**~** Yeh Bepanaah Mohabbat **~**

by _Vicky_ on September 25, 2010, 05:12:28 PM
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«Reply #30 on: October 03, 2010, 07:41:11 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on October 02, 2010, 04:35:05 PM
Ek koshish iss nadan ki taraf se..

Barbaad mera jahan karke woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Jo kal tak meri duniya ko roshan karta tha,
Mere sapnon tak ko be-rang kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Izhar-e-mohobat mujse aur baahon main kisi aur kay rehta tha,
Aisi bhi wafa nibha kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Apna sab kuch jis kay naam kar diya ‘Khamosh’,
Rulane wali yaadon ka tofa de kay woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Kabhi mera dil bhi ehsaason se bhara tha; aj pathar sa hai,
‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Awesome.. Fantastic... Bahoot Bahoot khoob Rahim bro.. Iss peshkas mea bahoot gehra tanz nazar aaya... bahoot Khoob!!!
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dead heart
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«Reply #31 on: October 03, 2010, 09:10:27 AM »
Shukriya Divya di..! Teh dil se shukriya..!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #32 on: October 03, 2010, 02:55:16 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on October 02, 2010, 04:35:05 PM
Ek koshish iss nadan ki taraf se..

Barbaad mera jahan karke woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Jo kal tak meri duniya ko roshan karta tha,
Mere sapnon tak ko be-rang kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Izhar-e-mohobat mujse aur baahon main kisi aur kay rehta tha,
Aisi bhi wafa nibha kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Apna sab kuch jis kay naam kar diya ‘Khamosh’,
Rulane wali yaadon ka tofa de kay woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Kabhi mera dil bhi ehsaason se bhara tha; aj pathar sa hai,
‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Wah Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Dil Ke Taar Ched Diye aapke Likhe Alfaazon ne.. Gehraai liye Hue Aapke Likhe Yeh Ehasaas Bahut Khoooob Rahe.. Har lafz Dard Bayan kar raha hai Bhai.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause



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dead heart
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«Reply #33 on: October 03, 2010, 03:14:11 PM »
Shukriya Vikas bhaijan..!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #34 on: October 03, 2010, 05:21:07 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on September 27, 2010, 03:35:40 AM
MashaAllah Kya khoob Likha hai... Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Vicky.. Sach Mea Dil Mea utar gai yea Baat....

Bahoot Bahoot Umda.. !!! Yuhin Likhte rehna.. Par dard Mein nahi.. !!!!

Behad Shukriya Divya Ji.. Aapki Taareef Humesha Dil Khush kar deti hai..  notworthy notworthy

Dard Kabhi Dil Se Aankhon Me Utar aata hai Divya.. Aur Bassss...........





**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #35 on: October 03, 2010, 07:43:03 PM »
Iss behan ko rulaa diya bhai...

Sach hai ye, beetta huwa waqt marham nai banta,
Pyaar mudr jaye tho dard hota hai, paas ho tho zakham nahi banta.

Koi chohdr jata hai sanam ko, koi tikk k ishq barsaata hai,
Jeena insaan ko, bas pyaar hee sihkaata hai.

Dunya k dastooron me lipatt k, koi khauf zada palkaen jhuk jati hain
Jo dunyaawee khayal k liye beech raha haath chuhdraale, wo sanam nahi banta...


Very well written bhaijaan. Khush rahiye
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«Reply #36 on: October 03, 2010, 08:09:36 PM »
Quote from: anjaan dharkan on October 03, 2010, 07:43:03 PM
Iss behan ko rulaa diya bhai...

Sach hai ye, beetta huwa waqt marham nai banta,
Pyaar mudr jaye tho dard hota hai, paas ho tho zakham nahi banta.

Koi chohdr jata hai sanam ko, koi tikk k ishq barsaata hai,
Jeena insaan ko, bas pyaar hee sihkaata hai.

Dunya k dastooron me lipatt k, koi khauf zada palkaen jhuk jati hain
Jo dunyaawee khayal k liye beech raha haath chuhdraale, wo sanam nahi banta...


Very well written bhaijaan. Khush rahiye

Wah kya baat hai jee..Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne..Maza agaya parr kar.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #37 on: October 06, 2010, 02:49:08 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 27, 2010, 04:37:41 AM
Bahut hi umda mann ji bahut khoob ji waqai apke alfaz sidha dil pe asar kar gaye aur ek yad bhi taaza kar gaye..sach mein jis shakhs se kabhi bepanah mhbt ki ho apna har ehsas banta ho use achanak kisi aur ki zindgi ka savera ban dekhe bahut taklif hoti hai per dil kahan kisi ki sunta hai..apke alfaz bahut ache lage.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile

Behad Shukriya Geet Ji.. Aapne Mere Jazzbaaton ko samjha aur Mehasoos Kiya uske Liye Main Tahe dil se Aapka Shukra Guzaar hoon..  notworthy notworthy notworthy




**~** Mann **~**
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diya786
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«Reply #38 on: October 10, 2010, 11:11:21 AM »
main kya kahoon aapse.......bohat khoob likha hai aapne....
dil se aapke liye dua nikal rahi hai aur aapki tareef mein lafz kahin kho se rahe'in hain...
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #39 on: October 14, 2010, 03:23:02 PM »
Quote from: Dhaval on September 27, 2010, 06:22:56 AM
Vicky bhaa'ii:

namaste!

