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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #15 on: June 30, 2005, 05:52:27 PM »

You are most welcome Waheed bhai and thanks a lot Meena for appreciation ...

Jazbaton ka kalam leke doobo dete hai shahi mein,
Likh dete hai haale bayaan is kadar shayari mein,
Wada hai mera aapko chhuda lenge gum ki kaid se,
Hum to kya saare gawaahi denge aapki rihaai mein ...


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Meena

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«Reply #16 on: June 30, 2005, 05:57:27 PM »

wah wah JHL ji, kya khoob likha hai apne!!

gum me samundar me doob rahi hai meri kashti,
kinare pe kade hokar usko bachaoge kaise?

ankhon ka pani to kab ka sukh gaya,
mere gum ke ansowon apni ankhon se bahaoge kaise?

Khuda se mangti hoon tum jaise doston ke liye kushhiyon ke phool,
yakeenan kabul hogi meri dua to gum ke zakhm tum paoge kaise?


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #17 on: June 30, 2005, 06:02:03 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

"us raat tumari khwahisein pairon tale kisne raundin
maathe per ek sikan tumhare aur badha gaya
apni nakaam hasraton ko bhulaane kahan jaogi "Meena"
kismat mein jo likha usper jor nahi chalta kisi ka................"

wah, waheed kamal ka likha hai!!!

jante hai hum, ke hum kismat ko hara nahin sakhte,
gum pal rahe hai jo seene me, kisi ko bata nahin sakhte,
Toot gayi Khuda se bhi vishwas ki doori,
Kafir ban ke aab Khuda ko sata nahin sakhte!!

wah wah...... jhl................excellent reply meena.............. bahot khoob......

zarooraton mere sar ko jhuka diya tha warna
mere lahoo mein khuddariyan aaj bhi hai
hum to khuda ki aajmayis maan kar andheron mein safar karte rahe
mere dil ke har kone mera khuda aaj bhi hai ........


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Meena

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«Reply #18 on: June 30, 2005, 06:07:41 PM »

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just a mind blowing reply mundeya!!!!!! brillient!!!!!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #19 on: June 30, 2005, 06:07:55 PM »

Thanks a lot Waheed bhai ...
Excellent one Meena ...
Keep it up ...
This is for you ...

Tum to rahi ho sadaa se hamari ,
Phir kyu soch liya tum lagne lagogi gawaari Huh?

Chamak to aankhon me rahegi sadaa,
Ban kar reh jayenge aansu aankhon me tumhari ...


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Meena

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«Reply #20 on: June 30, 2005, 06:10:27 PM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Thanks a lot Waheed bhai ...
Excellent one Meena ...
Keep it up ...
This is for you ...

Tum to rahi ho sadaa se hamari ,
Phir kyu soch liya tum lagne lagogi gawaari Huh?

Chamak to aankhon me rahegi sadaa,
Ban kar reh jayenge aansu aankhon me tumhari ...


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«Reply #21 on: June 30, 2005, 06:10:35 PM »

wah waheed,meena ,JHL ,aisa lag raha hai national shayri work chal raha hai,all three of u have written mindblowing .Waheed bhi aaj bohat din baad special mood me dikh raha hai Winking


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Meena

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«Reply #22 on: June 30, 2005, 06:12:19 PM »

lol thank u thank u nidhi jaan, par tuamri bina mehefil me ronak nahin!!! waiting for ur shayari too kuddiye!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #23 on: June 30, 2005, 06:14:52 PM »

Thanks a lot Meena and Nidhi for your appreciation ...
And yes i am too with Meena ...
Waiting for your post dear ...
Ab baarish ke mausam mein shayari zyada achhi banti hai ...


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #24 on: June 30, 2005, 06:15:27 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wow wow aaj to mehfil mein bahot josh hai........ wonderfull ........jhl......aur meena.........

aap dono ke liye 2 line........

ghum ki teeson ko sah leta hoon main "Nidhi"
darta hoon kahin mere askon ki barish mein kahin shaher doob na jaaye


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Meena

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«Reply #25 on: June 30, 2005, 06:18:02 PM »

gud gud waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!! man gaye tumhe mundeya!!!!!!


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«Reply #26 on: June 30, 2005, 06:18:05 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

wah waheed,meena ,JHL ,aisa lag raha hai national shayri work chal raha hai,all three of you have written mindblowing .Waheed bhi aaj bohat din baad special mood me dikh raha hai Winking

thanx............ nidhi.................such boli ho.......... tongue3

aaj tum bhi likho.............main tumhara saath poora dunga........... tongue3


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«Reply #27 on: June 30, 2005, 06:18:24 PM »

Wah kya khoob kaha hai bhai ...
Sahi kaha aapne aaj mehfil mein wakahi josh hai ...


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«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2005, 06:29:23 PM »

aaj sab josh me hain but main nahi sad5

phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish karti hoon.

"Yeh hai kisi ke gam ka saaya,
ya meri badkismati ki maaya,
wo mera aaj hai paraaya,
saath jiska har pal nibhaaya,
usne kyun mujhe daaman chudaaya,
kyun pyar me dil aaj phir gaya thukraya."

continue guys.........all r going gr8 today Usual Smile


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Meena

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«Reply #29 on: June 30, 2005, 06:35:58 PM »

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww nidhi jaani!! :D

gum ke saye door hhojayenge Khuda ki roshni se door,
kal ayengi kushiyan aaj hai gumon me majboor,
aye Khuda aab to rehen kar de mujh badnaseeb pe,
yeh na ho jaan nikal jaye, gum me hokar chur chur!!


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