Teri chahat mujhe kahan le aayi....

by nidhi_yadein on January 29, 2005, 05:15:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 31, 2005, 05:54:37 AM »
Teri Dosti ne Diya sukoon itna,
Ke tere baad koi bewafai kare bhi,
To kar jaane de,
Tujhe karni hi ho bewafai to is tarha karna,
Ke tere baad aur koi bewafa na lage.
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«Reply #16 on: January 31, 2005, 09:00:25 AM »
Thanx JHl.............and very well written.
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«Reply #17 on: January 31, 2005, 09:30:31 AM »
"Pyar me tere jeeti rahi main,
 intezar mein tere zinda rahi main,
 ek baar mehsoos kar k to dekho,
 hanste-hanste ashk peeti gayi main,
 khoon k ansoo rulaye hain tumne,
 phir bhi khamosh rahi main,
 main bhi nahin jaanti hoon,
 kyon itna kuch sehti hoon,
 janti hoon ye main acchi tarah,
 tumhe pyar nahi mujhse zara,
 phir bhi ek aas liye baithi hoon,
 nadani,bewakufi,tumhi batao,
 .........ise main kya kahoon,
 pyar ki har had dekhi hai maine,
 sab kuch mehsoos kiya hai,
 bas ek pal tumhare saath,
 poori ho jayegi jeevan ki saans."
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«Reply #18 on: January 31, 2005, 09:54:45 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Pyar me tere jeeti rahi main,
 intezar mein tere zinda rahi main,
 ek baar mehsoos kar k to dekho,
 hanste-hanste ashk peeti gayi main,
 khoon k ansoo rulaye hain tumne,
 phir bhi khamosh rahi main,
 main bhi nahin jaanti hoon,
 kyon itna kuch sehti hoon,
 janti hoon ye main acchi tarah,
 tumhe pyar nahi mujhse zara,
 phir bhi ek aas liye baithi hoon,
 nadani,bewakufi,tumhi batao,
 .........ise main kya kahoon,
 pyar ki har had dekhi hai maine,
 sab kuch mehsoos kiya hai,
 bas ek pal tumhare saath,
 poori ho jayegi jeevan ki saans."


nice nidhs Puzzled ! keep up your good work. u write very well.. everytime im in.................................... tea........
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«Reply #19 on: January 31, 2005, 10:15:09 AM »
Thank u heart........but i dont want u all 2 b in tears.
So.......cheer up!!!!!!! Winking
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«Reply #20 on: January 31, 2005, 10:20:30 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Thank you heart........but i dont want you all 2 b in tears.
So.......cheer up!!!!!!! Winking


achcha theek hai Puzzled !
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«Reply #21 on: January 31, 2005, 10:31:01 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Pyar me tere jeeti rahi main,
 intezar mein tere zinda rahi main,
 ek baar mehsoos kar k to dekho,
 hanste-hanste ashk peeti gayi main,
 khoon k ansoo rulaye hain tumne,
 phir bhi khamosh rahi main,
 main bhi nahin jaanti hoon,
 kyon itna kuch sehti hoon,
 janti hoon ye main acchi tarah,
 tumhe pyar nahi mujhse zara,
 phir bhi ek aas liye baithi hoon,
 nadani,bewakufi,tumhi batao,
 .........ise main kya kahoon,
 pyar ki har had dekhi hai maine,
 sab kuch mehsoos kiya hai,
 bas ek pal tumhare saath,
 poori ho jayegi jeevan ki saans."



wow wow nidhi....................just hate...........  bahot khoob.........

Tha us ko bhi gila kisi ki bay wafai ka
Day ker gaya tha dard who mujh ko judai ka

Wada kiya tha usnay kay aongi main zaroor
Kehta raha main "jana nahi mujh say kabhi door...............................
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«Reply #22 on: January 31, 2005, 10:34:23 AM »
Thanx Waheed.............bohat khoob likha.......wonderful!!!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: January 31, 2005, 11:23:47 AM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Pyar me tere jeeti rahi main,
 intezar mein tere zinda rahi main,
 ek baar mehsoos kar k to dekho,
 hanste-hanste ashk peeti gayi main,
 khoon k ansoo rulaye hain tumne,
 phir bhi khamosh rahi main,
 main bhi nahin jaanti hoon,
 kyon itna kuch sehti hoon,
 janti hoon ye main acchi tarah,
 tumhe pyar nahi mujhse zara,
 phir bhi ek aas liye baithi hoon,
 nadani,bewakufi,tumhi batao,
 .........ise main kya kahoon,
 pyar ki har had dekhi hai maine,
 sab kuch mehsoos kiya hai,
 bas ek pal tumhare saath,
 poori ho jayegi jeevan ki saans."



wow wow nidhi....................just hate...........  bahot khoob.........

Tha us ko bhi gila kisi ki bay wafai ka
Day ker gaya tha dard who mujh ko judai ka

Wada kiya tha usnay kay aongi main zaroor
Kehta raha main "jana nahi mujh say kabhi door...............................


very nice nidhi, waheed, jhl

phir bhi chale gaye woh hume chhod kar
badi bedardi se keh diya usne hamara dil tod kar
kismat mein nahi sahyad main tumhari
jaate hue ek baar dekha bhi na usne muh mod kar.
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«Reply #24 on: February 01, 2005, 06:22:50 AM »
Thank you everyone and very nicely written by all..

Har baat samajhne ke liye nahi hoti,
Zindagi hamesha paane ke liye nahi hoti,
Yaad aksar aati hai aapki,
Par har yaad jatane ke liye nahi hoti...
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«Reply #25 on: February 01, 2005, 03:00:30 PM »
Thanx JHL and Tanha....aap dono ne bhi bohat accha likha. Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: February 01, 2005, 03:08:27 PM »
nice jhl
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«Reply #27 on: February 02, 2005, 07:46:17 AM »
Thank you once again...Pandit...Nidhiji...

Raaz dil ka dil me chhupate hai wo...
Samne aate hi nazre jhukate hai wo...
Baat karte nahi ya hoti nahi...
Par shukr hai jab bhi milte hai muskurate hai wo...
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«Reply #28 on: February 02, 2005, 11:19:19 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thank you once again...Pandit...Nidhiji...

Raaz dil ka dil me chhupate hai wo...
Samne aate hi nazre jhukate hai wo...
Baat karte nahi ya hoti nahi...
Par shukr hai jab bhi milte hai muskurate hai wo...


wah....kya baat hai JHL.

"Unki muskurahat se hi to chal rahi hain sansein hamari,
 unka deedar se hi to hai ye zindagi hamari.................,
 unke liye chahe kuch na ho keemat hamari,
 hamare liye sab kuch unhi ki yari."
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«Reply #29 on: February 03, 2005, 08:01:58 AM »
Nice one Nidhiji...
Nice reply...
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