahan yeh hai Mahobbat ka Bazaar.....

Ab jab tumhe khud par nahi bharosa.....
Toh Parayeon ko apna bananti kyu ho......

Nahi Mahobbat pe yakeen......
Toh raah pe dekh mujhe NaZrein jhukati kyu ho....!!!!!!
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Wah kya baat hai Gaurav..... jaazbaat bahut hi masboot hai!..

Mitanay ke liyeh na likha thaa naam tumhara Is Ret Per....
Likha thaa apnay dil ko tasali ke liyeh..
Key abi bhi  hai tu  nazdik  meray kehii isi Ret me...

Bichardnay ka Gum to tab thaa
jab thukraya tumnay.. hameh Isi Ret per..
Yeh kehker ke koi Ehmiyat nei hai hamarii.. aap kay dil meh..
Ab yeh jo Dard deya hai tumnay...kaiseh mitayeh is dil koh?
Chahah bhi to na mit seka yeh meray dil sey..

Rotay they hum akelay meh.. barishoo meh... Isi Ret per
Takay Na dekh seka koi humay... yeh ask bahatey hua..
royaa karenge aap bhi isii terah
aTakaa kahi jo aap kaa dil bhii merii tarah

Ab to ankhoo nay  be saath chod diyaa..
ab ask bahaiyeh kis liyeh..
ab yunn jaan gavanaa kis liyeh...  Isi ret per..

Mohabaat ka izhaar kia tumnay.. Yeh kehker..
"Hum bhi hai Mohabaat key Kheridaar Is Bazaar meh"!
Yehi Parayoon nay semjhaya is Nadaan ko..
nehi hai koi Yeh Pyaar Ki Muraat ....belay Insaan ho!
yeh to hai.. Bas Ek Hakikat......

Isi Ret Per mitaa di hamnay yeh chahaat
Mitaa dii sath humnay apni Mohabaat..
isi Ret Per....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #19 on: June 16, 2006, 07:28:23 AM »
Anush

Mashallah ! kya badhiya likha hai !

Keep it up kudiye !

Ranju, Gaurav--->Good company to Anush !

Rajbir
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Sonu
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«Reply #20 on: June 16, 2006, 09:59:00 AM »
bulbul u r most welcome... bahuta hi sohna likhia hia kudey likhdi reh...

 
Quote from: "Anushka"
Thank you ASonu and Rajbir... with your support...  :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2006, 10:00:09 AM »
sabhi dostu ney bahut acha likha hai bulbul....ranju sis... gaurav or sabhi dosto ney bahut acha likha hai.... yeo hi likhtey rahuw with wonderful spirts
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ranjana
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«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2006, 10:01:13 AM »
bahot khub Anu ............Shukriya Rajbir ............... Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #23 on: June 16, 2006, 10:04:00 AM »



Reth mey hum ghar banatey nahi pani key lehro mey behey jata hia..
dil ab hum legatey nahi ahkhu sey ashku ka samendar behey jata hia..
hum unko bhul patey nahi  hai
esleay shisheyjeysa dil humara her pyar kerney valey ko dekh ker chakna chor hu jata hai ...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #24 on: June 17, 2006, 02:43:30 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai Gaurav..... jaazbaat bahut hi masboot hai!..

Mitanay ke liyeh na likha thaa naam tumhara Is Ret Per....
Likha thaa apnay dil ko tasali ke liyeh..
Key abi bhi hai tu nazdik meray kehii isi Ret me...

Bichardnay ka Gum to tab thaa
jab thukraya tumnay.. hameh Isi Ret per..
Yeh kehker ke koi Ehmiyat nei hai hamarii.. aap kay dil meh..
Ab yeh jo Dard deya hai tumnay...kaiseh mitayeh is dil koh?
Chahah bhi to na mit seka yeh meray dil sey..

Rotay they hum akelay meh.. barishoo meh... Isi Ret per
Takay Na dekh seka koi humay... yeh ask bahatey hua..
royaa karenge aap bhi isii terah
aTakaa kahi jo aap kaa dil bhii merii tarah

Ab to ankhoo nay be saath chod diyaa..
ab ask bahaiyeh kis liyeh..
ab yunn jaan gavanaa kis liyeh... Isi ret per..