bahot kam koShiShe.n aisii hotee hai jo paRhne waalo.n ki aaNKho.n ko nam kar jaatee hai.. aapki koShiSh ne in aaNkho.n ko nam kar diyaa.. dil jeet liyaa aapke har lafz ne!
aage bhee yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n... dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval

Behad Shukriya Dhaval bhai.. aapki Taareef Humesha sukoon Pahunchane wali hoti hai.. aapne meri in alfaazon ko waqt Diya uske liye Tahe dil se ek baar Phir Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #40 on: November 03, 2010, 05:43:53 PM »
Quote from: Rahi2001 on September 27, 2010, 10:03:45 AM
nice oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

mannnnn jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

misssssssss u allllllllllllllllllll

Rahi Ji Tahe Dil Se Aapka Behad Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy



**~** Mann **~**
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #41 on: November 06, 2010, 05:52:42 PM »
Quote from: medha_jain3 on September 27, 2010, 11:23:10 AM
Namste Vemp Usual Smile

Achchha kalaam likha hai aapne, Anaam ji ne jo kaha hai thoda us par gaur kare.n.

Duao.n ke sath
Medha Usual Smile

Tahe Dil Se Shukriya Bhootni Ji.. Hahaha..  notworthy notworthy



**~** Mann **~**
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haan
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«Reply #42 on: November 06, 2010, 05:56:38 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB MANN JI KAYA BAAT HAI ....ANDAAZ NIRALA HAI AAPKA ..
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«Reply #43 on: November 28, 2010, 07:36:25 AM »
Quote from: Mann on September 25, 2010, 05:12:28 PM
Ek Roz Dekha Tha Unhe.. Kisi Aur Ke Naam Ka Sindoor Maang Me Bhare Hue... Jo Kabhi Humse Ishq Kiya karte the.. Qasame Khate the humaara Ho Jane Ki.. Aur Aaj Kisi Gair Ke Ban Baithe Hain.. To Kya hua.. Ishq to Hum Aaj Bhi Unse Bepanah Karte Hain.. Marte Hain aaj Bhi Unpe.. Basss Yehi Ehasaas Lafzon me utaarne ki Koshish ki Hai.. Ummid Hai aapko Pasand aayegi..!!



Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...

Kabhi Jeete Hain Uska Naam Lekar Lamha-Lamha,
To Kabhi Yaadon Me Uski, Zaar-Zaar Marte Hain...

Aaj Dekha Kisi Gair Sang, To Yakeen Hua Is Dil Ko,
Ki Ab Wo Mohabbat Ban, Kisi Aur Par Baraste Hain...

Kahane Ko To Mera Hai, Par Hum Saaya Kisi Aur Ka,
Isi Khayal Ko Dil Me Le Usse Nafrat Bhi Karte Hain,

Par Yeh Mohabbat Bhi Badi Ajeeb Cheez Hai Yaaron,
Ki Milne Ko Usi Se Phir Bhi, Baar-Baar Taraste Hain...

Kal Khwaab Me Mile, To Bas Lipat Ro Pade Mujhse,
Larazte Labon Se Kaha, Hum Tum Pe Hi Marte Hain...

Phir Kaise Bhool Jaata Main, Us Ek Raat Ki Baat Ko,
Jo Khwaab Me Hi Sahi, Mere Hone Ko Machalte Hain....

Koi Ja Ke Kaha Do Mere Yaar Ko, Paigaam Is Dil Ka,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!



Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!!! love9 love9

**~** Mann **~**

Hota hai Mann Ji aisa bhi hota hai
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai
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«Reply #44 on: January 23, 2011, 07:51:56 AM »
Quote from: Mann on September 25, 2010, 05:12:28 PM

Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...

Kabhi Jeete Hain Uska Naam Lekar Lamha-Lamha,
To Kabhi Yaadon Me Uski, Zaar-Zaar Marte Hain...

Aaj Dekha Kisi Gair Sang, To Yakeen Hua Is Dil Ko,
Ki Ab Wo Mohabbat Ban, Kisi Aur Par Baraste Hain...

Kahane Ko To Mera Hai, Par Hum Saaya Kisi Aur Ka,
Isi Khayal Ko Dil Me Le Usse Nafrat Bhi Karte Hain,

Par Yeh Mohabbat Bhi Badi Ajeeb Cheez Hai Yaaron,
Ki Milne Ko Usi Se Phir Bhi, Baar-Baar Taraste Hain...

Kal Khwaab Me Mile, To Bas Lipat Ro Pade Mujhse,
Larazte Labon Se Kaha, Hum Tum Pe Hi Marte Hain...

Phir Kaise Bhool Jaata Main, Us Ek Raat Ki Baat Ko,
Jo Khwaab Me Hi Sahi, Mere Hone Ko Machalte Hain....

Koi Ja Ke Kaha Do Mere Yaar Ko, Paigaam Is Dil Ka,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!



Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!!! love9 love9




**~** Mann **~**

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Mann Ji !

Good Expression ... Very Nice Creation ...

Tahe dil se hazaaroN daad ... !  Applause Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhte rahen .. aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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