Zakham khane ki Adat

by Pooja on February 25, 2008, 03:22:16 PM
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«Reply #45 on: May 02, 2008, 04:35:47 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on May 02, 2008, 02:25:04 AM
Pooja ji aapka bhi jawaab nahiN......

Waah sayed saheb bahoot khoob.....Daad kabool kareiN dost..

harash


Buhat buhat shykriya janab hosla afzai ka, tah-e-dil se mashkoor.
Thanks
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«Reply #46 on: May 02, 2008, 04:48:37 PM »
bahoot bahoor shukaria Harash ji!!!

Sami ji bahoot he acha likha hai apne... apki kavita ko najar mai rakhte hue ek koshish:

Sapno ke mehal mai, sapne main he tum rahte ho
Haqiqat ki dunia main, kyun nahi yah sab kahte ho

Ghao lete ho apni he socho se her pal tum
Humari her nasihat ko, namak chidkna kahte ho

Humari her hansane ki koshish lage tumko ab jashan c
Khud ka dil dukha kar, humko bhi rulate rahte ho

Shikayat yah hai ki dard chupate ho humse
Aor Ilzaam yah ki hume he phir bewafa kahte ho

Her raah teri ayegi, meri he raahon main
Yah jaan kar bhi kyun raah badlte rahte ho

Sapno ke mehal mai, sapne main he tum rahte ho
Haqiqat ki dunia main, kyun nahi yah sab kahte ho
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syednaami
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«Reply #47 on: May 02, 2008, 06:05:12 PM »
Wah, wah excellent work.
Karam nawaazi ka shukriya, itna jaldi likhun aaj to nahin, inshaAllah jald.
Aap ne dil ko khush kar diya.
S Naami
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Pooja
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«Reply #48 on: May 02, 2008, 06:11:18 PM »
zahe naseeb notworthy apko jo yah asha'ar pasand aii!! tah-e-dil se mashkoor hu  tongue3.
 jawab ka intzaar rahega...

Uff urdu ke shabd copy kar ke likhein hai, phir bhi aise lag rahahai jaise poori urdu ki classs laga li ho.. DOH   
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«Reply #49 on: May 02, 2008, 06:52:50 PM »
wah!wah!Bahut khoob naami saab..bahut ache pooja..


Yaad Na Karoge To Bhula Bhi Na Paaoge,
Humse Juda Hokar Do Kadam Chal Bhi Na Paooge....

 Saath Guzra Hua Har Ek Pal
Nazro Ke Saamne Aakar Tehar Sa Jaayega!!!
Meri Yaadon Ko Dil Se Kabhi Mita Bhi Na Paaoge...

Tanhai Mein Bhi Meri Maujoodgi Mehsoos Hogi Tujhe,
Mujhe Khud Se Juda Kabhi Kar Bhi Na Paaoge...

majboori aur halaat insaan ko jhinjodkar rakh deti hai
insaan Bebas hai "khwaish" Waqt se kabhi lad bhi na paaoge.....

Zakhm Khaakar Bi Ab muskurane ki aadat si ho gayi hai hume,
ab aankh se nikla hua aansu aur
chehre ki muskaan ek se lagti hai mujhe
in mein koi fark kar bhi na paaoge

Yaad na karoge to bhula bhi na paaoge
humse juda hokar do kadam chal bhi na paaoge.....
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«Reply #50 on: May 02, 2008, 07:17:26 PM »
Wah s.naami khwaish & pooja ji behtareen likha he aap sab ne, is aajiz, nacheez, nakaarah ki daad qubool farmaen.
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«Reply #51 on: May 02, 2008, 08:30:10 PM »
bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!!!

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Sayyid ji!!

Kadam chale na chale tere sung
Yaadon main humari khud ko paoge
Najaro main na raho koi baat nahi
Dil ki dhadkan hamesha dhadkaoge!!!!
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«Reply #52 on: May 02, 2008, 09:33:47 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 02, 2008, 06:11:18 PM
zahe naseeb notworthy apko jo yah asha'ar pasand aii!! tah-e-dil se mashkoor hu  tongue3.
 jawab ka intzaar rahega...

Uff urdu ke shabd copy kar ke likhein hai, phir bhi aise lag rahahai jaise poori urdu ki classs laga li ho.. DOH   

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 02, 2008, 07:17:26 PM
Wah s.naami khwaish & pooja ji behtareen likha he aap sab ne, is aajiz, nacheez, nakaarah ki daad qubool farmaen.

Aap ne jis deedaadili se dad-o-tahseen bakhsi, aur hamari daad-khuwaahi ko zaib-o-zeenat se saraha.
Mamnoon wa mashkoor.
Khaaksaar Ahqar
Syed Naami
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«Reply #53 on: May 05, 2008, 02:05:02 PM »
dad-o-tahseen
khuwaahi
zaib-o-zeenat
Mamnoon wa mashkoor.
Khaaksaar Ahqar

Ab to lagta hai ki app jaanbujh kar aise shabd likhte hai jo humari samjh mai na ayye!!  BangHead BangHead
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«Reply #54 on: May 05, 2008, 03:35:51 PM »
dad-o-tahseen - Praise and appreciation
khuwaahi - Khwahish karne wala, wisher
zaib-o-zeenat - decor and beautification
Mamnoon wa mashkoor. Thankful, Grateful
Khaaksaar Ahqar - Humble person, Naacheez

Aisa nahin socho. Bas yun samjho kuchh sikhne ko mil jaata hai.
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«Reply #55 on: May 05, 2008, 03:42:53 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Sami ji!! magar baat agar pahli baar mai samjh aa jaaye to jayada acha lagta hai!!!
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«Reply #56 on: May 05, 2008, 03:50:04 PM »
Zakham khane ki adat ne hi rulaya hai
Warna kon zamane mai kisi ko dard de paaya hai

Mere hi pyar ne mujhko itna sataya hai
Warna kon dunia main kisi ko apna bana paaya hai

Dard le le kar bhi dard ki intihaan nahi hoti
Pooja kis pathar dil se tune yah dil lagaya hai

Zakham khane ki adat ne hi rulaya hai
Warna kon zamane mai kisi ko dard de paaya hai…….
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«Reply #57 on: May 05, 2008, 03:53:22 PM »
Zabardast, jo baat pehli baar samajh men ai woh insaan jald bhool jaata hai.

Achha likha hai.
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«Reply #58 on: May 05, 2008, 04:07:16 PM »
Shukaria Syednaami  ji!!
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«Reply #59 on: May 05, 2008, 07:36:21 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 03:50:04 PM
Zakham khane ki adat ne hi rulaya hai
Warna kon zamane mai kisi ko dard de paaya hai

Mere hi pyar ne mujhko itna sataya hai
Warna kon dunia main kisi ko apna bana paaya hai

Dard le le kar bhi dard ki intihaan nahi hoti
Pooja kis pathar dil se tune yah dil lagaya hai

Zakham khane ki adat ne hi rulaya hai
Warna kon zamane mai kisi ko dard de paaya hai…….


Bahut Bahut khoob pooja.. Applause Applause
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