Ajj Ki Dunia Main

by Pooja on February 06, 2009, 01:11:53 AM
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«Reply #45 on: February 23, 2009, 05:06:52 PM »
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nice feelings

Thanks Chitralsony!!
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«Reply #46 on: February 23, 2009, 05:10:33 PM »
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pooja ji...bahut sundar rachna.aachi lay ke saath,acche shabdon ke meljol ek behtareen peshkash bun gayi aapki. aapne dil se likhi hai yeh kavita, aapko is rachna pur meri bhee badhai!!


( yeh jo aapki khoj hai is kavita mein-itni saari qualities....ek hi shaks mein dhoond rahi aap?.....jo bhee aisa vyakti hoga...itna perfect...usey imperferction ka anand kaise haasil hoga!!)

Prateek ji apke comments aa jaate hai to such main lagta hai ki kuch likha gaya!!! Mujhe bahoota cha laga ki apne meri likhi kavita ko para aor apko pasand aai!! Bahoot bahoot shukaria!!

(Prateek ji... apke sawal ka jawab likh kar delete kar diya!! Phir kabhi sahi Usual Smile )
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«Reply #47 on: February 23, 2009, 05:11:08 PM »
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"Aaj Ki Dunia Mai Bhi, Maan Ko Samman Milta Hai
Sochoo Chahey Kuch Bhi, Per Acchey Issano ko
Hamesa Hi Samman Milta hai, Aaj Ki Dunia main bhi.."
 

bahoot sahi kaha apne!!
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«Reply #48 on: February 23, 2009, 05:11:28 PM »
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Applause

Bohat khoob Pooja...


Thanks Honey!!
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«Reply #49 on: February 23, 2009, 05:12:19 PM »
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wowwww....i have nth to sayy
i am in love with your poem...
girl you have talent..
you will go farr in live,,
your poem had really inspired me..
keep on writting like that..
 

bahoot bahoot shukaria Rani ji.. Apke comments hamesha he bahoot motivated hote hai!!
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«Reply #50 on: February 23, 2009, 05:12:48 PM »
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Aaj ki duniya ki tasweer dihkaaun tumhe,
Hakikat k jaha se ru-b-ru karaun tumhe,
Mili hai thokaron se bhari har raah,
Kis-kis musafir ki baat bataun tumhe..


Nice one Pandit ji!!
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«Reply #51 on: February 23, 2009, 06:25:35 PM »
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Ek shandaar rachna....PAURUSH KO chamkane wali sabhi qualities ka jikra kar diya hai aapne..... Applause Applause Applause
Is yug k purush se kuchh jayada he apeksha kar li hai aapna....
Etihaas mai ek chehra nazar aata hai..."PRITHVIRAJ CHAUHAAN"
Jis mai ye sab gun thye...
Ab wo nasal kahan....wo DNA BACHA HE NAHI lagta hai...
Chehra ho sheetal sa, man main Agan rakhta ho
Nayan ho pyar se bharpoor, nigah main Manjil rakhta ho

Baitha ho sabse piche chahe, sir per Kafan rakhta ho
Chal main na ho chahe shokhi, kadamo main Tufaan rakhta ho

Dil main raj, karmo main janoon, aisa Porush rakhta ho
Ek hath main Kangan-Bindia, doosre main Shamshan rakhta ho

Her roop main, her morr per, insaan ka jo maan rakhta ho
Jhuk jaaye jis ke samne sir, Ajj Ki Dunia Main koi to yah Samman rakhta ho!!

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«Reply #52 on: February 28, 2009, 02:56:08 PM »
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Prateek ji apke comments aa jaate hai to such main lagta hai ki kuch likha gaya!!! Mujhe bahoota cha laga ki apne meri likhi kavita ko para aor apko pasand aai!! Bahoot bahoot shukaria!!

(Prateek ji... apke sawal ka jawab likh kar delete kar diya!! Phir kabhi sahi Usual Smile )


Likhe aksharon ko mita dene se haal-e-dil kabhi badalta nahi
Kuch sehma sehma hoga zaroor, pur aisa nahi ki machalta nahi.


Dimaagi fitraton ko chhodd kabhi dil ki tarango se kaam le dekho
Dekhe kaun woh shaksh hoga fir,paav jiska fisalta nahi.