Mohabaat ka izhaar kia tumnay.. Yeh kehker..
"Hum bhi hai Mohabaat key Kheridaar Is Bazaar meh"!
Yehi Parayoon nay semjhaya is Nadaan ko..
nehi hai koi Yeh Pyaar Ki Muraat ....belay Insaan ho!
yeh to hai.. Bas Ek Hakikat......

Isi Ret Per mitaa di hamnay yeh chahaat
Mitaa dii sath humnay apni Mohabaat..
isi Ret Per....



Kya baat hai.....Superb Reply Anu..... :razz:

Likhi jo tune Sada apne Dil ki.....
Ankhein meri bharr aayi hai.....

Kyu hai tu Juda usse.....
Kyu tune apni Banzar parchayi banayi hai.....

Dil kehta hai mera Mahobbat ka Gulistaan tera phir sajega......
Karegi Sajda tera harr Khushi tu jo chahegi woh milega......

Raahat ke unn palon me tum hume na bhool jana.....
Khade hai hum akele Raigistaan me hume bhi apne saath le jaana......

Hum hai MuSafir ek hee Raah ke toh Raah se kya Darna......
MaNzil milegi hume tum bas mujh par Vishwas or Dil me Hausla rakhna.......!!!!!!!!!!
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Anushka
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«Reply #25 on: June 18, 2006, 05:54:47 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
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Wah kya baat hai Gaurav..... jaazbaat bahut hi masboot hai!..

Mitanay ke liyeh na likha thaa naam tumhara Is Ret Per....
Likha thaa apnay dil ko tasali ke liyeh..
Key abi bhi hai tu nazdik meray kehii isi Ret me...

Bichardnay ka Gum to tab thaa
jab thukraya tumnay.. hameh Isi Ret per..
Yeh kehker ke koi Ehmiyat nei hai hamarii.. aap kay dil meh..
Ab yeh jo Dard deya hai tumnay...kaiseh mitayeh is dil koh?
Chahah bhi to na mit seka yeh meray dil sey..

Rotay they hum akelay meh.. barishoo meh... Isi Ret per
Takay Na dekh seka koi humay... yeh ask bahatey hua..
royaa karenge aap bhi isii terah
aTakaa kahi jo aap kaa dil bhii merii tarah

Ab to ankhoo nay be saath chod diyaa..
ab ask bahaiyeh kis liyeh..
ab yunn jaan gavanaa kis liyeh... Isi ret per..

Mohabaat ka izhaar kia tumnay.. Yeh kehker..
"Hum bhi hai Mohabaat key Kheridaar Is Bazaar meh"!
Yehi Parayoon nay semjhaya is Nadaan ko..
nehi hai koi Yeh Pyaar Ki Muraat ....belay Insaan ho!
yeh to hai.. Bas Ek Hakikat......

Isi Ret Per mitaa di hamnay yeh chahaat
Mitaa dii sath humnay apni Mohabaat..
isi Ret Per....



Kya baat hai.....Superb Reply Anu..... :razz:

Likhi jo tune Sada apne Dil ki.....
Ankhein meri bharr aayi hai.....

Kyu hai tu Juda usse.....
Kyu tune apni Banzar parchayi banayi hai.....

Dil kehta hai mera Mahobbat ka Gulistaan tera phir sajega......
Karegi Sajda tera harr Khushi tu jo chahegi woh milega......

Raahat ke unn palon me tum hume na bhool jana.....
Khade hai hum akele Raigistaan me hume bhi apne saath le jaana......

Hum hai MuSafir ek hee Raah ke toh Raah se kya Darna......
MaNzil milegi hume tum bas mujh par Vishwas or Dil me Hausla rakhna.......!!!!!!!!!!


Gaurav Thanx ... chelo ab iska jawab yeh hai...

Yeh lo fir seh Dil Ka Hausla rakh liya
Phir seh tum par  Vishwas kerliya
Likhay geh hum fir ek baar naam tumhara
Isi Ret Per.....Sembhal ker rekhna na mita dena ab isko..

