औरत की क्या हस्ती है

by mistufer on August 28, 2009, 02:47:19 PM
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #15 on: August 29, 2009, 07:12:05 AM »
ur words aur really true nira jii ,,bahut aacha likha hai aapnae...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #16 on: August 29, 2009, 08:05:39 AM »
Nira,

Bahut he umdaa rachna !  notworthy notworthy notworthy

Yoon he likhti raho ! Applause Applause Applause

Hats off to you!
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«Reply #17 on: August 29, 2009, 11:37:16 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira ji ,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: August 30, 2009, 12:14:29 PM »
Har Lafz Sach Ka Aena Sa Hai!!!

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Niraji..Aapke iss kavita Ki tareef mein Kuch keh sake,mere Alfaazo mein Utna Dam nahi,Pa Dil ko Chu Gayi Yeh kavita..

Bahut bahut Khoob Niraji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: August 31, 2009, 04:59:57 AM »
Waah Nira di... Mindblowing creation... Aurat ke Upar aapki iss Rachna wakai bahoot Bahoot Umda hai.. Bahoot Khoob!

sophi sis

aapki saharna ki shukrguzaar hoon
take care
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«Reply #20 on: August 31, 2009, 05:02:33 AM »
Nira didi:

jSk..!


kaise hai.n aap?

baRe dinoN baad aaj aapki koShiSh paRhne kaa mauqaa milaa.. aapki har rachanaa haMeShaa aik naye roop meiN hotii hai.. baRii hi gehrA'ii se aap har baat keh jaate hai.n! aapne beHteriN koShiSh peSh kii hay bazm meN.. liKhate raheN.. KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


dhaval jrk

bahut bahut shukriya meri rachna ke ehsaas tum thak paunche
yumhi aate raha karo bhai
nira di
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2009, 05:04:20 AM »
Wah wah Kya baat Hai Nira Didi.. Ek Succhi Kahani Likh di aapne Is Sansaar Ki.. Bahut Vedna Hai aapki Is Rachna Me.. Har Lafz Apna Dard Bayan kar raha hai.. Ab Kya Kahun is rachna Ki Taareef Me.. Lafz Alfaaz Sab Kam Padh gaye Hain mere paas...!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Basssssss Yeh Taaliyaan Hi Hain Mere paas..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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vicky
thanks bhai itne ache lafazon mein tumne saraya hai meri rachna ko, yunhi saath dete rahna.
nira
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«Reply #22 on: August 31, 2009, 05:05:25 AM »
thanx for sharing smardia ji:thumbsup:

shukriya ek baar phir se
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«Reply #23 on: August 31, 2009, 05:06:30 AM »
ur words aur really true nira jii ,,bahut aacha likha hai aapnae...

komalpreet ji

aapki saharna ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon'
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«Reply #24 on: August 31, 2009, 05:08:17 AM »
Nira,

Bahut he umdaa rachna !  notworthy notworthy notworthy

Yoon he likhti raho ! Applause Applause Applause

Hats off to you!

rajbir

tumhe yahan dekh acha laga,
thanks tumhe rachna pasand aayi
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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2009, 05:08:57 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira ji ,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

madhu ji
bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: August 31, 2009, 05:11:18 AM »
Har Lafz Sach Ka Aena Sa Hai!!!

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Niraji..Aapke iss kavita Ki tareef mein Kuch keh sake,mere Alfaazo mein Utna Dam nahi,Pa Dil ko Chu Gayi Yeh kavita..

Bahut bahut Khoob Niraji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


aapne naa kuch kahne par bhi
meri rachna ko khamosh shabdon se dilse saraya hai
shukriya dost, apna khayal rakhiye
nira
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«Reply #27 on: May 21, 2010, 05:18:36 AM »
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«Reply #28 on: January 17, 2012, 11:13:55 AM »
औरत की क्या हस्ती है
चीज़ वोः कितनी सस्ती है
 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
कहीं वोः दिल की रानी है
कहीं बस एक कहानी है
 Applause Applause
कितनी बेबस दिखती है
जब बाज़ार में बिकती है
 tearyeyed tearyeyed

कहीं वोः दुर्गा माता है
इस संसार की दाता है
 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

कहीं वोः घर की दासी है
नादिया हो कर प्यासी है
 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2

सब के ताने सहती है
फिर भी वोः चुप रहती है
 sad10 sad10 sad10

सरस्वती का अवतार है वोः
शिक्षा का भंडार है वोः
 Applause Applause Applause

किस्मत उसपे हंसती है
जब शिक्षा को तरसती है
 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2

क्या क्या ज़ुल्म वोः सहती है
फिर भी हंसती रहती है
 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
कहीं सजा यह पाती है
गर्ब में मारी जाती है
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
कहीं वोः माता काली है
कहीं वोः एक सवाली है
 icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
खाली हाथों आने पर
दान-दहेज़ ना लाने पर
 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5
ज़ुल्म यह धाया जाता है
उसको जलाया जाता है
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
नीर नयन से बरसे है वोः
मुस्कान को तरसे है
 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5
खुशियों को तरस्ती है
औरत की क्या हस्ती है
 sad10 sad10


bahut khoobsurati se aurat ke stithi ko batayaa hai
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«Reply #29 on: January 17, 2012, 06:22:54 PM »
nice
औरत की क्या हस्ती है
चीज़ वोः कितनी सस्ती है

कहीं वोः दिल की रानी है
कहीं बस एक कहानी है

कितनी बेबस दिखती है
जब बाज़ार में बिकती है

कहीं वोः दुर्गा माता है
इस संसार की दाता है

कहीं वोः घर की दासी है
नादिया हो कर प्यासी है

सब के ताने सहती है
फिर भी वोः चुप रहती है

सरस्वती का अवतार है वोः
शिक्षा का भंडार है वोः

किस्मत उसपे हंसती है
जब शिक्षा को तरसती है

क्या क्या ज़ुल्म वोः सहती है
फिर भी हंसती रहती है

कहीं सजा यह पाती है
गर्ब में मारी जाती है

कहीं वोः माता काली है
कहीं वोः एक सवाली है

खाली हाथों आने पर
दान-दहेज़ ना लाने पर

ज़ुल्म यह धाया जाता है
उसको जलाया जाता है

नीर नयन से बरसे है वोः
मुस्कान को तरसे है

खुशियों को तरस्ती है
औरत की क्या हस्ती है

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