Fir kabhi ki ummed se e dost aaj ki haqeeqatein behtar
Raaz jo gehra hota hai, aksar pehlu mein sambhalta nahi


Sawaalon ke jawaabon ki yahan hai khwaishein kisko
Baatein uthata hu mehaz parakhne ko,yaar woh kaun sa hoga jo pighalta nahi


Samundar ke ishaaron ko  maajhee ne khoob hai jaana
Chaar toofaan kya dekhe, lehron ki hulchalon se dil ub behalta nahi

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«Reply #53 on: February 28, 2009, 03:01:46 PM »
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Likhe aksharon ko mita dene se haal-e-dil kabhi badalta nahi
Kuch sehma sehma hoga zaroor, pur aisa nahi ki machalta nahi.


Dimaagi fitraton ko chhodd kabhi dil ki tarango se kaam le dekho
Dekhe kaun woh shaksh hoga fir,paav jiska fisalta nahi.


Fir kabhi ki ummed se e dost aaj ki haqeeqatein behtar
Raaz jo gehra hota hai, aksar pehlu mein sambhalta nahi


Sawaalon ke jawaabon ki yahan hai khwaishein kisko
Baatein uthata hu mehaz parakhne ko,yaar woh kaun sa hoga jo pighalta nahi


Samundar ke ishaaron ko  maajhee ne khoob hai jaana
Chaar toofaan kya dekhe, lehron ki hulchalon se dil ub behalta nahi

Wah wah kya baat hai. Bahut acche  Applause
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«Reply #54 on: February 28, 2009, 03:24:55 PM »
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Bohat Achche Prateek Mardia Ji,.
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«Reply #55 on: February 28, 2009, 06:52:05 PM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai. Bahut acche  Applause

Saraahana ke liye shukriya roja ji.
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«Reply #56 on: February 28, 2009, 06:54:03 PM »
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Bohat Achche Prateek Mardia Ji,.

aapka bahut shukriya jaansheen ji.
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«Reply #57 on: March 01, 2009, 06:40:27 AM »
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Likhe aksharon ko mita dene se haal-e-dil kabhi badalta nahi
Kuch sehma sehma hoga zaroor, pur aisa nahi ki machalta nahi.


Dimaagi fitraton ko chhodd kabhi dil ki tarango se kaam le dekho
Dekhe kaun woh shaksh hoga fir,paav jiska fisalta nahi.


Fir kabhi ki ummed se e dost aaj ki haqeeqatein behtar
Raaz jo gehra hota hai, aksar pehlu mein sambhalta nahi


Sawaalon ke jawaabon ki yahan hai khwaishein kisko
Baatein uthata hu mehaz parakhne ko,yaar woh kaun sa hoga jo pighalta nahi


Samundar ke ishaaron ko  maajhee ne khoob hai jaana
Chaar toofaan kya dekhe, lehron ki hulchalon se dil ub behalta nahi



Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Prateekji..Kya Jawaab Likha Hai Aapne.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #58 on: March 02, 2009, 07:40:58 PM »
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Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Prateekji..Kya Jawaab Likha Hai Aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

shukria, khwaish ji,aapki nazre padi yahan,to rachna bhee safal hui.aabhaar.
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«Reply #59 on: March 02, 2009, 10:02:46 PM »
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Likhe aksharon ko mita dene se haal-e-dil kabhi badalta nahi
Kuch sehma sehma hoga zaroor, pur aisa nahi ki machalta nahi.


Dimaagi fitraton ko chhodd kabhi dil ki tarango se kaam le dekho
Dekhe kaun woh shaksh hoga fir,paav jiska fisalta nahi.


Fir kabhi ki ummed se e dost aaj ki haqeeqatein behtar
Raaz jo gehra hota hai, aksar pehlu mein sambhalta nahi


Sawaalon ke jawaabon ki yahan hai khwaishein kisko
Baatein uthata hu mehaz parakhne ko,yaar woh kaun sa hoga jo pighalta nahi


Samundar ke ishaaron ko  maajhee ne khoob hai jaana
Chaar toofaan kya dekhe, lehron ki hulchalon se dil ub behalta nahi



Agai, bahut he accha likha hai aapne..
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