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Yahan mere ashqo'n ke samandar ka kinaara naa raha

by jianrangrej on April 19, 2008, 09:21:08 PM

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syednaami

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«Reply #15 on: April 27, 2008, 03:21:17 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 25, 2008, 12:47:53 AM

jianranrej ji,

kya baat he sarkaar,aapke bhee kayal ho gaye.bahut umda,bhut ziada umda.

syeednaami ji,

aapki saajish he yeh,ki bus sub lutf le aur mein akela jiski urdu bahut kamzor he woh vanchit reh jaaye itni zabardast nazm se.aapne jo kuch likha he aaj,fursat se gungunaiyega,khud pur bahut naaz hoga aapko,jaise mujhe he aap-pur.aapko kasht to hoga pur aap zarror shabdarth likhe,hume mehroom na rakhe.

Prateek
(mujhe yo india ka sabse badhiya panna-yaani chaaro kavitayen ek se budh kar ek lagi-aap dono ko dhero mubarakbaad)

Sir Prateek jee, naaraz mat hon, hum aap ke vishay par bhi kaarya ka aayojan karenge.
Atah, aap thoda samaya den to.

Dhanyavaad.

S Naami


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