Tanhaiyaan bhi naraaz hain !!!

by Ricky on April 17, 2007, 07:00:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 26, 2007, 06:43:48 PM »
Thankyou Nidhi !
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«Reply #16 on: April 29, 2007, 05:58:57 PM »
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Tanhaiyaan bhi naa mayassar ki hum jee bhar k role,
Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN bhar bhar ke role,

Ansoon jo bahe sare-rah, kaise hum unhe chippayen..
Naraaz hai tanhaiyaan ki kaise hum ansuoN ko manaye ..

Beh jo gaye toh mushkil hoga duniya ko samjhana,
Mil jo jaye hume tanhai phir tuh ae ansooN zaroor aana ..

Lekin hai pabandi in ansuoN pe ki aise hi naa chale aana
Zarra tadapane dena humare jazbo ko tab tum aana !!

Chalo ae shayar ab nikle hum dhoondne tanhai k ab role..
Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN bhar bhar ke role


hi ricky bahut khub likha hai ...apki nazm padi to kuch khyaal uthey hai dil mein jo is tarah hai...

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad aayi teri to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye
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«Reply #17 on: September 19, 2007, 03:20:32 PM »
Sakhi you have compiled very nice words.  I liked them.
9/10

And thank for your words on my poem .
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«Reply #18 on: September 19, 2007, 03:35:19 PM »
Bahut ricky bhai..bahut acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #19 on: September 19, 2007, 05:03:38 PM »
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After many days.. now about Tanhaiyaan..


    Tanhaiyaan bhi naa mayassar ki hum jee bhar k role,
        Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role,

        Ansoon jo bahe sare-rah, kaise hum unhe chippayen..
        Naraaz hai tanhaiyaan ki kaise hum ansuoN ko manaye ..

        Beh jo gaye toh mushkil hoga duniya ko samjhana,
        Mil jo jaye hume tanhai phir tuh ae ansooN zaroor aana ..

        Lekin hai pabandi in ansuoN pe ki aise hi naa chale aana
        Zarra tadapane dena humare jazbo ko tab tum aana !!

        Chalo ae shayar ab nikle hum dhoondne tanhai k ab role..
        Manale gham thora sa, k ansuoN  bhar bhar ke role    [/list]


    Wonderful creation Mr Ricky.... esp last line... very good.

    Neend nahi aankhon main tabiyat hai gabrayee
    Pareshani main karvat hai sansein hai garmayee
    Maut ki dhadkano main likh rahi hu nagme
    Jaag rahi hai pal pal mai aur meri tanhayee..

    Roja    [/color]
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    «Reply #20 on: September 19, 2007, 06:13:42 PM »
    Thank you Ishpreet for your appreciation.

    Roja, thankyou too and you lines are good too.
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    «Reply #21 on: September 19, 2007, 07:57:26 PM »
    BAHUT KHOOB RICKYJI..BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..
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    «Reply #22 on: September 21, 2007, 02:26:03 AM »
    Quote from: "Ricky"

    Roja, thankyou too and you lines are good too.


    Thanks Mr Ricky...

    Unki wafa se naam mera badnami main aa gaya
    Afsana ban gaya mere pyar ki ruswayee

    Malik mere zindagi ko baksho toda sukoon
    Jeene ka gam bhog rahi .... Mai aur Meri Tanhayee..!!
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