Zinda Jala Raha Hai Koi

by Meena on April 10, 2005, 04:33:17 PM
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #15 on: April 14, 2005, 06:09:46 AM »
Superb Meenaji ...
Bahut hi achha likha hai ...
Keep it up ...
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Meena
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«Reply #16 on: April 14, 2005, 03:22:06 PM »
thank u.........ji...............thank u............

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2005, 01:19:38 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
thank you.........ji...............thank you............

 :D

ur welcome ji......welcome......Usual Smile
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2005, 01:37:11 AM »
wada wafa krna nahin ata hum ko
dil ko jalana nahin ata hum ko
pyar krna nahin ata hum ko
kisi ko rulana nahin ata hum ko
kisi ko tadpan nahin ata hum ko
kisi ki yaad emin khona nahin ata hum ko
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2005, 06:21:18 AM »
It is a superb one Naved ...
Keep writing ...


Kabhi aah lab pe machal gayi,
Kabhi ashq aankh se dhal gaye,
Wo tumhare ghum ke chirag hai,
Kabhi bujh gaye kabhi jal gaye,
Main khayal-o-khwaab ki mehfile,
Naa bakadr-e-shauk sajaa sakaa,
Tumhari ek nazar ke saath hi,
Mere sab iraade badal gaye ...(nm)
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Devdas_online
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«Reply #20 on: April 15, 2005, 10:23:19 AM »
very nice Meena...

suraj ki aag, aur ishq ka matlab hai ek,
agar bharosa nahin, tu ishq karke dekh
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Meena
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«Reply #21 on: April 15, 2005, 03:47:47 PM »
Quote from: "Devdas_online"
very nice Meena...

suraj ki aag, aur ishq ka matlab hai ek,
agar bharosa nahin, tu ishq karke dekh


shukriya ji shukriya!!!

 :D

guzar chuke hai ishq me us mukam se,
ke nafrat se hogayi hai mohabbat ke nam se!! (NM)
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«Reply #22 on: April 15, 2005, 07:43:08 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


kamal ka likti ho :wink:
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hifrnd20
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«Reply #23 on: April 16, 2005, 04:54:48 AM »
Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

really nice wording meena ji,
ye shabd to dil ko chhoo gaye..(-:=
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Meena
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«Reply #24 on: April 16, 2005, 11:02:57 AM »
thank u MD  :wink:  and thanx friend ji!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #25 on: April 17, 2005, 12:06:48 PM »
Good jab all ...
Keep it up ...


Muskuraate hai to bijliyaan giraa dete hai,
Baat karte hai to deewana bana dete hai,
Husn waalo ki nazar ki kam nahi qayamat se,
Aag paani mein nigaaho se lagaa dete hai ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #26 on: April 18, 2005, 01:31:45 AM »
Meena, JHL & hifrnd..... nice ones......

Mehroomiyon Ke Daur Mein Kinn Hasraton Ke Sath
Hum Patharon Ke Dil Mein Khuda Dhoondte Rahe..
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«Reply #27 on: April 18, 2005, 03:04:27 AM »
Hum Patharon Ke Dil Mein Khuda Dhoondte Rahe..
bewafoon mein hum wafa dhoondte rahe........
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«Reply #28 on: April 18, 2005, 05:18:13 AM »
wah,bohat khoob,sabhi ne bohat accha likha hai...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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«Reply #29 on: April 18, 2005, 09:44:05 AM »
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wah,bohat khoob,sabhi ne bohat accha likha hai...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
aur aap ney kuch bhi nahin likha hai nidhi dear. y?
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