Samajh lena ke wo hoon main

by angel4u on July 10, 2008, 02:44:21 AM
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #30 on: July 13, 2008, 05:25:39 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on July 13, 2008, 05:07:46 PM
Applause Applause Applause
hum to bus isi ke talab gaar the zanab..wah

Chaliye teen me se koi ek band to pasand aaya aap ko.

bohut bohut shukriya, asal baat ye he ke mein shoqeen hun ghazal ka nazam mere bas ki baat nahi.  DOH

Aap ki muhabbat bhari farmaaish par ek koshish ki thi or khushi he aap ko pasand aai.
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angel4u
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«Reply #31 on: July 14, 2008, 02:39:57 AM »
Bahut khoob...

Usual Smile

Sawan ki raaton mein jab,
boondein tere jazbaaton ko chhue,
halki si ranjish mein
dil dhadkano ke safar ko nikle,
bhiga de agar dilki banjar zameen ko,
baarish ki kuch anchhui boondein,
samajh lena wo hoon main...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #32 on: July 14, 2008, 02:49:55 AM »
wow sab ne bahut accha likha hai...
Angle, Sayyid Randeri bhaiya, Sanjeev bhaiya, Prateek jee... wow ne
bahut hi accha likha hai... Applause  Applause
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Sonia01
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«Reply #33 on: July 14, 2008, 02:55:38 AM »
Mohabbat main jeena Mohabbat main marna
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh maine likha hai.
Agar mai Mohabbat tumari dil main jagadiya
Dil mein mai sirf nazar aau toh
Samaj lena ke wo Hu Mai...
Sirf mai  tongue3
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #34 on: July 14, 2008, 03:07:22 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on July 12, 2008, 01:49:28 PM
Please aisa na kahein, har ek lafz umda hai.
aapne yahan apne keemti lafz rakhe isse badi baat koi nahi,
Thanks a lot...
and wonderful.

shukriya angel ji,dil rakhne ka.

Prateek
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #35 on: July 14, 2008, 03:10:43 AM »
[quote author=angel4u link=topic=30472.msg782144#msg782144 date=12158

Kabhi suna suna sa jo lagne lage zindagi ka kaarvaan,
Manzilon ka pata to ho, raasta na ho par uske darmiyaan,
reh guzar achanak sa koi mil jaaye un raahon mein,
samajh lena wo hoon main....
[/quote]


bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan hein ,angel ji...aapka yeh thread dard se shuru ho kpoori tarh khummar bun chuka he...mubaarak ho is tabdili ka.....kaash sabke saath aisa ho!

Prateek
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #36 on: July 14, 2008, 03:15:00 AM »

randeri sahab,

bahut umda aur behtareen likha he hazoor aapne.dil ko bhaa gaya.

Prateek
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angel4u
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«Reply #37 on: July 14, 2008, 02:08:32 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 14, 2008, 03:07:22 AM
shukriya angel ji,dil rakhne ka.

Prateek

You are most welcome prateek Ji...
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angel4u
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«Reply #38 on: July 14, 2008, 02:09:59 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 14, 2008, 03:10:43 AM
[quote author=angel4u link=topic=30472.msg782144#msg782144 date=12158

Kabhi suna suna sa jo lagne lage zindagi ka kaarvaan,
Manzilon ka pata to ho, raasta na ho par uske darmiyaan,
reh guzar achanak sa koi mil jaaye un raahon mein,
samajh lena wo hoon main....



bahut khoobsurat panktiyaan hein ,angel ji...aapka yeh thread dard se shuru ho kpoori tarh khummar bun chuka he...mubaarak ho is tabdili ka.....kaash sabke saath aisa ho!

Prateek

Hmmmm...
bahut bahut shukriya pasand karne ke liye,
aap jiase umda shayaron se daad mil jaye wo bhi kabhi kabhi hi hota hia Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #39 on: July 14, 2008, 02:10:22 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 14, 2008, 02:55:38 AM
Mohabbat main jeena Mohabbat main marna
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh maine likha hai.
Agar mai Mohabbat tumari dil main jagadiya
Dil mein mai sirf nazar aau toh
Samaj lena ke wo Hu Mai...
Sirf mai  tongue3



Too cute sonia Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #40 on: July 14, 2008, 02:13:05 PM »

Dard ki chadar mein simte ashqon ke jo moti,
dil pighle zarra zarra aahon ki shammaon se,
Koi khayal mera aake teri aahon mein sama jaaye,
ek moti koi ashq ka teri palkon mein jad jaaye,
samajh lena wo hoon main...
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #41 on: July 15, 2008, 06:03:21 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 14, 2008, 02:49:55 AM
wow sab ne bahut accha likha hai...
Angle, Sayyid Randeri bhaiya, Sanjeev bhaiya, Prateek jee... wow ne
bahut hi accha likha hai... Applause  Applause

Bohut Bohut shukriya sonia.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #42 on: July 15, 2008, 06:09:38 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on July 14, 2008, 02:55:38 AM
Mohabbat main jeena Mohabbat main marna
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh maine likha hai.
Agar mai Mohabbat tumari dil main jagadiya
Dil mein mai sirf nazar aau toh
Samaj lena ke wo Hu Mai...
Sirf mai  tongue3



Bohut khoob ek aap hi ki kami thi, is mehfil mein.
"Kya rang-e-mehfil he dil daram"
isi tarah likhte rahiye jaan-e-aalam.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #43 on: July 15, 2008, 06:14:16 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 14, 2008, 03:15:00 AM

randeri sahab,

bahut umda aur behtareen likha he hazoor aapne.dil ko bhaa gaya.

Prateek

Aap ki nawaazish he prateek ji.

+++++++++++++   tongue3
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #44 on: July 15, 2008, 06:19:41 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on July 14, 2008, 02:13:05 PM

Dard ki chadar mein simte ashqon ke jo moti,
dil pighle zarra zarra aahon ki shammaon se,
Koi khayal mera aake teri aahon mein sama jaaye,
ek moti koi ashq ka teri palkon mein jad jaaye,
samajh lena wo hoon main...

Umda likha he aap ne, phir wahi dard wahi gham, bohut hi umda.  Applause
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