Fir seh sejai geh woh sapnay  humaray..
Na kerna judah hamay kebi aap say..
Utahalena hamay apni baho meh senam
Chupalena hamay apni negaho meh janeman

Yuhi Sajda meh hum hai teray intezaar meh meray humsafar..
jaisay chod ker geye they hamay Isi Ret per...
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ranjana
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«Reply #26 on: June 18, 2006, 08:20:01 AM »
too gud Anu N Gaurav.......................bahut sundar likha  Usual Smile
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #27 on: June 18, 2006, 09:15:26 AM »
Thnx a lot Ranju.....tumne nahi likha kuch


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Yeh lo fir seh Dil Ka Hausla rakh liya
Phir seh tum par Vishwas kerliya
Likhay geh hum fir ek baar naam tumhara
Isi Ret Per.....Sembhal ker rekhna na mita dena ab isko..

Fir seh sejai geh woh sapnay humaray..
Na kerna judah hamay kebi aap say..
Utahalena hamay apni baho meh senam
Chupalena hamay apni negaho meh janeman

Yuhi Sajda meh hum hai teray intezaar meh meray humsafar..
jaisay chod ker geye they hamay Isi Ret per...


Kya jawaab dia hai sach me bahut accha likha Anu

Na Chorenge tumhe bhatakne ko is Raigistaan me......
Likh denge ab Naam tumhara Swarn Akshar se apni Mahobbat ki Dastaan me......

Dekh ke tujhko ab yeh Ret bhi barf ho jayegi.....
Jo barstaati thi ab talak garam Shole.....
Ab woh tujhe sirr jhuka ke Adaab kar jayegi......

Utha ke tujhe apni Bahon me Jannat ki seir kara laon......
Shayad ab na aye woh Pal tere binn ab me ek pal bhi tanha na eh paon........!!!!!!!!!
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Anushka
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«Reply #28 on: June 18, 2006, 03:35:33 PM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Thnx a lot Ranju.....tumne nahi likha kuch


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Yeh lo fir seh Dil Ka Hausla rakh liya
Phir seh tum par Vishwas kerliya
Likhay geh hum fir ek baar naam tumhara
Isi Ret Per.....Sembhal ker rekhna na mita dena ab isko..

Fir seh sejai geh woh sapnay humaray..
Na kerna judah hamay kebi aap say..
Utahalena hamay apni baho meh senam
Chupalena hamay apni negaho meh janeman

Yuhi Sajda meh hum hai teray intezaar meh meray humsafar..
jaisay chod ker geye they hamay Isi Ret per...


Kya jawaab dia hai sach me bahut accha likha Anu

Na Chorenge tumhe bhatakne ko is Raigistaan me......
Likh denge ab Naam tumhara Swarn Akshar se apni Mahobbat ki Dastaan me......

Dekh ke tujhko ab yeh Ret bhi barf ho jayegi.....
Jo barstaati thi ab talak garam Shole.....
Ab woh tujhe sirr jhuka ke Adaab kar jayegi......

Utha ke tujhe apni Bahon me Jannat ki seir kara laon......
Shayad ab na aye woh Pal tere binn ab me ek pal bhi tanha na eh paon........!!!!!!!!!


Wah  Ranjana bahut khub..Gaurav... beautiful.....

Apni nazro meh besaker na gerana hamay
Jis terah Raigistaan ki Ret...uski Pehchaan
Is terah tum meray dil ki Pehchaan...

Samaat lu gi meh yeh khushi
yea ek pal benaker apni ankho ka kaajal..
Bas ab Intezaar hai teray meray Saajan
Aaja kay ab meh odhlu tumhay banaker apna Aanchal..

Isi Ret Per hai hum negahay beechaii
Likh rahay hai Tumhara Naam....
Key ab ajauu.......
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #29 on: June 18, 2006, 03:58:15 PM »
Marvalous Reply Annu......

Aaa bhar loon tujhe apni Baahon me.....
Tere binn ab Nikalta hai mera Dumm......

Aaj jao meri Jindagi mein banke bahaar......
teri kasam yeh Pyar na hoga kamm.......

Kardo kuch baat aise jisse harr Chahane wale ka Dil machal jaye.....
Ho jaye baaki sab raatein poori bas ek Milan ki raat hamari bann jaye......

Na hai ab khawaab koi bacha jab se tum aayi ho......
Raigistaan ki ret bhi jab chooti hai mujhe lagta hai jaise lee tumne kahin door lee angdai ho........!!!!!!!!!!
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